When Selika had found that she had been selected for the “honor” of being included in the Grand Master’s latest bloodsport, she had been of two minds about it. She wasn’t one who liked to focus on the martial aspects of the Force or combat in general, but her time in the Brotherhood had taken her further and further away from the person she had been when she had arrived. The level of recognition she had attained to bring her to this place was gratifying, but it still served as an indictment of her supposed desire to stay above things like the petty squabbles of the Sith. That, and if she were truly being honest with herself, she realized that she had begun to enjoy the opportunities to face opponents that would test her skills in more stressful settings. The engagements against both Soren and Vorsa on the streets of Menat Ombo had left her drained, and it had required bacta therapy of a non-inconsiderable length, but it had also left her invigorated in a way that she had never truly experienced before.
But, she mused, this is a far cry from the Visulu Marketplace.
Selika sat on a smooth stone, her arms crossed in front of her, and gazed upward. The dull glow of the crystals around her failed to penetrate the top of the shaft high above, but it was enough to see the lift descending from amid the confusing pattern of stone blocks that filled the mine shaft. She had sensed her opponent’s presence within the Force long before she could see him, but now the unreconstructed Imperial came into view as the lift finally reached the bottom of the mine.
“So I see you arrived before me,” Andrelious remarked.
Selika nodded as she sized up her opponent. He, like herself, appeared unarmed, though the thigh-length coat of vaguely Imperial cut could have concealed any number of weapons. His body was relaxed, almost casual, as he stepped off the lift. He was displaying much of the same mannerisms as he would working under her direction curating the Brotherhood’s holocrons.
“And I assume that you’re also in the dark as to where we even are,” Andrelious went on. “Galactically, that is.”
“If the career pilot can’t keep up with where he is when he’s thrown in a blacked-out shuttle and dropped unceremoniously on some unknown backwater of a world, what hope do the rest of us have?” Selika asked with a warm smile, willing to play along with the Taldryanite’s nonchalance.
“So now it’s a race to see who can make it to the top while beating the snot out of their opponent,” Andrelious said, changing the direction of the conversation. “All for the privilege of beating the snot out of the next guy.”
“So it seems,” Selika responded.
“I was considering,” Andrelious went on, “what would happen if we both made it to the top. And what would then happen if perhaps we found some of the other combatants and ended their progress. Together?”
As he said the last, Selika felt the tendrils of his Force presence stretch out and every so gently touch her mind. Inwardly, she smiled. The over-the-hill fighter jockey couldn’t have been more transparent in his actions had he tried, at least not against one as skilled as she in the art of mental manipulation. He was attempting to use more than just his disarming mannerisms to push her into lowering her guard in the hopes of ending their match quickly.
“You raise a very…interesting question,” Selika murmured, appearing to play along. “Working together might even be the best way for us to reach our final goal, though when we do, all temporary alliances would, of course, come to their inevitable end.”
Selika could feel his attention sharpen, the excitement of seeing his ploy apparently working.
“Of course,” Andrelious echoed.
“While the rest of the combatants fall victim to their baser, more combative instincts, we can prove that the best duelists favor guile and shrewdness.”
Selika stood and moved towards Andrelious, an easygoing sway to her hips as she closed the distance between them. As her own steely resolve turned back the mental manipulations of her foe, she allowed her own Force touch to follow the energy he was exerting back to its source. Distracted as he was with his own attempt, she felt her own effort to disarm him find success.
Don’t play mind games with me, flyboy, she thought. You’re ill-equipped.
As the two Sith neared each other, Selika moved her hand slowly behind her back to unclip the saber that hung there out of her opponent’s view. She quickly brought it slashing forward in sweeping horizontal strike, igniting the weapon as it swung towards Andrelious. The middle-aged man, however, was reacting even before the weapon came into view. Force energy erupted outward from his left palm to form a barrier against her blow, as his right darted beneath his jacket to retrieve his own weapon. Selika’s violet blade crashed against the translucent wall that Andrelious had formed against it, glancing off as it struck from an angle. The crimson blade of Andrelious’s own saber sprang to life in an instant, and it was all Selika could do to avoid his strike. Allowing the motion of her follow through to carry her to the ground, she ducked under his blade and rolled away.
Selika sprung back to her feet and whirled to face the Warlord just in time to catch his blade as he swung down towards her once again. She could see Andrelious’s eyes narrow as they maintained the saber lock, no doubt wondering if he could remove his off hand from his own weapon in order to retrieve his second blade.
“Looks like the reflexes of a fighter pilot aren’t as overstated as they say,” Selika commented, a malevolent grin on her face.
“A finely-honed danger sense from the Force can do wonders,” Andrelious retorted. “You almost pulled that one off.”
“Well, you can’t blame a girl for trying, can you?” Selika asked, a hint of playfulness in her tone.
Andrelious’s answer came as he released his left hand from his saber hilt, a pulse of Force energy once again leaping from his free hand. This time, however, the energy burst outward to slam into Selika’s chest, knocking her backwards to land in a heap up against one of the crystal formations that dotted the shaft’s floor.
Shaking her head to clear it, Selika regained her feet. She held her saber out before her, adopting one of the most basic of Soresu’s defensive stances. Selika saw that Andrelious was now moving towards her cautiously, his body turned slightly to offer a narrower profile. Andrelious swung his weapon, hoping to batter aside the woman’s defenses with the powerful cleaves of his chosen lightsaber style. Once again, Selika was amused. The saying often went that the best defense was a good offense, but even the most aggressive of his blows could not exert the raw power needed to break through her guard.
As she weathered the storm of her opponent’s blows, Selika reached out with the Force to put her next distraction into motion.
“Andrelious! Help me, Andrelious!”
As focused as he was on combat, the Warlord could not spare the concentration to see through the simple auditory illusion. As a result, he heard the voice of Kookimarissia echoing down from somewhere above. The plaintive wails spoke to one in great pain, and Andrelious’s blows faltered under the distraction. Selika used the opportunity to reach out with the Force and solidify her grip around his upper left arm, pulling him forward to add to the momentum of his latest strike. The extra force lead to him staggering forward past where Selika stood, and, unable to halt his motion, resulted in him falling face forward into the ground.
Seizing the opportunity, Selika ran towards the nearest of the stone platforms moving through the mine shaft. A simple burst of the Force allowed her to leap to the top of the ascending stone, grabbing the cable that suspended it from above in order to swing around and face Andrelious once again. He was rising to his feet, spitting debris from his mouth as he did so.
“So, you see why I made sure to make it here before you,” Selika called down to him.
“What have you done?!” he spat, obviously enraged at the thought of his wife being used as a pawn in their battle.
“Come now,” Selika scolded, “you should know better. This was never going to be decided by the two of us simply bashing one another over the head like a pair of Gamorreans. I like to ensure that things are a bit more interesting.”
Andrelious glowered at her, the rage behind his gaze saying more than mere words ever could.
First of all, I enjoy the inner monologue that you have with your post. Very few people take the time to make fair use of the allotted word limit, that when I see a character's modus operandi and mental gear workings, I can't help but <3 the creative writing and character exploration.
Realism (bare with me, long-winded opinion coming up)!
While your character's mental aptitude for mind games as well as her Resolve are as high as they are, I think you overplayed it throughout your story. Downplaying your success a little bit and showing a bit of a struggle to counteract his Mind Trick suggestion in the following scene would have made things more interesting in my opinion.
The above is an obvious use of Andrelious' Mind Trick which is at +4.
Here, the CS mechanics check out. Selika's Resolve and Aspects, versus Andrelious' Mind Trick and low manipulatoin (+1) (good work) actually work. I would have liked to see a little more "trouble" slicing through it "story wise" (this is only a critique since it leads you down the "my character can get out of anything" mentality), which can make your character appear two dimensional and less endearing to the reader very quickly.
This comes out again in her lightsaber duel, which is the actual Realism detractor I'm finally getting to. You need to be careful of portraying your character as being better than she really is.
Here, Andrelious' primary lightsaber skill is at +4, your Soresu at +3. While you're closely matched, he's not simply someone you'll easily bat aside (especially with his "might" skill factored in).
It's one thing to play a very confident character, but the idea is to portray the calm exterior, while presenting the reader with the inner struggle that comes with sparring against a character who is potentially better than her in that particular situation.
That said the rest of your interpretations for the various character sheets powers throughout your text were well thought out and quite entertaining.