Shi Long could see the fear that painted Selika Roh’s face, could feel it radiating from her through his Force sense. The woman stood before him without her saber, completely drained from their battle. She was obviously wounded, favoring her right leg as she moved. The blood trailing from her lip and the swelling around her eye were testaments to his prowess in combat. And yet, she still stood. He had left her in a position where there was no hope, no recourse, and yet she still stood.
“Yield,” he instructed, holding his blade just below her upturned chin.
Selika merely glared at him. If she had been someone like Shi himself, he might have seen her refusal to capitulate as something to respect. Selika, being the haughty woman she was, was not cut from the same cloth.
In this case, the Sadowan reflected, it is mere stupidity.
“One last chance,” he spat. “Stand down.”
Again, only silence greeted him. Shi sighed inwardly. He had looked forward to proving himself once more on the field of battle, but he had come here to fight. There was combat, and then there was what this had become. Seika’s ham-fisted attacks had posed little threat. Here she was, beaten and broken, whilst she had hardly inflicted anything in return. This wasn’t a true test of his skills; it hardly even qualified as sport.
Wanting nothing more than for this farce to be over, Shi balled his fist and then swung. The blow caught Selika across the temple, dropping her face-first into the dirt like a sack of milkened tubers. Keenly aware of the rules, Shi dropped to a knee beside her to make sure his blow had driven no more than consciousness from her. His fingers found a pulse at her neck as her back showed the motions of breathing, so Shi nodded and rose to his feet.
A murmur rose from the crowd as he did so, growing in volume as he turned to face Darth Pravus upon the dais. The Grand Master sported an odd expression on his face, however, instead of the expected satisfaction. Shifting his gaze, the Son of Sadow saw much the same look painted across the features of Marick Arconae beside him.
Confusion, Shi finally realized.
Before he could take any action spurred on by his sudden insight, the snap-hiss of a lightsaber ignition crackled behind him, and the amethyst blade of a lightsaber sprouted from the right side of his chest like a glowing fountain. Just as the screaming pain of the weapon having been driven through his torso reached his brain, the blade disappeared as the weapon was just as quickly deactivated.
“Can’t have it doing any more damage than I want it to,” warbled Selika’s voice from behind him.
Suddenly struggling to find his breath as one of his lungs collapsed, Shi saw his opponent step into his field of vision as she walked in front of him. Her face was slightly different than he expected, not quite in line with his recollection of a moment ago. Her lip was not dripping with the blood that had run down her chin. The flesh around her eye, while bruised, was not swollen nearly enough to obscure her vision. Most alarmingly, however, was the lack of any sign at all of his blow to her head mere seconds ago. All of this rushed quickly through Shi’s mind as he realized that he had been played.
“You’re right, of course,” Selika said with a smirk, as if in response to his unvoiced thought.
His mind spinning itself into a near panic, Shi Long grasped for the tendrils of the Force that would allow him to bring his not inconsiderable skill in the healing arts to bare. Those tendrils, however, seemed just out of his grasp. It was as if his fingertips could just brush them before they were pulled out of his reach.
“Come now. I can’t have you trying to put yourself back together,” Selika scolded him. “Not after I let you take your shots to get you into this position.”
The last was delivered with just a hint of simmering anger that was boiling just below the woman’s surface. Shi saw what had happened, the very subtle illusions she had woven for him. Now that he was aware of it, he could see that his punches were far less vicious than he had experienced at the time. And, most tellingly, he remembered the blow to her head that had put her down. But he also remembered that punch missing her head entirely. The former’s illusory nature was so obvious to him, but only after she had allowed the illusion to slip.
As the energy seeped out of his body, the Long dropped once more to his knees, but this time he was unable to rise. He could feel blood rising in his throat, the sensation drawing forth a cough that deposited a gush of it down the front of his tunic.
“How?” Shi was finally able to ask.
“Even for one as closed-minded as you, there is always a way in,” Selika explained. “An illusion is always most effective when you’re showing someone what they want to see, what they expect to see.”
Shi coughed again and began to waver, his body swaying back and forth as he attempted to stay upright. Selika knelt beside him, her hand moving behind his shoulders to lower him to the ground.
“I knew I wasn’t going to fight you and win, Dragon of Stone,” she quietly intoned. “I realized that the moment that you dropped me to the arena floor. The only way I could possibly get you to lower your guard was to make you think that you’d won. I painted the picture you were certain you were going to see. Crawling madly for a blaster, of all things, allowing you to get within arm’s length without lighting you up like the Coruscant skyline. A bit of manipulation and mental trickery was all it took.”
“How did you know that I wouldn’t…” Shi’s voice trailed off as he labored for breath.
“I didn’t,” Selika observed. “You could have sliced off something important, or been overcome by your bloodlust. A bit of a gamble, but I trusted that you still wanted your victory.”
A level of intensity that until now had been unseen now radiated from Selika’s eyes.
“Now, Shi Long, yield,” she commanded. “Or I will allow the life to bleed from your body right here.”
“You will lose,” was Shi’s response.
“What makes you think that victory,” Selika said, moving down to whisper in his ear, “would be any more enjoyable than watching you die?”
As the woman’s mouth moved away from his ear, the warmth of her breath went with it. The coldness that remained seemed incongruous to the sun beating down from overhead. He could feel it - the body he inhabited was slipping away. The woman in front of him was, truth be told, capricious enough to let him die just for spite. He knew that. In doing so, she would earn the wrath of the other Dragons, but that would be cold comfort to a dead man. Being wise enough not to allow his pride to rule his actions, Shi came to grips with the only option that remained.
“I yield,” he rasped.
Selika rose from his side, releasing the hold that had blocked off the Force’s healing energies from him. He greedily grabbed them for all they were worth, allowing the restorative power to flow through him in order to preserve his life until the medics could arrive. Then, much as Shi had mere moments ago, Selika turned to face the Grand Master.
“Enough?” she asked.
The audience was stunned by the sudden turn of events, and now all eyes were on the Grand Master. Standing, the leader of the Brotherhood spoke.
“Indeed it is,” he replied.
“Good. Now, I want that one,” Selika said, pointing a finger at her attendant in the gallery. “Hold him for me. His life is forfeit.”
“On what grounds?” Marick demanded.
“A mundane stood against one of us,” Darth Pravus replied, then turned to Selika. “I will have him placed in custody, to do as you will with him.”
“Why doesn’t she just kill him now?” Marick asked, as Pravus gestured to several guards and silently directed them to apprehend the offending attendant.
“Because,” Pravus explained with a smile, “at this moment, I don’t believe she is actually capable of doing so.”
Marick’s eyes returned to the now deactivated arena floor. Selika was down on her hands and knees beside her opponent, her arms struggling with the effort of supporting her weight. In the end, gravity won the battle. Her limbs collapsed and she dropped to the dirt, unconscious.
“Even the Force can only hold injury and exertion at bay for so long,” Pravus mused. “Now, send in your medics.”
Love your intro beats. Set's the stage, brings us into the arena with Shi, and outlines the stakes.
I'd love a line break in here, especially with the dialogue to himself in there.
I don't have much to add here. This is as solid and good of an opening post as I've read. Great work.