The Jedi was quick in her run through the cave, and it was all Marduss could do to keep pace. His battle with the three wraids had tired him, and the earlier brawl with Rohana had left the Sith weakened, but furious. The fact that the Jedi could subdue the beasts with her connection to the Force made Marduss’ strategy ineffective, leaving the Jedi to simply walk into the main chamber and take the Tome. But, the main chamber was a nesting ground for wraids, and Marduss had a few more tricks up his sleeve.
The main chamber was vast, spreading out a kilometer from the cave entrance; it was in the shape of an enormous oval. The chamber was well lit, with large amounts of phosphorescent plants hanging from the ceiling, and various small plateaus and platforms of rock and dirt. Unfortunately, the wraids had made them their homes, and from their homes, the beasts were looking very unhappily down upon the figure of Rohana; who was standing only a few meters away from the cave entrance.
At the far wall at the other end of the chamber, Marduss could see a large chest or sarcophagus standing on a raised platform far above all the others. This was where the Tome must have been kept, and where Marduss was, and Rohana undoubtabley, were going to.
Augmenting himself with his unending rage and amplifying his abilities through the Force, Marduss charged his Jedi opponent, igniting his saber as he ran.
For her part, the Jedi turned with incredible speed and caught the incoming attack with her own lightsaber, and kept both of the plasma blades above their heads, so neither could strike without be killed themselves.
“Stop this at once! Your endangering the lives of the wraids, and I don’t want to kill you.” Rohana was clearly agitated, and wanted only to destroy the Tome and be done with this place, but the rage in Marduss would not simply leave her to destroy the Tome and walk away from the chambers.
“No” was Marduss’ only response.
The two broke apart, and immediately started to attack each other; Marduss out of anger, Rohana out of the desire to end the battle as quickly as possible.
Rohana summoned the Force and used it to telekinetically send large rocks flying at Marduss, who cut them down as they came toward him. Marduss then summoned the Force in an attempt to electrically shock the Jedi, but was blocked by her saber as she closed in on the younger warrior. The two then went to melee combat, Rohana went for the legs again, trying to leave Marduss crippled and unable to fight. Her slash to the knee was blocked, and then knocked back by her Sith opponent who followed it up by attempting a diagonal slash to her chest. The Jedi counselor just stepped back and, with graceful ease, sent a kinetic blast at the younger warrior’s hands and disarmed him. Not to be deterred by his lack of a saber, Marduss attempted to blast Rohana with more electrical shocks, but was deflected every time.
Finally, the Jedi closed in on the younger warrior and, before he could escape, slashed him across his left shoulder. Stumbling backwards in pain, Marduss pulled his saber toward him and, with much effort began to raise both his arms.
“Jedi, I will give you one last chance: surrender or die”, Marduss bellowed as he raised his hands above his head. Rohana gave no inclination that she would but, as she watched the younger warrior raise his arms, understood what he was doing.
“Marduss-”, Rohana yelled, “-whatever your planning, don’t.”
Just as Rohana finished her sentence, the younger warrior called upon the force the wreak havoc upon the cavern he and his opponent were in. Marduss sent the largest telekinetic blast he could muster and broke some of the ceiling apart, sending chunks of ceiling into nearby wraid nests. When the Jedi looked around, she felt sadness and pain as a few wraids lay dead and many others had become angrily displaced, their anger being directed toward the two dueling Force wielders.
Tiring quickly by the minute, Marduss rushed away from the pursuing wraids and towards the far off wall of the cavern. Rohana followed, but was more heavily concerned with calming and fending off the wraids from attacking her or each other. By the time she caught up with Marduss, he had reached the steps toward the chest against the now near wall.
Without warning, Rohana shot the younger warrior with a kinetic blast that sent him flying into the air and left him lying on his side at the top of the platform holding the Tome. The wraids, however, caught up and charged the Jedi, who could not hope to save them all.
Tired and defeated, Marduss picked himself up and shuffled over to the chest. It was a rectangular stone chest with many ancient markings to signify its role as a container of Dark Side importance. As quick as possible, the Sith broke the lid off of the chest and removed the only object it held, the tome he had been seeking. Seeking an exit, the closest way out was a long vertical shaft in the rock only a few meters away that led deep into the desert mountains, far off from his extraction point, but it was his only option. The Sith began to climb to freedom from the bowels of the underground cavern, and as he climbed out he saw Rohana distraught at the carnage she had wrought, then Marduss called on the Force one last time to destroy the rocks below him and temporarily sealed his exit, giving him time to escape his pursuing opponent.
Realism: Need to account for damage suffered, e.g. control self usage or explaining more clearly how the pain fueled his rage. Also, a cavein would probably also hurt. How did Marduss avoid any damage? Was he just lucky?
Story: When describing the use of Force powers, write how the power is acting. For amplification, describe how the Force aids the strength of his swings, or his speed, or whatever you are increasing.