Competition: [House Satele Shan] The Compass of Reason, Chapter 1 - POETRY

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[House Satele Shan] The Compass of Reason, Chapter 1 - POETRY

This is a sub-competition in The Compass of Reason, Chapter 1

Our hosts, the Seherob Harakoans, have been practicing sentient sacrifice for centuries. It is unlikely that they will give up the practice, but a skilled diplomat could possibly persuade them. Use all resources available to you, but you may not use violence against them!

Sometimes fewer words can speak the loudest. Let the Force flow through you and write a haiku which could move the Harakoans to abandon the practice of sacrificing other Harakoans (and colonists) to their gods. Remember, a haiku has 5-7-5 syllable pattern (any deviation will result in disqualification). Entries will be graded based on how moving Solari and I find them, and only the top three will be sent to the governing council of Seher.

Competition Information
Organized by
Shadow Zebina, Master Windos
Running time
2015-04-13 until 2015-04-27 (15 days)
Target Unit
House Satele Shan
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
5 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
Member
Aerwin Tribwell-Urr
Textual submission

Soul
by Kaira Rohana 10057

Life very precious
Killing brings Death to your Soul
Bring forth life not death

Placement
1st place
Member
Lieutenant Colonel Narman Losa
Textual submission

You kill your own kind
To appease your deity
It is a false god

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Corvus Corax
Member
Corvus Corax
Textual submission

We live together
Killing anyone is bad
Please stop before it's --

Placement
3rd place
4th place
Aaleeshah
Member
Aaleeshah
Submission
Aaleeshah opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
4th place