The Chiss regained his footing and leapt at his opponent, daggers held wide and ready to scissor towards the Human’s jugular, as he suppressed a grin at the warring annoyance and glee on Aiden’s features. A steady patter of condensed moisture dripping from the stalactites overhead beat a counterpoint to the staccato rhythm that filled the cavern. Keep it up, the Battlelord thought, The longer he buys the faux bravado, the quicker this will end. Enjoyment plainly writ on his boyish features, the Taldryanite quick-stepped back from the blow; his batons clanged together around the crossed daggers and he turned his shoulder towards the older Sith, pushing to force the pair apart.
“Youthful exuberance will only take you so far, whelp!” Outrage at the Arconan’s words, eloquently evinced by the scowl falling across Aiden’s visage, was indication enough that Invictus’ tactic was working. Urging the Knight on with a wave of his daggers, the Chiss reached for one more jibe calculated to stoke the Journeyman’s fury. “Really, I thought Halcyon trained his people well enough to at least draw blood before being beaten to a pulp.”
Without a moment’s pause, the Warden lunged at Invictus, stun baton extended to jam into the Arconan’s gut. Ordinarily, the lithe Human’s surfeit of speed would have snuck through an opponent’s defenses, doubling them over the shocking blow - Invictus hated being ordinary. Reacting with celerity fueled by the Force, the Battlelord dropped the dagger in his right hand, shrugged his cloak from his left shoulder, and whipped it towards his opponent. Deftly aimed, the fabric wrapped itself around the baton; a single, sharp jerk ripped it from the Human’s hands and sent both it and the cloak skirring into the cavernous shadows that surrounded the duo.
Lifting his Sapphire Blade from its sheath, the Chiss shuffled his weapons into opposite hands and turned his side to his opponent, narrowing his profile and hefting his blades defensively. Invective flew from the younger man’s lips as a repulsor razor flew from his hand, aimed unerringly at the Arconan’s knee. Mere moments before it struck, the Battlelord dove into a somersault, narrowly avoiding the missile’s hobbling flight. Invictus tucked and rolled to his feet, twirling back to face his opponent and preparing to launch himself at Aiden. The Human, however, had taken advantage of the distraction and his now-drawn lightsaber threatened to put Invictus once more on the defensive.
Anger welled within the Chiss and lent ferocity to his defense as the Taldryanite barreled towards him. Nettled by the protracted exchange, Invictus met the rush with annoyance and abandon, ducking below a slash from the Knight’s verdant saber. Damn, I’m getting too old for this poodoo!, he thought, as he turned the oncoming stun baton to the side and stabbed his remaining echani dagger into the smaller man’s bicep.
“Sithspit!”, shouted Aiden, stumbling back several steps, his left hand dropping the stun baton and grasping at the blade embedded in his flesh. He ripped it hurriedly from his arm, drawing on the Force to shunt aside the pain. Odium plain on his cobalt features, Invictus ignited his own lightsaber and closed the distance between them. Vernal enthusiasm vied with caution, and won, as the Chiss swept his saber at the bloodied Knight. Enervated by blood loss and dehydration, the Taldryanite nonetheless batted aside the sapphire saber angling for his solar plexus.
Invictus plunged his Sapphire Blade into the Human’s thigh instead. Tearing it free - and regretting that it seemed to have missed the femoral artery - the Arconan glared impassively at the weakened Knight, as if offering him the opportunity to surrender.
Unsteady on his feet, Aiden met the blue-skinned Sith glare for glare; then, as if in sheer defiance of his own wounds, the corners of his lips turned up in a grin. “Perhaps,” the Chiss murmured softly, admiration for the Journeyman’s tenacity creeping into his voice, “They do make them like they used to.”
Yearning just shy of outright lust had suffused the Grand Master’s orders to recover the cavern’s mysterious artifact and Invictus knew it was only a matter of time before more would-be spelunkers found the entrance, further complicating the relic’s retrieval. Obdurately ignoring his own growing sympathy for the Knight, the Battlelord sprang towards Aiden, lightsaber extended to skewer the younger man through the heart. Unwavering, the Human stood his ground before the oncoming blow, summoning his rage and focusing it along the path of the thrust. Resistance, unlooked for, stopped the blade short and sent Invictus stumbling back from his opponent.
Aiden seized on the opening, lunging forward and dipping his lightsaber beneath the Arconan’s own. Sizzling plasma seared through the Chiss’ lightly-armored bodysuit, burning away skin and flesh and ripping a strangled shout from the older man’s lungs as he collapsed to the rocky ground. Sprawled on the cavern floor, Invictus’ sapphire lightsaber slipped from his fingers as his hand slapped over the wound in his belly, staunching the flow of blood as he struggled to regain his footing.
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