Stres'trong'armis stepped back, over the unconscious form of the offensive Rodian, hands still raised as the Coruscanti woman charged at him. It was impressive to the Chiss, how well the casino patrons were dealing with a lightsaber wielding lady in their presence. A glance at a group nearby showed slips of paper and credits changing hands, but Strong had no time to dwell upon this as Lucine closed.
He groped for the riot baton at his belt as he side stepped her initial attack, anger driving the strike. She pulled back, blade held high both upon the hilt and above her shoulders, pointed forward. Strong grasped the handle of his tonfa like weapon, flicking the power on and spinning it once, holding the length along his right forearm and holding it before him. He watched as she spun, pivoting in place to gain momentum with her next attack, the blue blade lashing out.
Strong moved his baton to block, the saber crackling as it impacted the charged prongs. For a moment he thought she would come to her senses when her green eyes widened at the realization that his defense didn't budge an inch under her hit.
"Madame Lucine, please, I understand you are upset. But I fear you're making a scene."
"You threw me over the bar, messed up my hair and broke one of my nails! I am allowed to 'make a scene,' Mister Garmis," she spoke in anger, a flush coming over her pale features.
With a resigned sigh, Strong pushed back against her saber, causing Lucine to stumble back several feet. She shifted gears, stepping to the side and using a chair to ascend a table. As the Chiss approached, she twirled her saber in a showy figure eight, flourishing it much to the delight of some of the on lookers. Strong looked around as the noise in the casino escalated, gamblers watching and shouting encouragement to one or the other of the fighters.
"They're betting on us, now. How delightful; make sure you put on a good show while I care my pedicure bill out of you."
"This is an inappropriate display, Madame. Fighting for sport is all well and good, but this is being fueled by anger and alcohol! You're obviously intoxicated and lost some control; please stop so that we may leave."
"I am not drunk! I haven't had a drink since I got here!"
Strong turned his head and gave her a questioning look, "You smell as if you've had your fill, Mistress Lucine, there is no shame in this but do not pretend that it is not affecting your judgment."
Lucine threw her head back and screamed, cutting through the chatter and shouts of the gamblers. She pointed her blade directly at the Chiss, who was cautiously staying outside of her reach.
"You. Threw. Me. At. The. Bar."
"My apologies for trying to keep a sophisticated Lady safe from blaggards, you are showing you can handle yourself I will admit."
"Oi! Stop jabberin' and fight ya silly gits!" came a shout from the crowd.
"Yeah! Cut his head off, babe, and look good doing it!"
Strong lifted an eyebrow and looked to the crowd. His gaze swept over the variety of species, just catching a Zeltron who cupped his hands to yell, "I got a hundred credits on the big guy, give that silly little schutta a beating she won't forget!"
The Chiss lowered his guard, much to the confusion of Lucine, up on one of the card tables. She watched as he took a few long strides towards the crowd, the nearest gamblers quieting and starting to back away. One large, scarred knuckled hand reached out and grasped the Zeltron by the front of his vest, lifting him from his feet to face Strong.
"You should not use such language in reference to a Lady, good sir."
"S-s-sorry. I'll watch my words in the future. I'm sorry. Please put me down."
With a grunt, Strong tossed the gambler back into the crowd, turning back to Lucine. She looked different, fresher, as she had when she first arrived at the club. He turned his head slightly, this way and that, uncertain of how she'd achieved it but sure it had something to do with the Force. Her poise had returned, as well, and she stood with one hip cocked out and idly spinning her saber, grinning.
"How about this, people," she began, her voice projecting to be heard. The crowd quieted, somewhat, and eyes turned towards her. "I have a very extensive expense account, and am willing to part with, say, five hundred credits to anyone who can knock my large friend here down. That's five hundred credits if you can get him off his feet!"
"This is ill advised, Madame Vasano. I have no desire to harm these people."
Oh like they have a prayer, but it might be fun to watch, he heard her speak in his mind, delight evident in her mental voice.
Again, the big Chiss sighed as he spun his riot baton and began slowly turning to take in the sight of the gamblers, waiting for someone to take up her offer. Surely no one was foolish enough, he thought. Right until a glass bottle flew dangerously close to his face, smashing into the floor.
"Very well! Ruffians, blaggards, scoundrels, and fools! If you wish to do battle with a son of Garmis, then come!" he shouted, facing the direction the bottle had come from.
Positive Takeaways
To be honest, I was a bit surprised at the randomly-fight-your-ally-in-a-bar premise in the Duelist Hall instead of Funderdome, but then the big blue jackass broke a nail and it flowed quite well. This is my first match with Strong, but it seems like you have a really solid handle on both characters.
Can Be Improved
I have very little to criticize here. There were two minor Syntax things I noted:
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Otherwise this was polished, true to the characters, and a great read.