Satsi's shrieks of rage echoed behind her as Lucine hurried along the narrow street. So close. She had been so close to getting the Fade to listen to her. But there was no chance of that happening now. Lucine sighed inwardly. She had wanted to get Satsi attention and distract her from her original plan to kill Martellus, and she had been successful in that regard. Perhaps a bit too well. It was highly likely that the Reaver would simply try to kill her when she eventually cleared the blinding dust from her eyes.
Hastily, the redhead scanned her surroundings, trying to come up with a viable plan. Unwashed bodies littered the street, slumping against the crumbling walls or even lying on the detritus-ridden duracrete. Most of the people kept their gaze turned downward, staring through vacant eyes with expressions devoid of hope or emotion. She would find no help there. Even worse, she would be quite conspicuous in this crowd.
The 'buildings' were not much better as they were little more than pieces of rotting cloth fashioned into makeshift shanties. They would offer little in the way of concealment and would provide no protection if Satsi decided to open fire with her slugthrowers.
Lucine briefly considered shrouding herself in an illusion, but a dull headache behind her eyes quickly dissuaded her. She was spreading herself a bit too thin; best to conserve her strength in case the Reaver managed to catch up with her. Instead, she drew her cloak over her head and picked her way down the street as hastily as she could manage, considering plans and backup plans as she moved.
At last, her emerald eyes fell upon one of the decaying towers. She approached the ramshackle structure and peered into the gloom within. The ground was covered with refuse and pieces of broken duracrete, but it seemed that no one had chosen to take shelter within its walls. A quick glance upward showed her why; the ceiling sagged dangerously, held aloft only by two crumbling support beams. It seemed the denizens of the slums would rather sleep in the open air than risk death in a building that was perilously close to collapse.
As Lucine studied the structure, the beginnings of an idea began to take shape in her mind. Satsi's profile indicated that she had a legendary temper and a tendency for extreme violence. As angry as she was, it was unlikely that she would simply let Lucine walk away from their little encounter. But Lucine was determined to complete her task and see to it that Martellus Narta made it off Nar Shaddaa alive. Thoughtfully, she drew her lightsaber as she settled upon a course of action. There was simply nothing for it. One of them was going to have to die.
Blood. Pain. These were the thoughts that were foremost on Satsi's mind as she scrubbed away the blinding dust and scanned the street with bloodshot eyes. She was going to find that karking redheaded whore, and make her answer every single question the Reaver had. And then she was going to break every bone in her body. Slowly, and with great enthusiasm.
Though her vision was still blurred, she barely made out a flicker of crimson as a distant figure disappeared into one of the towers. The Equite started toward the structure, even as doubt gnawed at her mind. What if this was yet another trick? As quickly as the thought arose, Satsi pushed it aside. Every sparkfinger had limits, and that kriffing svaper had to be reaching the end of hers.
Still, she approached the edifice cautiously, studying it carefully. It was not difficult to see why the redhead would choose to hide out here; the small size of the decaying building would make it difficult for Satsi to effectively use her slugthrowers. The Reaver had to admit, it wasn't a bad strategy. But the downside was that it would also make it harder to wield a lightsaber. Which meant the fighting would be just the way Satsi liked it: up close and personal.
The Equite peered into the darkness within the tower. At first glance, it appeared there was no one there, but she was certain she had seen someone slip inside. So Lucine was either wasting her resources trying to make Satsi think she had gone in, or she was trying to hide in the shadows using her sparky cloak trick. Satsi was betting on the latter. She allowed herself a feral grin as she holstered her slugthrower, before stepping into the gloom.
The air hung heavy with the stench of despair and human waste. The Reaver picked her way carefully across the rubble-strewn floor as she searched for any signs of her prey. Her ears pricked as she heard what she thought was the sound of breathing coming from the empty space beside one of the support beams. There.
Satsi allowed her eyes to pass over the spot where she thought Lucine was hiding as she made a slow circuit around the room. As she drew nearer to the beam, a shadowy figure materialized from thin air and raised a blaster in the Reaver's direction. With a burst of speed, Satsi crossed the space between them, lashing out with a right hook that impacted squarely against her foe's jaw. Lucine gave a cry of pain as the blaster clattered harmlessly to the ground.
“What's the matter? All out of sparky mind tricks?” Satsi sneered as she drove her fist into the redhead's stomach. Lucine sank to the ground with a groan, but the Reaver was far from finished. Hastily, she kicked the blaster further away, before bringing her boot heavily down upon the redhead's grasping right hand. Satsi could not help but to smile grimly at the crunch of breaking bones and Lucine's choked cry of pain. “Think maybe you wanna answer some of my questions now?”
“I do not make a habit of giving information for free,” Lucine gasped as she clutched her mangled hand to her chest.
The Reaver responded with a swift kick to the Sith's side, reveling in the snap of shattering ribs as her foot connected. “I think you might wanna make an exception this time.”
The kick had knocked the wind out of her foe. The Reaver took a step back, waiting for Lucine to catch her breath even as she watched her suspiciously for any more tricks.
“All right,” the Sith wheezed at last. “I will... answer your... questions.”
“Damn right you will,” Satsi snapped. “Starting with the last question I asked you. Why're you here?”
Lucine took a deep, agonized breath. But before she could speak, a faint scuffling sound drew Satsi's attention toward the entrance. The urchin child she had hired to keep an eye on Martellus stood just within the door, studying the scene through veiled eyes. “Bad time?”
Satsi cast a quick glance down at Lucine, but the redhead showed no signs of having any fight in her. She turned her attention back to the kid as she took a step toward him. “Nah. Wha chu got f'me?”
“Th'guy wen t'th spaceport,” the urchin said as he drew a bit nearer though he carefully kept out of Satsi's reach. “Wan' m'cred.”
The Reaver nodded slowly, as the information confirmed what she had already suspected. But there was still the matter of the 'engine trouble' Lucine had alluded to earlier. “Yeah. Yeah, good.” She reached into her pocket and withdrew a few credit chips. As the urchin snatched them out of her hand, the sudden SNAP-HISS of an igniting lightsaber caused Satsi to snap her attention back to the redhead.
Lucine had managed to haul herself to her feet and was now leaning heavily against the support beam, her emerald blade hanging limply at her side. “You wanted to know why I am here? I am here as a distraction,” she wheezed as she lifted the blade.
“Sithspit!” the Reaver snarled as she snatched her slugthrower from her holster. But before she could fire a shot, Lucine pushed herself away from the column, shearing her blade through the duracrete support as she moved away from it.
There was no time to think. Acting purely on instinct, Satsi grabbed the kid by the arm and dove for the door as dust and rubble began to rain from above. They tumbled out onto the street moments before the ceiling caved in with a thunderous roar.
“Frakkin' lunatic!” the Equite shrieked as she turned back to peer through the dust at ruins of the tower. The loss of the support beam had caused the front of the building to crumble, though the intact column had allowed a small part of the building to remain standing. It was unlikely the redhead had survived the ceiling falling in, but Satsi was leaving nothing to chance. Gripping the blackened slugthrower, she waited just long enough for some of the dust to clear before ducking into the ruins.
It did not take her long to find what remained of the Sith. Apparently, Lucine had tried to take shelter in the part of the tower where the remaining support column had still stood, but she had not made it. The redhead lay still upon the ground, with a large piece of duracrete impaled through her chest. Her green eyes were wide and unblinking, her face set in a final expression of shock. A single line of blood ran from her mouth, matching the crimson pool that slowly spread beneath her.
Satsi gave a low whistle at the sight of her fallen foe. It was a nasty way to go, even if the meddling whore had brought it upon herself. Yet as she turned to leave, Lucine's final words echoed within her mind. A distraction. And Martellus was at the port. What if—
Satsi froze, her eyes widening with a sudden realization. What if Martellus hadn't actually been delayed? Cursing, the Reaver took off for the port in a dead sprint.
As the Equite’s footsteps faded into the distance, the rock shard that protruded from Lucine's chest faded away. The look of shock on the Sith's face faded too, replaced by a small, exhausted smile. Her hand and jaw throbbed with pain, and the very act of breathing brought fresh spasms of agony. The edges of her vision blurred as unconsciousness threatened to overtake her. She closed her eyes, willing herself to remain consciouss.
With the last of her strength, she drew upon her pain to begin the slow task of healing. It was a good thing that Satsi now thought her dead; Lucine would most certainly not be going anywhere for a long time while she waited for her wounds to mend.
Fessic knelt in the shadow of the SoruSuub 3000 Space Yacht and checked his chrono for what felt like the hundredth time. Just a few more minutes, he told himself. Just a few more minutes and I'll be free.
He still was not entirely certain how he had gotten into so much trouble in the first place. Usually, he was pretty good at sabacc. But then one night, he had lost big at the tables. So he had borrowed some credits, knowing that his luck would soon turn around. And when those credits were gone, he had borrowed some more to get back the money he had lost. Before long, he had found himself in debt to his lekku to one of the most dangerous loan sharks on Nar Shaddaa.
But then, he was approached by a pretty redhead with an offer: place a small package aboard Martullus Narta's ship, and all of those ugly debts would disappear. Fessic was no fool; he had an idea of what the package was.
But the thought of finally being free of all of his debts had been too tempting. It would be easy for him to accomplish the task; he had served as the Narta's mechanic for years. In the end, he had taken the deal, and the package.
Freedom, the Twi'lek thought wistfully. Soon, he would not have to worry about being beaten to death by the loan shark's goons in a back alley. After this, he swore, he would never go near the sabacc tables again.
“What are you doing?”
An angry voice snapped Fessic out of his daydream. He yelped in surprise and looked up to find Martellus Narta looming over him. The young crime lord wore an expression of impatience, his thin lips twisted into a snarl.
“N-nothing!” Fessic squeaked, as Martellus seized him by the front of his shirt and threw him against the side of the ship.
“You're damned right about that,” Martellus growled. “An hour ago you told me there was something wrong with the rear thrusters. Now I find you sitting around. So, is the problem fixed, or are you just wasting my time?”
“It's fixed! It's all fixed!” the Twi'lek squealed.
Narta glared at Fessic. “It damned well better be. My time is more valuable than your puny little life, and I don't like when it's wasted.”
“I promise, Mister Narta, sir! It's all done!”
“Good,” Narta snapped. He released Fessic's shirt and shoved him roughly aside. “Now get the hell outta my sight.”
The Twi'lek scampered away with all of the pride of a kicked puppy. Yet he could not help but to watch with morbid curiosity as Martellus boarded the yacht, accompanied by his pilot. The engines engaged, and soon enough the ship began its slow ascent.
Only then the Fessic allow himself to grin. He was free.
His celebration was cut short when a dark-haired woman skidded to a halt nearby. She looked up at the ship and gave a scream of rage as the thrusters kicked in, propelling the yacht into the atmosphere.
As the blue atmosphere began to give way to the velvety blackness of space, Martellus allowed himself to look down at Nar Shaddaa. He had to admit that he had enjoyed making that Twi'lek scum grovel. It wouldn't be long before he would have the power to bring even more people to their knees.
As Martellus turned his thoughts to the power he would soon wield, the timer in the package ticked downward until it finally reached zero. The contents of the package exploded, triggering a second, larger explosion as the thrusters were consumed in the conflagration. The force of the blast tore through the hull, consuming the ship, the pilot and Martellus Narti in a matter of seconds. For the briefest of moments, the fire bloomed within the darkness; a pale imitation of the stars that flickered coldly in the distance.
Below, Satsi watched through wide eyes as the explosion consumed the ship in its entirety. One thing was for certain; Marty would not be walking away from that. As shrapnel began to rain down upon the tarmac, the Reaver finally found the words to express her thoughts concerning the events of the evening. “That bitch! That utter frakkin’ bitch! He was mine to kill!”
Positive Takeaways
I lol’d.
This was a pretty good setup, with the combat flowing naturally from character flaws. Lucine can’t help herself from gilding the lily with Force abilities, which triggers the — probably inevitable — Satsi Rage Response. Martellus himself is a handy macguffin to have in your back pocket, which pays off for both of you later down the line.
Can Be Improved
You saw some of the arcane grammatical discussion Atra and I had in chat, but to recap: the chunk after the semicolon doesn’t have a main verb, but should. The two easy ways to fix this are:
Add one: “...he had and elderly father who…”
Drop the relative clauses and fold them into the main sentence: “...an elderly father would soon die, and a pack of murderous thugs would soon be his to command.”
The first time Shaddaa is misspelled in this match. Not the last.
The post ends up feeling short and abrupt by virtue of how long the other three are, but that’s not something you could have addressed at the time. The main drawback to this is that you skirted the Turel Rule.