For a moment panic overwhelmed Selika as she fought against the grip that had closed around her neck. Her lungs cried out for air as darkness began to intrude on the edges of her vision. Struggling, she forced her mind back towards reason.
No, this is what you wanted, she thought to herself.
The primal need for breath was then pushed back by the more rational, calculating part of her mind. Unable to draw in air, she was still able to draw on the Force. Imposing what limited control over her body she possessed allowed Selika to push the burning sensation down below the level of conscious awareness, freeing her to channel a torrent of Force energy through her body. The energy centered itself on her empty left hand, palm open and facing towards her opponent. With as much focus as Turel was devoting to squeezing the life out of her, he was too slow to react to the bolt of purple-tinged electricity that leapt from her palm to strike him square in the chest.
The force of the blast ripped through the Jedi, scorching the front of his shirt and igniting momentary flare-ups as the alcohol that had soaked his clothing burned away quickly. The electricity spasmed through his muscles, dropping him to the ground as his legs were momentarily unable to support him. Just as quickly, the pressure holding Selika in the air evaporated and she dropped awkwardly to her knees, her free hand on the ground to give her support. Pushing herself to her feet, Selika coughed as she gulped air into her lungs.
“Even when you let the anger out, you’re still focused,” she croaked, moving to stand over Turel.
The Jedi moaned quietly, his left hand twitching near where his lightsaber had fallen to the ground. If Selika’s goal had been killing the Jedi, she could have easily done so now. That was not the point of the exercise, though, just as she could have killed him with his weapon earlier at the inn.
“Sergeant Connor? Connor, come in!” an electronically filtered voice issued forth from the body of the slain constable.
Selika stepped over to where the woman had fallen, her strides becoming more sure as she regained more and more strength. The blonde member of the local watch laid face down on the dusty floor, and Selika pushed her over onto her back with a foot. The commlink clipped to the woman’s belt continued to project the dispatcher's voice, still demanding a status report. Selika bent down and pulled the commlink from her belt.
“Your Sergeant is dead,” Selika reported coldly.
“What? Who is this?” the controller spat back.
Not inclined to provide an answer, Selika tossed the commlink over to where Turel was beginning to pull himself together. Looking around, she headed for the sturdy shelving units on the other side of the warehouse floor that rose nearly eight meters to the ceiling above. A short climb found her at the top of the shelves where she ignited her lightsaber with a snap-hiss. A trio of cuts slashed a triangular opening through the roof, moonlight pouring in through the hole. Sparing a quick glance over her shoulder, Selika saw that Turel was now pulling himself to his feet, his lightsaber once again in his hand. A Force-aided leap carried her up through the newly carved ceiling exit and dropped her a bit unevenly on the roof. Knowing that Turel would be quick to follow, Selika moved away from the opening into the warehouse below.
Pushing her sphere of Force awareness out as far as she could, she momentarily struggled to sense what she sought. Then, just barely, she felt it. They were approaching from the west, low along the horizon. Knowing that they would be here shortly, Selika smiled. Now she just needed to buy some time with Turel.
As if summoned by her thoughts, Turel leapt into view. His jump was a big higher, his landing far more steady than what Selika had managed. It seemed like the anger and pain that were flowing through the dark haired Jedi had not dulled his connection with the Force.
“I’m not going to let you get away,” Turel growled. “Yours will be the only other death tonight.”
“Then I guess we’ll have to settle this this the messy way,” Selika said, sighing theatrically.
Before Turel could speak again, Selika lashed out with a telekinetic blow that caught Turel across the face in the same manner as a backhand fist. His head snapped to the side, but returned to glare at Selika with even more animosity than had been present a moment before.
Spitting blood to the ground from a split lip, the Jedi smiled. “That’s what I was hoping for.”
He exploded into motion, charging across the roof with his saber swinging at Selika’s head. Moving quickly, Selika deflected the blow away with her own weapon. The ferocity of Turel’s assault was not served well by his chosen form, the more tentative attacks of Soresu’s defense-minded school left him unable to fully exploit the strength and power behind his wild attacks. Playing for time herself, Selika was content to play right into Form III’s preference for survival over quick victory. Passing up chances to take the initiative and attack, Selika was quite content to play to a stalemate. The mounting anger in Turel’s eyes showed his frustration with his apparent impotence, unable to exploit mistakes in aggressive attacks to break through his enemies defenses.
“Do you plan to fight here forever?” Turel asked mockingly.
“No,” Selika said as their blades came together and locked once more. “I was just waiting for another player to join our little game.”
Turel’s eyes narrowed with suspicion a mere heartbeat before the air was filled with the whine of repulsors. The two combatants were bathed in a wash of near blinding light as the police gunship caught them both in the beam of its searchlights. The markings on the side of the craft were not those of Shadow Company; they were instead those of the local watch. As local law enforcement more experienced with breaking up bar fights than dealing with rampaging Sith, the watch were unprepared to deal with a threat of this magnitude.
The momentary distraction allowed Selika to push Turel away with the Force as she retreated across the rooftop to place some distance between her and the Guardian. Selika smiled wickedly as she saw the light of realization dawning on Turel’s face. Clawing at his belt, Turel raised the police commlink to his lips.
“Air unit 714, withdraw! This is a Jedi matter, withdraw from the area!” Turel screamed.
Selika could just make out the sound of the response over the sound of the hovering craft and the wind kicked up by its arrival. “Negative, Councilor. We have authority here.”
Selika smiled. The local law enforcement had reacted as predictably as ever to the death of one of their own. They weren’t going to allow some Jedi to stand between them and bringing the murderer to justice. Clipping her saber to her belt, she began to call the Force to her, holding its tendrils firmly. She wove it just as she had earlier, before she had thrown electricity at the Jedi that still stood against her.
She now saw that Turel knew exactly what she was doing, ready to toss her power not against him but at the police craft hovering above them. “Go on, Jedi. You know the only way to stop me,” she taunted. “You’ll have to kill me.”
Once again, Turel moved towards her. Once again, he raised his blade to strike. Selika raised no weapon to block his blow, the electricity that seemed nearly ready to leap from her hands held in check. Instead, she shifted the Force and projected some of that energy into the mind of her foe. Now, with Turel’s head clouded by rage and drink, Selika finally pushed her way in.
You’ll have to kill me, just like you did him
The words were accompanied by fear, a fear that clawed at the darkest reaches of Turel’s soul. Unbidden, his mind conjured up the image of the Odanite Padawan he had slain on the sands of Korriban, the look of betrayal forever frozen on his face as the lightsaber pierced his chest.
You call me a monster, Turel. But aren’t you a monster too?
The debilitating terror that clutched Turel’s heart stopped him dead for just a moment, but it was enough. Selika reached out with both hands and Force-driven electricity leapt from them to rip into the underside of the police speeder. Holding the torrent of energy for a number of seconds, Selika knew she was taxing herself. The results, however, were worth the effort.
The massive amount of electricity that ran through the repulsor systems on the vehicle’s underside rode the power conduits throughout the craft. Half of the repulsors failed as one of the craft’s generator impellers overloaded and seized. Smoke burst forth from the tail and the vehicle began to spin slowly and fall from the sky. Turel immediately dropped his weapon and reached out with the Force, trying to hold the gunship in the sky. Unable to focus, and without enough time, it was a futile effort. The gunship’s tail clipped the side of a building across the street, and it rolled over before violently slamming the transparisteel nose into the street. In less time than it would take to describe it, the vehicle’s sides expanded outward and burst as the aircraft dissolved into a fireball.
Turel dropped to his knees as he felt the violent death of all eight men the police gunship carried wash over him. Selika continued to exploit the opening she had found into his mind, stoking the twin fires of fear and rage that were warring within him.
“You thought that Keth Walsh distrusted you because of your betrayal?” Selika spoke softly, moving to stand just behind Turel. “He hated you because you dropped a shuttlecraft onto his cousin’s wife. You were a monster long before you joined with the Shadow Clan. You pretend to protect these people, to care. But all you bring is sorrow, pain, and death.”
The fire inside Turel was finally burning out of control, his rage and fear fueling it. Selika was quite pleased with herself for just a moment, but then Turel’s fist shot out and backhanded her across her face as her telekinetic blow had earlier. Unprepared for the force of the blow, Selika was driven back a number of steps. Standing, Turel turned to face Selika and what she now saw in his eyes made her realize that she had perhaps gone a bit too far with this one.
Eyes tinged with the hint of darkness, Turel lashed out with the Force. Her head still ringing, Selika was unable to deflect the push of energy away from herself. Taking it fully across her chest, Selika found herself hurtling out into open air, falling down into the side alley below.
Lieutenant Sabin, leader of Shadow Company Unit 267, had gotten his team into position across from the warehouse, but it had been too late. Just as he had reached the top of the stairs leading to the roof, the police speeder had hit the street and exploded. He had seen Councilor Turel hurl the target from the roof, and was getting ready to deploy his men to follow her when his comlink chirped to life.
“Lieutenant,” Turel spoke over the link.
Sabin looked out across the roof to where Turel stood across the way, his form indistinct and blurred in the smoke and heat of the fire on the street below. “Councilor,” he replied.
“Take your men and withdraw,” Turel ordered, “This one is mine.”
The line clicked off before Sabin could form a reply, but there was something in the pit of his stomach that left him glad he hadn’t needed to speak further with the Councilor. The voice had been that of Turel Sorenn, but there had been something different. His appearance bathed in smoke and fire, he had almost seemed like some night-demon from the stories of Sabin’s youth. Haunted by what he had heard, Lieutenant Sabin ordered his men to beat a hasty retreat.
This section doesn't flow as well as it could. I've made some a suggestion in the quote of a way to break it up. You also used "fair" instead of "far".
Missed the punctuation at the end of the dialogue.
An adverb flowing into the dialogue doesn't really work as you intend here, as it lacks the verb to modify. As well, since you used commas between the dialogue the "You" should not be capitalized.
"indicating" should be "indicate" according to how this sentence is structured.
This was a good use of Your Weapons... You Will Not Need Them, naturally done.
You had three dialogues in a row that all used "said". Try to vary this up with "replied" or another synonym.
Your punctuation ran away between "clear-headed" and "The" in the section above.
This should be "its" as it is possessive towards the projectile. Easy enough way to catch this is to read it as "made it is exit", see how that makes it clear?
Unless I missed the nuptials, this should be "martial".