This is what happens when some schutta swaps out me whiskey fer rum, go and punch tha first bloke I run inta.
Bleu spat on the ground and glared at the tall, armored Human. At least he thought it was a Human. Hard to tell with the funny looking helmet, but the build suggested at least a near-Human. The man was watching him carefully as he worked his right shoulder in a circle. He'd had enough warning from the Force to at least roll with the blow, but it had still been unpleasant. With a sigh, the Ryn pulled his bottle from his jacket; already the half empty vessel sloshed a bit as he took a long drink of the rum within.
"Where do you think you are going, friend?" asked the Ryn, his tongue feeling strange. Bloody rum.
"I told you. Leave. My task does not involve you; I will not hesitate to cause you further harm." The armored figure pointed towards the bridge Kordath had only just crossed.
Sod that, barely made it across the first time, he mused as he upended the bottle, taking another drink. "No, no I think you and your poor manners need some adjustment, good sir!"
Kordath clenched his left hand,— down by his side— and pulled at the Force, channeling it towards his palm. He saw the armored figure's head cock to the side. Oh, that's curious. Oh, kark, no it ain't.
"Are you a Jedi? You do not look like one of the Odanites." The Sadowan slowly stepped towards him, curiosity obvious, as well as some wariness.
"Really?" responded Bleu, raising an eyebrow and lifting his hand at the man. "Racist."
"Wha—" began the Human, confused by the declaration and surprised by the flash of Force-conjured light that filled his vision. He clutched at his eyes with one hand, hissing in pain and lifting his other to send a crackle of lightning towards the casually dressed Ryn.
Hair rising from the sudden upswing of electricity in the air, Kordath stumbled to the side, trusting his instincts to keep him from getting fried. He hadn't lied. He really did have a job to do. Intel had suggested someone would try and intercept a Lotus courier working in the area. The Arconan's task was to keep said thief busy, because who better to stop a robbery than another thief?
The best way to stop it was to simply put the man down, he decided, lifting his bottle above his head and jumping at him. If the armored man hadn't been recovering from his sudden blindness, it was unlikely he’d have ever attempted such an attack. As it was, the bottle smashed across the man's armored forearm, suddenly thrown up in defense. Now how did he know I was gonna do that? The jagged edges of the bottle scraped across the Human’s arm and scratched his unprotected lower face, drawing blood.
Bleu felt pleased with himself right until he sensed a surge of power and found himself flung back several feet. He tried to roll with it, only to find himself hitting the base of a pillar with a dull thud. The Arconan lay there for a moment with teeth gritted in pain as he did a mental inventory of his bits. None of his bones seemed to be broken, but he'd feel that one after he sobered up.
Not that that'll be a big—oh, right, smashed me bottle. More on tha ship. If I get back ta tha ship. Just gotta hold this fellow fer a while.
Kordath groaned as he got back to his feet. He saw his foe standing tall, blood dripping from his face. In the man's left hand was a grenade, in his other a lightsaber with another on his belt. He watched the canister get slammed into the ground, and heard the signature snap-hiss of a saber activating. Smoke began to fill the area, rapidly obscuring the space around them. The Ryn dug into his pockets, threading his fingers through the brass knuckles hidden inside.
This might hurt.
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