Blade had wanted to ask the Zabrak a few more questions, but Kul wasn’t giving her that opportunity. His aggressive launch towards her and his subsequent body strikes kept her arms and hands in motion as she weaved them through the air in quick, short jabs; her efficient, deadly K’tara strikes forcing Kul to protect himself from the inenviable fate of incapacitating blows. They were keeping her alive for now, but Kul was not holding anything back. Her body was beaten back ever so slightly as their arms and hands banged against each other. The force of his counters and hits spoke to the Zabrak’s superior strength and the taller stature that leveraged it.
Blade had learned enough from her previous fights against bigger, stronger opponents to know that this was a battle she could not win by brute force. In addition, the rhythm of the fight and Kul’s choice of weaponry revealed that the Zabrak favored his claw gauntlet over the use of a lightsaber. She could not begin to fathom why anyone would make such a curious choice when they had attained a lightsaber. Did he desire to embrace his more feral side? Either way, to find herself subjected to such a vulgar weapon was a disgrace! Her personal distaste aside, she needed a change of tactics.
In short, Blade needed her lightsaber. She had kept up with their quick exchanges so far, but he fought with a claw and she didn’t want to acquire any deep scratches. She continued her brutal dance with the Zabrak. With each blow, she looked for an opening. He was relentless. He came at her again and again, one jab, a swipe of his claw, a feint, another jab. A sly smirk crossed her lips then. She could capitalize on those feints he seemed so fond of.
When Kul next feinted, Blade pounced. She summoning the Force into a powerful cross punch across the Zabrak’s face as she purposefully swung her fist through thin air. Kul staggered to his right, his foot momentarily caught on a raised loose stone. As he struggled to regain his footing, Blade jumped away. Her lightsaber was out, its crimson blade alive, before she had even landed.
The seconds reprieve from fighting awakened her to small dull pains. She spared a quick glance down to her arms and hands. Several thin cuts now marked her skin. Droplets of blood trickled like beads on her tight outfit. She grit her teeth. Such an animal!
“You say you do this to protect your clan, but why protect a vicious murderer?” Blade asked petulantly.
The Zabrak stared at her lit lightsaber for a second before responding. Blade wondered why he didn’t ignite his own already.
“I am loyal to my clan. They are my family. Nothing more and nothing less,” responded Kul.
Kul was a curiosity to her, and in all honesty she wasn’t sure what to make of him. He wanted to protect his clan, something she might have labelled a noble cause were it not so foolishly misguided. Did he not realize he was defending a ruthless animal? She felt frustrated at his willingness to overlook his fallen comrade’s proclivity for harming others.
“I see. At least you give me a challenge. One last question, are you fighting for that dead animal you call family or is there part of you that is fighting for yourself?” Blade asked bluntly.
Kul’s face took on a hurt, annoyed, expression. A hit nerve?
“How dare you insult Taasii? How dare you mock ME! I fight for my clan. I fight for the hunt. You will understand this when I rip you to shreds!” argued Kul passionately.
That was all Blade needed to hear. She knew she could hold nothing back, for this fight would be no sparring session. This was life or death. It melted away her doubts and made her decision very easy. She quieted her mind and put her focus on what mattered most now, winning.
“Then I declare you guilty. Prepare for your punishment,” Blade declared with an air of finality.
Kul stood tall, body turned at an angle, knees bent slightly, arms relaxed but ready to spring into action. His eyes were focused. He licked his lips as he waited on Blade to make her move.
“You can certainly try,” the Zabrak responded with an angry growl.
Blade took one deep breath as she called upon the Force. Then, like a flash of lightning, she leapt into action. Taking full advantage of her saber’s reach, she nipped Kul’s shoulder even as he swiped his claw through thin air. She followed up with a flurry of deceptive, random slashes. Much to her frustration, she hit nothing but the wind.
Blade was sweating profusely, she had been for the better part of the day. First against the Massassi, then against this Zabrak. And with her sweat, she had released an endless stream of pheromones. The arena was positively flooded with her delicious scent and it was only a matter of time before the Zabrak was swayed by it.
“Come closer, Kul. Join me in a dance of light,” said Blade alluringly.
I like the short intro. Simple way to add some depth and reason to the story without need for too many words.
than*
This should be "He was" as it reads awkwardly otherwise.
Ellipses should be used in dialogue for trailing off or pauses. Not exactly a mark against you, but just something I wanted to point out. See the section in the ACC Guide here: https://wiki.darkjedibrotherhood.com/view/ACC_Guide#Ellipse
Again, tense here "than" not "then".
This is good use.
General note, if you're going to use alien dialect, I should be able to understand it in the context, or you can simply explain what it meant in the description following the dialogue. It's annoying to read footnotes as it takes away from the flow of me following the matches story.