Granta's crimson blade clashed against Lucine's emerald one as the two women fought. Prackx used her superior size and strength to her advantage as she delivered blow after devastating blow. It was not long before the Arconan felt her muscles began to tire; she began to avoid Granta's attacks rather than deflecting them. Despite her maneuvering, Lucine was steadily driven backward as the fight wore on. One particularly strong slash drove the Knight back several steps, and she found herself teetering on the edge of the pit. A look over her shoulder provided a dizzying view into the abyss below.
"All right! All right," she gasped as she turned a shade of green that almost matched the trim of her dress. "I know when I am out matched!"
The Warlord smirked at her words, though she kept her lightsaber poised for another strike. "So you're going to come quietly, then?"
Lucine bit her lower lip as she considered her options. It was obvious that she could not defeat Granta in single combat, but the idea of being held hostage by the woman did not appeal to her either. The prospect was simply too humiliating. "That may not be necessary, darling. It occurs to me that I may have a way to help you find the man you are searching for."
"You just said you didn't know where he is," the Warlord said impatiently.
"I do not. However, I can put you in touch with someone who has the skills to help you find Andrelious," Lucine replied.
Prackx frowned suspiciously at the Knight's suddenly helpful demeanor. "That seems a little too convenient," she growled.
"What can I say? It is amazing how clearly one can think when they are treated to a view like this," Lucine said as she gestured back toward the pit. "Besides, what is the alternative? There are no assurances that whoever comes to retrieve me will have any knowledge about Andrelious's whereabouts. It could turn out to be a waste of time."
As she spoke, the Knight lowered her lightsaber and assumed a more relaxed stance. As relaxed as one could be when perched precariously next to a seemingly bottomless pit. When the hulking woman made no move to attack, Lucine continued. "Now, my contact is a slicer of considerable skill. I have no doubt that he would be able to point you in the correct direction. Would you not rather have concrete information, instead of hoping that you run into someone who could tell you what you want to know?"
The crimson blade lowered a fraction of an inch as Granta considered her words. Yearning, hope and mistrust of the Arconan all flickered briefly across her features. Finally, the Equite's face settled into a stony expression. “Contact him. But you'd better not be stalling.”
Lucine studied Prackx for a moment, using clues from her facial features and posture to determine her mental state. The Warlord seemed to be on edge, her muscles tensed and ready to respond to any threat. Clearly, Granta was expecting some sort of trick or attack and was prepared to respond with force. Lucine would have to play this carefully if she did not want to be sent hurtling over the edge into the abyss.
The Knight deactivated her lightsaber. Moving with deliberate slowness so as not to startle the Equite, she clipped the weapon to her belt before retrieving a comlink from one of her pouches. Under Prackx's suspicious glare, she tapped a frequency into the comlink. Silence fell between the two women as she sent the signal.
“Who is this? How did you get this frequency?” the voice that emitted from the comlink was clearly being filtered through a modulator, making it impossible to tell if the speaker was male or female.
“Slicemeister? It is me, Lucine,” the Knight spoke up quickly before her contact could break the connection. “It is time for you to repay that favor you owe me.”
“What do you want?”
“I am looking for someone, darling, and I want you to find him. His name is Andrelious Mimosa-Inahj,” Lucine said. She glanced at Granta, who was frowning impatiently. “I would appreciate it if you were to find him as quickly as possible. I have a lady here who is impatient to catch up to him.”
“Sure, I can do that. But I'm gonna need more than a name,” the modulated voice replied.
“Unfortunately, all I know is that he left the Dajorra system awhile ago,” the Arconan said.
“That's it? I'm gonna need more than that! Do you have a ship name? And ident key? Any idea where he was going?” the frustration in Slicemeister's voice was apparent despite the voice modulator.
Lucine looked to Granta, who shook her head slowly. The Knight sighed heavily. “Sorry, darling. All we have is a name.”
“Well, that's just great! What kind of idiot goes hunting for someone without doing some basic research?”
Lucine noted the scowl that was darkening the Equite's features. “Now, now, Slicemeister, let's not irritate the big, frightening lady, hmm?”
“I'm just saying, it's gonna be like finding a needle in a haystack. Do you have any idea how big the galaxy is?” The clacking of keys could be heard as the slicer continued to rant. “Huge! That's how big it is. It's gonna take—well, what do you know! I found something.”
“What?” Granta's scowl quickly vanished at the Slicemeister's words. In her eagerness, she snatched the comlink out of Lucine's hands. “What did you find?”
“Well, it seems there's someone by the name of Andrelious Mimosa-Inahj in the Outer Rim. Specifically in the Kessel system,” Slicemeister replied.
“Where? Tell me!” the Equite roared, clutching the communicator tightly.
“Kessel! He's on Kessel!”
It was all Prackx needed to hear. Finally, a solid lead! Not wanting to waste any more time, she threw down the comlink and strode toward the exit.
Lucine hastily took a few steps away from the ledge, breathing a sigh of relief as she did so. She looked at Granta's rapidly retreating form, but it was clear that the Warlord now had bigger things on her mind than finishing their battle. The redhead allowed herself a small smile, though it quickly vanished as she turned her attention to the shattered remains of her comlink.
“Wh-what just happened?” Peppa asked as he peered from his hiding place.
Lucine paused, remembering belatedly that Peppa had been spared. Of course, he would not have heard any of the auditory illusion that she had woven for Granta. Such a shame; Lucine was rather proud of her work. “Our large friend got a tip that the person she is looking for is in the Kessel system,” the Arconan replied.
“Really,” Peppa said dryly. He gestured toward the broken comlink on the ground. “You know, it's funny. I didn't think a small thing like that would be able to get a signal all the way down here.”
Lucine shot the Togruta a warning look, before glancing back toward Granta. Fortunately, the Equite was already out of sight.
“Well, it is a good thing that Granta did not notice that, or my little ruse would not have worked,” she said, giving the lieutenant a sweet smile. “Now, I believe we have some business to conclude.”
“Oh,” Peppa paused, looking around at the broken bodies of his fellow gang members and the spice suppliers. “Oh, wonderful,” he added, his voice devoid of enthusiasm.
Positive Takeaways
The setup was great and works nicely with your character’s skills, which are woven in nicely into the story. The bonus was your inclusion of the motivations which was crucial and much appreciated. Below is but one example:
Interesting way to start a fight and it flowed nicely from the setup.
Can Be Improved
This was a nice post to read but it read like a novel rather than a fight. Specifically, ~89% of this post was setup that went at a slower pace than an actual fight. Moving forward, I highly suggest including more fighting in addition to your already wonderful setups.