The stone-faced Adept waited with stoic calm as A’lora processed his final demands, the light of understanding finally dawning on her savage features. Beneath the Arconae’s composed surface his mind worked furiously, reaching into his battered kneecaps and suffusing it with the rancid power of the dark side. His bruised flesh healed with agonizing languor - the Entar was far more fit to destroy than he was to heal - but the fire in his nerves was, at last, receding.
Eventually the Consul nodded, forehead dipping up and down as if to gore him with her montrals. If this is how it must be, unspoken words slipped into his mind, I will account for my Clan. Odan-urr will be no footnote to Arcona’s triumph.
A din broke out amongst the crowd, its rising murmur not unlike the howl of an incipient tempest as the two combatants faced off in silence and stillness. As if in obligation, Timeros holstered his blasters once more, reaching for the familiar weight of his sabers. The Consul raised her own weapon in return, shafts of green plasma humming eagerly for the Elder's blood. For a moment, the two simply locked gazes, daring each other to move first. Then the sands crunched with footfalls as both combatants burst into motion at once, Force-augmented muscles thrusting them from standstill to sprint.
Timeros surged across the gap, weaving lithely between the arced nest of half-risen blades. His lightsabers sprang to life, unfurling into a blazing amethyst lotus whose petals stretched in a complicated, crossing pattern that elicited an approving bellow from the crowd. The Arconae paid no heed to the spectators. His perspective had been crushed to a single point, every neuron aligned into the singular goal of making the battle painful, brutal and, above all, short.
You cannot serve besides us, his thoughts rang with frigid certainty. If you will not serve beneath us, you might not serve at all.
A’lora met him halfway in a scintillating verdant tempest, connected blades flitting back and forth in an acrobatic leap that terminated into a vicious downstroke. The Entar accepted it calmly upon his lightsaber, unruffled by her savagery and displaying only icy determination to her fiery resolve. He turned the burning shaft aside, using the sheer velocity of her attack to push her slightly off balance - and into the waiting metal blades of the half-sprung trap.
The Consul tore herself away, free hand pressing against the gleaming steel and pushing off of its side. She narrowly avoided being skewered, managing to turn her sideways momentum into a toe-twirling spin and a wide, horizontal slice, dangerous overextended.
Timeros met the cyclonic whorl with a shimmering pillar of amethyst fire. He allowed their weapons to clash then grind together in a spark-filled crackle that, for a moment, outshone the blazing sunlight. Then he slipped away, smooth steps placing him on the opposite side of the thin metal barrier.
A’lora moved in tandem with her foe, turning nimbly to face him, dual-bladed saber already reversing course. Yet even as she did so, she felt the Force take control of her motions, wrenching control away from her muscles and aborting her slash into a vertical whirl. She had only begun to register her prescient defense when the Adept’s second lightsaber burst through the metal in a searing flash that would have pierced her gut had she not batted it away the instant it erupted from the barrier.
Understanding crackled across the Seer’s skull moments before the Arconan’s other saber did, racing down the gap between her twirling saberstaff. Working furiously, she altered her saber’s course once more, parrying his downstroke with an upward motion that likewise sliced through the steel contraption and sent a metal shard tumbling to the ground. The Togruta’s riposte was forceful and unhesitating as she threw herself into a spin, spiralling around the barrier and lunging blindly behind herself as her feet left the ground.
Timeros jerked away, uncoiling like a spring, deliberate and graceful as the saber flew by. His blades snapped like pincers, moving inwards as if to skewer the Odanite in midair, then abruptly halted as she moved to block. Instead, his foot shot forward, Force-battened muscles arresting the Consul’s gyre and and hooking around her ankle to sweep her legs out from underneath her.
A’lora hit the floor with the grind of sand against flesh, breath knocked from her lungs and saber held awkwardly to her side. Yet there was no time for thought and she threw herself away one-handed, somehow managing to find balance as she veered to her feet just before twin sabers pierced the sands and turned them into molten glass.
The Seer’s staff flicked into place, dual ends weaving a defensive barrier as she regained her posture. Her mind delved into the Force, illusory selves springing forth in lavender-skinned multitudes to distract the Arconae. Yet her respite was short-lived. The Adept’s presence fell upon her like a curtain made of lead, smothering her connection to the Force. Her wits crumbled beneath the strain, and the illusions wavered, flickering in and out of being as the Consul struggled to maintain their existence.
The distraction lasted only a moment, but it was enough: Timeros darted forward, sabers flitting inwards, and the illusion shattered against the Arconae’s resolve as he set about demolishing his beleaguered foe.
Dual streams of light lashed at the Odanite with blinding speed, turning the air into an amethyst haze. The Consul spun her staff defensively, catching the first blow on the end of her saber, but a second was already inbound, slipping through her defenses with serpentine grace. The Togruta contorted to avoid it, narrowly slipping over the blade as it licked the sands beneath her feet.
Had A’lora hoped for any respite, she would have been sorely disappointed. As it was, she knew better, but the sheer ferocity of her foe still shook her. Timeros’ sabers flashed forward without an instant’s hesitation or doubt, hitting her like a series of kicks in the kidney. Where she had chosen to show mercy the Arconae displayed none, his every strike made in contentious defiance of the Grand Master’s edict against murder. He accelerated abruptly and twisted around her hastily constructed defenses, sabers nearing her flesh in exploratory strikes then retreating just as suddenly, until her balance began to tatter and fray against the alacrity of a veteran Marauder.
The Togruta attempted to retreat, trading ground for time in hopes of outlasting her foe’s inhuman swiftness. It proved useless. The Entar’s weapons formed a tunnel, flashing lances of light seemingly materializing out of thin air whenever she deviated from the path he chose for her, forcing her back into the aborted trap from which he had been saved.
The Force was lightning and thunder at once. It was understanding. It was, above all, life, and its brightest part screamed into the back of A’lora’s skull just moments before Timeros’ sabers arced down from both sides. She brought up her staff just in time, both blades rising and catching a gout of purple fire on either side. As the weapons locked in a conflagration of sparks, stillness set into the arena, and even the onlookers seemed to hold their collective breaths.
Perspiration dripped from the duelists’ brows as adrenaline faded and fatigue set in, aching muscles struggling in vain to overcome, but succeeding only at a fragile impasse. For a moment, the two balanced in a near-perfect stalemate.
The next instant, Timeros’ mind blazed with power as he reached into the dark side, marshalling its awful strength and channeling it into existence, hammering down upon A’lora’s discarded quarterstaff with his will alone. The Neti branch had already been battered when she had used it to disarm the mechanical trap. Faced with the Adept’s telekinetic assault, it shattered completely, snapping like a twig against the unseen force.
By the time the Consul noticed the sudden grinding of gears and chains, she was already too late. Freed from the tensile stress, the trap had begun to move - right into the hapless Togruta. For a moment, there was only all-consuming pain, drowning out all other sensations and enveloping her in a haze of red.
The Seer snapped back into awareness, the sheer force of agony coursing through her veins forcing her back into lucity. She coughed up blood as she lay pinned against the floor. A throbbing sensation near her chest informed her that the blade had pierced a lung and exited through her back.
As the pain faded away, she could hear dim footfalls upon the sands, medical droids ready to carry her away. Likewise, she was dimly aware of Pravus’ voice, announcing her foe the victor. Yet her slowly dimming vision focused on one thing in particular: a calm and blue-eyed gaze, still locked onto her own.
I am altering the deal, A’lora, frigid words etched into her mind. Pray that I don’t alter it any further.
Love it. Good intro.
So, you do a really good job setting everything up. And then we jump-cut to them clashing. I would have loved to see the initial clash described better. Are they in the center, are they circling each other, do they both leap in, does one leap in vs the other? Jump-cuts can work sometimes, but it stood out to me here.
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their embrace...or the embrace of what?
Less than a moment more, and the Elder would have felt the waves of electricity coursing through his extremities in a most unpleasant sensation. An extension of his will, the lightsaber in his ashen grip collided with the Odanite’s once more, deliberately relaxing his foothold on the hazardous element.
His feint allowed the vicious Togruta to overwhelm him, the trailing blade catching the underside of his amethyst one with enough impact to kickoff a well-conducted backflip. Not as careless as he originally anticipated, the Consul resisted chasing down his withdrawal long enough for the energized particles to discharge.
This action sequence is a bit hard to follow. Ran it by a fellow judge and they felt the same way. I get that Timeros' balance is off because he's avoiding the trap, which A'lora exploits....by doing an upwards cut (forcing Tim to push momentum down) and then backflipping? If she came in from high, clashed sabers, she could push off and backflip from that, but the momentum seems wrong. You call it a feint/deliberate, but it also somehow seems like a mistake that A'lora is exploiting?
So, this could come from a misunderstanding of the power, but Terror by definition only creates the FEELINGs of dread and fear. It does not, in itself, cause hallucinations. Timeros has +1 in Illusions, but there is no reason he'd know what A'lora's fears are. So, her hallucinating is not really something that Timeros would do in combat based on the way he uses Fear. He could use his Debilitating Fear feat to paralyze, but not a full on hallucination that targets her actual fears.
Strong intro post otherwise. Love the use of the traps and environment.