Aiden hesitated for a moment, eyeing her arsenal suspiciously.
“Alcohol and weapons don’t mix,” he warned.
“Don’t be ridiculous. Now, make yourself useful and get me a drink,“ Blade growled with an annoyed edge.
The Taldryanite paused, then cracked a smile.
“Ha! A stubborn woman that can fight. You can keep your weapons, but only if you cooperate. I’ll be watching you,” threatened Aiden.
“You hearing yourself? Stubborn but cooperative? Ha!” teased Blade.
“Deactivate your lightsaber first,” demanded the Taldryanite.
“I must insist you go first,” countered Blade. The Marauder crouched and pointed her lightsaber at him.
“Fine, same time then. On three, okay?” asked Aiden.
“Go ahead,” the Zeltron acquiesced, watching the Taldryanite’s every move.
“Three...two...one…” he counted down.
Aiden deactivated his lightsaber and waited. Blade held her pose for a second, then turned off her own. Relief filled the Seeker’s face as she relaxed her stance and hopped off the table. She let him lead the way to the bar, sitting one chair away from him. A craggy old man took shelter behind the counter, but jumped at the sign of new customers. A bottle in hand, the angry, resolute bartender waved it threateningly as he chastised them for scaring everyone away.
“Hey! Do you want our business or not? You heard the lady. One bottle of Rancor Tequila,” ordered Aiden as he presented his credit chit.
“And two glasses please,” grinned Blade.
The old bartender grumbled, but nonetheless accepted payment.
“Two?” asked the Seeker.
“Yes. I propose a challenge. We will see who can do the most shots. It will be fun. After all, we are at a casino,” she reasoned.
“Sure, I don’t fly the ship. You’re on.” The Taldryanite grinned.
The bartender set the bottle and shot glasses down and retreated a safe distance. The Palatinaean poured the first round and toasted her opponent.
“To victory!” enthused Blade.
The Zeltron downed her shot glass and hit it on the table. Aiden finished off his own with a satisfactory thud. She poured another. Thud. Thud. Another round downed. Round after round, they poured, drank, and banged their glasses. It was its own battle rhythm. The tense evening faded away to smiles and laughter as they both upped the ante. Aiden swayed slightly.
“Ma’am, excuse me. Your shuttle is waiting for you,” reminded the bartender.
“My shuttle? I thought he was taking me back,” explained the confused Zeltron as she pointed at Aiden.
“But you already ordered this one. Do you want me to cancel it?” asked the bartender.
Memory of her Consul’s and Aiden’s words came back, but next to them was her voice, ordering a shuttle for her alone. Blade rubbed her head for a moment. Something was wrong, and all the voices in her mind contradicted each other, even her own. She closed her eyes and shut out all but one, the only one she could truly trust: herself.
Still massaging her head for show, Blade mentally focused on her opponent’s lightsaber. She whipped her arm into action as she used the Force to rip it from his belt, flinging the shocked Seeker’s lightsaber across the room. The Taldryanite paused for a second before reaching for his blaster. She activated her lightsaber and whipped it towards Aiden’s neck, stopping short at the last second.
Time seemed to freeze. Blade saw her saber an inch away from his slightly swaying throat, his blaster’s nozzle pressed against her stomach, and the intense look of a drunk man afraid to die but ready to pull the trigger.
“Looks like we have a stalemate. Move and you’re dead,” growled Blade with an unnerving calm.
Her gut told her to move, but she also wanted to see who would break first. The air was thick with tension, sweat, and fear.
“You should turn your weapon off. One of us could get hurt,” warned Aiden nervously.
“Don’t you mean the two of us?” Blade asked pointedly.
“No, this gun is set for stun. You are the only one with a lethal weapon,” whined the Seeker.
The bartender nervously watched the standoff from a distance. He had been wiping the same glass clean for a while now.
“Yield,” demanded Blade with an icy stare.
“No,” said the Seeker in a determined but shaky voice.
Doubt stabbed the Zeltron as Aiden forced her to make a decision between standing down or murdering a man who refused to get out of her way.
“Could you kill me? That is the only way you leave here alone,” threatened the Human.
Blade’s face turned redder with frustration. The stubborn drunk fool refused to leave empty-handed. Could she kill him?
The Zeltron’s conscience became embroiled in internal struggle. The dark and the light clashed for supremacy. Logic told her to kill Aiden. She didn’t know for sure if the gun was set to stun. Unfortunately, compassion nagged at the back of her mind. All the times her father had stayed his hand and saved someone were like beacon of hope. The Marauder grimaced and turned off her lightsaber. She hoped her ideals wouldn’t get her killed.
“I”ve done the right thing. Now it’s your turn. Let me go,” urged Blade earnestly.
“I’m sorry, but I can’t. It’s for my Clan,” Aiden apologized.
Blade felt a fresh surge of anger and disappointment. The Force screamed at her to run, but she wanted the fool’s head on a platter. She moved to reactivate her weapon and continue her strike towards the Seeker’s neck.
Pew.
Blade fell to the floor, fingers going limp around her lightsaber. Her crimson red blade disappeared, but not before she heard an agonizing scream. Her saber hilt clattered to the ground next to her. Aiden’s anguished moans became a lullaby as she succumbed to darkness.
Grand Master's*
You switch perspective here. We are fully in Aiden's perspective, then suddenly we're hearing Blade's internal thoughts. It's jarring and there should be a line break or cutting-point to help us signal the switch over. Also Zeltron not Zeltran
There are better ways to word this. "As they battled" or "as they traded blows". Throughout is applying a time modifier that takes you out of the action that you're portraying.
Pretty cool set up, good use of +3 Control Self at the end.
-W
I liked the set up. The rationale for the match was interesting and original.
**Stand down, Taldryan.
**Zeltron's