Eager to lose his adversary, Cyris sped down the stairs into the Dark Hall’s gaping maw. So quick were his steps that he nearly lost his footing. Righting himself against the hall he pushed into the darkness. The further he drew from the surface, the darker Antei’s faint glow grew behind him. He reached the ground floor in record time. As he sidestepped around stone debris, the Sith woke clouds of dust beneath his boots. Indeed, the ground was covered in so much sand and dust it felt as if he was still walking outside.
He stopped to take in the entrance to the Dark Brotherhood’s long-abandoned stronghold. He could barely make out the walls, their intricate, engraved designs faded and chipped, lost to time. It was a pity, really, that the powers that be had chosen to forsake this place. In his long, long years, few places had felt more like home to Cyris Oscura than this place.
A gust of wind, howling as it snaked down the staircase, swerved around and past the Black Hand, lifting tendrils of dust that seemed to beckon Cyris onwards. It might have been nineteen years since he had last been here, yet he knew exactly where to go. Eastward he went, down one of three hallways, squinting his eye, hoping it could adjust sufficiently to the low light. He considered using the Force to brush away the streaking footsteps he left in his wake on the dirty floors, but decided against it. It would only waste precious time.
When Marick caught up with him, and he would sooner than later, all would be over.
Lightning was an impressive manifestation of the Force, one to be reckoned with. The seething pain could destroy a man, but this was a Combat Master he was facing; one trained to fight a Sith like himself. Besides, he had not intended to kill the Hapan.
It wasn’t long before Cyris was blindly stumbling forward in darkness. Gone from sight were his hands and his feet, the Dark Hall had swallowed him whole. He trudged forward on memory alone, sliding his fingertips against the wall’s coarse grain as a point of reference, letting mental images from another time guide him. Memories were a fleeting thing however, and too often he stumbled or miscalculated the distance he had travelled. Where he expected to find an archway, he found a solid surface. Silence was a thick as the shadows around him, the dry crunch of his boots and the occasional bleeps of his diagnostics system his only companions. No longer could he hear the baying gale of the outside world somewhere off in the distance. If he took a wrong turn, assuming he hadn’t already, he could find himself trapped for months in the labyrinthine catacombs beneath the surface of Antei.
He had beaten worse odds. By the will of the Force, he would persist once more.
Finally, just as the spectre of doubt stroked his subconscious with its long, serrated fingers, the Dark Hall exploded into artificial life around him. Decade old lights flickered and blinded him as the stronghold’s automated systems wheezed, hiccuped and roared. Suddenly, he stood two decades in the past. Chiselled columns towered above him, ending in a familiar domed roof. Intricate carvings sprawled over its entire surface and down the walls like wild vines over an ancient temple on Yavin IV. Large chunks of concrete had broken from the ceiling and now rested on the debris-strewn floor beneath it.
On the edge of this cavernous, circular chamber, he could almost see the Dark Brotherhood’s acolytes standing in rows, listening to their masters as they learned the ways of the Lightsaber. He could imagine them paired off, engaging in sparring matches. Countless alcoves lined the walls. These alcoves housed a statue, effigies of past warriors that had marked the history of these halls. So many he did not recognize, more than he could have ever imagined, and few of these statues had weathered the passing of time unscathed.
The Black Hand’s eyes stopped on one particular warrior. Even if this was a miniature imitation, he could tell this had been a man of imposing stature. Few stood prouder than he. Oscura approached to take a closer look. The chiseled jaw, the furrowed brow, the uncompromising, cold stare, it was a face he had not seen in a long, long time. A flowing mane of hair fell over his shoulders. The sculptors had done a surreal job capturing the man’s demeanor, but what caught Oscura’s eye now was the slick armor plating over the statue’s right arm. The Arm of Ashvroth, it had been called; an artifact dating back hundreds of years before the Battle of Yavin, to the days of the Dread Cult.
A small bronze plaque beneath the statue read:
Cyris Oscura
The Black Hand
4th Combat Master
“Hello, old friend,” he mused. There was a pang of sorrow in his heart. How proud and glorious he had been, a god amongst mortals, an indomitable presence that inspired fear and awe in equal parts. And what was he now? A decrepit old fool somehow swept up in the Palatinaean Emperor’s petty schemes. He was nothing more than a pawn, a disposable piece on a gameboard. This was to be the destiny of the fabled Black Hand. An ignominious death, taken by sickness in the deepest, most obscure recesses of the Dark Jedi Brotherhood.
He had come to Antei in hope of rekindling the flame in his heart. Instead, he found the undeniable, merciless truth. He was no longer the Black Hand. He was no longer Cyris Oscura. These names which he had fabricated up eons past had long lost their meaning. Now, they rang hollow in his mind.
“Oscura!”
The single word ripped through the silence like a Rancor’s ravenous teeth. Again and again and again it echoed from wall to wall, calling the fake name over and over. The old man, the shadow of the past turned around to face Marick Arconae who now stood across a ways from him. The assassin looked worse for the wear, his outfit caked with dust, and still this insufferable maggot of a man showed no emotion. The old man glanced over to the statue of Cyris Oscura and chuckled. He too had been that way once.
“How unbecoming of an assassin to announce his presence. Especially when his prey is distracted by a moment of reverie. My boy, there is so much I could teach you,” the ancient Human said as he approached his would-be assassin, arms stretched out by his sides.
Marick did not move a muscle. The hilt of his shoto was in his hand, unignited. The man who had been Cyris Oscura wondered how long it would be before the boy would cut him down.
“You wonder what you must do now. Here I am, unarmed, ripe for the plucking, yet you are a man of honor,” the old man paced slowly as he talked, his hands now crossed behind his back. In truth, he knew not if Marick truly harboured such reservations. “Oh, I have no doubt that you are a cold-hearted killer. You have sacrificed your humanity for the greater good. You have no qualms with killing me. Yet… here I stand before you with no weapons to defend myself with. What to do, what to do?”
The answer was a swift one. Marick was on the old man with inhuman speed before the Palatinaean Proconsul could utter another word. The blue blade weaved a zig-zagging series of swipes through thin air, the old man barely dodging clear of its lethal touch. The man who once styled himself the Black Hand seemed to react faster, move with increasing agility with each arcing stroke of the shoto. The Gray Jedi was clearly intending to end this once and for all and his relentless onslaught underlined that. Left, right, backhand, overhead, again and again it came from all angles. Without a lightsaber to protect himself, the Sith knew one misstep could cost him his life.
The Hapan pressed his advantage, moving faster and pushing harder. No amount of pirouettes and rolls would be enough. Pushed back on his heels until he nearly slipped, the old man unleashed every ounce of his power at once. Hands thrown forward in reckless abandon, he commanded the Force against his enemy. So intent was Marick on ending this that he was caught helpless by the incoming supernatural push. With a gasp, he was shoved back several paces, his feet screeching against the ancient floor. He came to a halt in a thick cloud of dust that swirled around him and veiled the surrounding area in a haze. Panting, he dug one knee into the ground to recover. Blue plasma died instantly.
“You should know, Black Hand,” he spat between breaths, “that I was not sent to Antei with orders to assassinate you.”
The Sith paced in circles around the recovering man, ready to retaliate at the sign of another attack. Still, the reigning Combat Master had pricked his interest.
“Do you truly believe your leaders sent you here without knowing that you would encounter the Black Hand? I had expected Sadowans, maybe even the Inquisitorius to hound me here, but your masters are playing an eccentric game.”
“You flatter yourself to think this, Cyris,” the young Hapan answered flatly. He might have been right. The old man believed otherwise. This was no coincidence. It could not be a coincidence. Two powerful beings such as Marick and the Black Hand did not cross paths against the will of the Force. And the fact of the matter was that he’d spent too many years, witnessed too many different Grand Masters to believe this wasn’t a game.
“Do you even know why you are here, my boy?”
There was a moment of silence before Marick hissed an unceremonious, “No.”
“We are threats. That is what we are, you and I. We are creatures of great power and this sits ill with those that hold our leash; the Voice, the Grand Master, the Palatinaean Emperor, they are all alike. I know you not, Son of Shadows, yet I know of you and I know what you represent.”
“You know nothing about me,” said Marick.
The Gray Jedi exploded forward, once more charging for the old man. This time the Sith was ready and prepared. Standing straight backed, arrogance oozing from his every pore, he held his gleaming mechanical hand up like clenching talons towards the Combat Master’s head. A miasma of wrenching emotions whirled in his heart and in his mind, fueling the dark energies that seeped from his withered body.
The trademark light blue of the shoto flashed into existence yet again but the Hapan did not reach his prey. Marick’s eyes went uncharacteristically wide and the Gray Jedi was forced to his knees by the sheer momentum of his attack. The old man stood over him, only a few steps away, his hand still trained on his enemy. He could hear the Hapan quivering, sucking shaky breaths through his teeth as he undoubtedly fought the unnatural terror that besieged his mind.
The Sith focused on his enemy, pouring every ounce of hatred and malice through the Force to stoke the boy’s greatest fears. He was relentless, merciless. Fear would break the boy, or the man that was once Cyris Oscura would die.
“I know of your resignation, Son of Shadow, and the weight of responsibility which you forced upon the shoulders of your protégé, the Miraluka. A coward, you abandoned a mere girl to the thankless strain of leadership.”
The Sith spoke loudly, clearly, his voice booming across the gaping hall that witnessed their final showdown. The Black Hand had made a point to keep tabs on his successors and learn of their careers through the Brotherhood. Marick Arconae’s had been particularly noteworthy. Indeed, even before they had met, the Hapan reminded him of a young Cyris Oscura.
Knowledge was a weapon as sharp as any knife.
He had to respect Marick. Many in his place had been reduced to a whimpering, moaning mess before the might of Sith’s powers. Heavy breathing and nigh on visible quivering were the only telltale signs that the Gray Jedi was afflicted by the Dark Side’s venom.
“You are, like me, a pawn in their games. Again I ask you, do you even know why you are here, my boy? You answered no before. Let me open your eyes with another question? Where do your loyalties truly lie?” The Palatinaean began pacing slowly, his good hand moving to his mechanical arm. His voice became strained as he split his concentration, “Our meeting this day is our culling. It was foreseen that we would face off within these halls and that one of us would die. They care not which, for it weakens us both.”
The old man released his grip on Marick’s mind and stepped back. It wasn’t long before the Gray Jedi shook free of his torpor and pushed himself up, but what he found visibly gave him pause. At his feet lay the Black Hand’s mechanical arm, its connectors still sparking. The Sith saw the confusion and only stirred it further when he reached to the diagnostics terminal embedded in his chest and yanked it free in a shower of sparks. A shrill, continuous beep filled the air until he threw it aside. The man that was called Cyris Oscura immediately faltered and slumped as his lungs burned in his rib cage.
“What is the meaning of this?” asked the Gray Jedi, a soft tremor in his voice still present from his recent ordeal.
“I am done playing their games. Strike me down now and you leave this place a victor. Yet you risk your life in attacking me. Abstain, allow this old man to leave with his life, we both leave this insipid husk of a world victorious. Stay your hand and I no longer pose a threat to you.”
The old man edged ever closer to his would-be killer. He moved slower now, each step laborious without the aid of his robe’s integrated systems. He sucked in one long, raspy drag of air as he drew to a stop before Marick. The boy’s knuckles were white around the hilt of his shoto.
“I am no longer their pawn…” The ancient warrior narrowed his eyes as he spoke these last biting words, “Are you?”
Are you?
The End
Story
Your opening post has everything. It sets the scene beautifully, it adds some emotional stake to the evident protagonist, establishes the combat expertise of both combatants. Well written.