[Bleep bloop mrrrr]
“I don’t want to hear it, Bo. You’ve done nothing but whine the entire trip here. You know why I need this and I’m not going to explain it again,” Aul quipped back to his R3 unit. The little bugger had been good company on his travels, but between his strong opinions and his incessant need to decorate himself with the bones of small animals, the Gray Jedi was questioning the astromech’s programming. Bo insisted it made him more intimidating, Aul found it a bit pitiful.
[Wrrrr wooooo wiiiiir]
“Is your processing unit malfunctioning? I should get you wiped. We’re here because I need to know the truth, Bo. I need to know there wasn’t more I could do to help those Void victims. You weren’t there, you couldn’t possibly know the terror I saw in their eyes as they lost hold of sanity and let go to madness. As their humanity dissipated into nothingness, an abyss. How they screamed when I was forced to… dispatch them. There are records here, on the Ballista, of a similar incident from long ago. I need to know there wasn’t something I was missing. I need to know more,” Aul’s voice trailed off as lost himself in thought.
Indicators flashed and blared in the cockpit of the Savant’s modified Fang Fighter, the Discovery, as he approached the landing coordinates a few tens of meters away from a section of the Ballista. This particularly piece had largely survived the fateful crash which so violently tore Sepros apart. He’d travelled the galaxy in the little ship in search of evidence that he was not solely to blame for the outcome of the Void epidemic. He took personal responsibility for the thousands of lives lost, the hundreds he had to kill with his own hands.
There was once a time when Aul refused to participate in combat, believing it to be archaic and cruel. Then, when the moment required, he was left with no choice but to step up and defend his brethren. His confidence grew and, eventually, the scientist found justice and truth in the act of combat. But killing innocent victims of a plague? That was more than he’d bargained for. The act left a scar on his psyche he was unsure he’d ever fix. Until this lead.
“Take her down, Bo, right there,” Aul commanded to his astromech. His ship had a droid brain module installed, but he forewent its use outside of combat situations when he needed Bo to focus on weaponry and shielding. The landing gear of the ship extended into position and the ship gently set down on the craggy surface of Sepros.
The Savant opened the hatch of the cockpit and jumped out smoothly. He reached into the satchel over his shoulder and took out a datapad. After quickly typing in a few commands, he nodded and looked into an exposed hallway of the ship wreckage.
“I guess it’s this way,” Aul thought to himself before turning back and shouting up to Bo, “watch the ship.”
[Mrrr meeee]
“No, you’re not coming with. This isn’t like Nar Shaddaa, there’s no entertainment here for you,” Aul snapped back at his computerized counterpart. He made his way into the wreckage.
Wires, exposed and hanging out of durasteel panels of the hallway, still sizzled with residual electricity from the ship’s million-year reactors. The metallic smoke they let off as they impacted each other in the lightest breeze made the entire corridor smell noxious and deadly; a perfect complement to the blood-stained floors and flickering lights illuminating odd turns and twists deep in the furthest reaches of the kilometer-long stretch of ship.
“Here,” the Gray Jedi said to himself as he stood in front of a blast door indicating the medical bay. He mashed the control pad to the right of the door only to find it jammed. He scoffed to himself at the thought that any of this might be easy before unhooking his lightsaber from his belt and igniting the light blue blade with a snap-hiss. He plunged the blade deep into the blast door, instantly turning the path of the weapon into molten durasteel. He traced a large, oblong shape into the door and kicked it in. The massive weight of the door shook the ground as it landed with a crash. Aul stepped into the pitch black medical bay, his lightsaber still ignited. A dim shape reflected light blue back at him from the corner.
“Who are you?” Aul instantly called back into the darkness. He raised his blade up in a guard.
Laughter broke out from the direction of the reflective object.
“Kojiro. I thought I felt your vile presence. What business have you here?” Aul shot back, unwilling to lower his guard. He squinted carefully in the darkness of the room, sure he could see a datapad held in the hands of his ambusher. The Seer dropped the datapad and Aul could barely make out the name “Sanguinius” before it fell behind a counter.
“You, it would seem,” Kojiro said with a smirk, “though I must admit I didn’t expect to find you here in this junk pile. Unless, you think there’s something here for you… yes… that’s it. You’ve been ranting on and on to anyone who cared to listen about how you feel responsible for the Aeotheran plague deaths…”
The room suddenly felt darker, smaller, colder to Aul.
“You know,” Kojiro continued, his cybernetic eye piercing Aul’s gaze, “it’s a real shame you failed in such spectacular fashion. Naga Sadow had high hopes for you… once.”
Aul’s throat began to close with anxiety and, as his grip loosened, he watched his lightsaber drop to the ground. The Defender looked up just in time to see the Marauder’s white-bladed saber closing in on his face.
Syntax
I presume you meant to say "particularly large piece", but that would have also been a case of repetition so... doomed if you did, doomed if you didn't!
You favor "door" as your word of choice here. Three sentences in a row! It's good to change it up and keep the flow interesting.
The use of "back" here implies he is returning an answer to something. Yet, no one spoke prior.
Story
This feels somewhat like retreading for the sake of exposition. You covered this well enough in his dialogue with Bo. Now it's back.
So, the ending here is a bit interesting but also head scratching. If Kojiro "found" Aul there, how was he there first? Especially when you consider that Aul literally had to carve his way in. It just becomes odd from a story perspective and remains very vague. Beyond this, there is no true combat in this post. It appears there is some intimidation and perhaps Terror usage, then a single attack. This is the first post in a 2+2 match. At least half the post should be devoted to combat in order to maintain a proper plot pacing. In this case, there was none. It was almost entirely setup.