Huh, Teikhos thought. The blaster fire stopped. That’s good. Luna should be checking in any second now.
The Zeltron deactivated his lightsaber and clipped it to his belt, wincing as he noticed the dust and grime besieging his clothes. “Ugh! Nancora can eat a—”
A fresh eruption of blaster fire cut the thought short.
Oh. Ok. Well then. The Jedi absentmindedly ran his gloved fingers through his hair, flinching halfway through when he remembered how filthy his hand had been.
“Screw it,” he grunted, and started as quickly as he could towards the building. They're not aiming at me, which is refreshing. Luna’s probably not dead yet. That’s good. But… wait, why is there green smoke? Smoke’s not supposed to be green. Wait, kriff, is that dioxi—
The Jedi flinched at the sound of an explosion, ducking behind his cape to as it flung bits of glass and shrapnel out towards him.
That… escalated quickly. It’s probably going to work out fine. Maybe just a bit not good. At worst. I hope.
Luna groaned, blinking the stars from her eyes as she sat up. It took a second for her to recognize the problem for what it was. Swearing under her breath, she yanked the helmet off her head. The visor was nearly blacked out. It, the rest of helmet, and for that matter the rest of everything had a thick chalky coating of it. Some chemical fire suppressant, Luna thought.
The Mandalorian glanced around, quickly taking stock of the situation. Ever more dust and ash filled the air, swirling around what had become the ruins of ruins. But at least her bo-rifle was on the floor a mere meter away, apparently undamaged. The sight jerked her back to full awareness: she’d found Kendra Icasta. Luna had rolled to one side, drawing her rifle. The pair had opened fire on each other. Luna was pinned behind… a column, perhaps, but some form of cover. She had tossed the dioxis grenade out, expecting it to force her enemy into the open. Instead…
“A thermal detonator,” Luna said to herself with some disgust. The Okami struggled to her feet, just now feeling the mixed effects of age and recent exposure to a high explosive. Still, the column had spared her the brunt of the blast.
The air was clear. Luna wasn’t sure if the heat from a detonator would have affected the dioxis, but if nothing else the remnants of the fire suppression system would have neutralized whatever the shockwave didn’t force out of the room. The Human figured that she couldn’t have been out for more than a few seconds. The mir’shupur was a prancing moron, but he was still a Jedi, and he would not have left her in the field to rot.
“Come out, coward!” the Okami challenged. “I call you to answer for your crimes.”
The telltale hum of an electrowhip powering up was the only answer. Luna turned in the direction of the noise. Kenda Icasta was… well, Luna hoped that the Chiss felt as bad as she looked.
The Shikari was a mottled patchwork of colors. Bare blue skin, red armor, red blood, white fire suppressant, and gray ash mingled in a wretched kaleidoscope. Unfortunately, the damage seemed limited to superficial cuts and scrapes.
“What, your armor could not protect you?” the Mandalorian asked with a smirk.
“Yours won’t do much better,” Kendra snorted. “You’re a traitor to your kind, and I’ll be keeping your helmet as my personal latrine until I kill all your Jedi friends.”
Luna slipped a dagger from its customary place in her armor and settled into a ready stance, arms bent out in front of her, body low and leaning forward like a coiled serpent waiting to strike. “You will try, child.”
And then the bo-rifle hurled itself butt-first up from the floor and slammed into the Chiss’ leg hard enough to sweep her off her feet.
“Whoops! Sorry, was trying to pass that back to Luna,” Teikhos said, casually leaning against a now-doorless door frame. “My bad.”
“Jedi,” Kendra hissed, scrambling back from the Mandalorian as she tried to pull herself but to her feet.
“Yep, that’s why I’ve got the lightsaber. So I’ve got prior engagements tonight, but I thought ‘A gentleman always has time to walk a pretty lady back to the brig.’ So what do you say, cutie? Want to make a date of it?”
"Teikhos." Luna's voice was grave.
The Zeltron beamed. "We're on a first name basis now?"
"This one was not the shooter."
"Wait, wha-kark!" was all the Jedi managed to blurt out as he hurled himself to one side, the Force screaming at him to fling himself to one side. It was fast enough to ruin the killing shot, but not fast enough to spare him the painful experience of a blaster bolt to the shoulder.
Positive Takeaways
A wonderful post! In particular i found the interplay between Luna and Teikhos to be the highlight here. Their characters work perfectly off of each other, and make a great comedic pair. The text was also extremely clean and well formatted,
Can be Improved
A single syntax error in what was, otherwise, a very clean text
The bolded section should be moved to a new paragraph to indicate a new speaker. I had to do a double take to make sure it wasn't Teikhos still speaking.