Lucine observed the feat of strength on display from her perspective on the closet floor. She drew on the Force, quieting the throbbing in the back of her head as she took in the way Strong’s shirt strained from his efforts. The lines of his tailored sleeves grew taut as the metal of the door tore from its sliding brackets, the servos for the automatic systems groaning and sparking. By the time he’d pried it open entirely, she’d cleansed herself of the sharp pain behind her eyes from striking the wall. Still, she saw no reason to stand, no, not yet.
His shoulders heaved as he took several deep breaths, quieting his anger and allowing the adrenaline to burn off. The Chiss looked down towards her and visibly shook, realizing what he’d done. He crouched, bringing one massive hand up to gently lift her chin and cradled the side of her face. It was warm against her cheek, his fingers lying lightly on her hair as if he was afraid to disturb the red locks.
”Mistress Vasano! Forgive me, I did not intend to — I have brought great shame to my family name this day,” he rumbled, hanging his head.
She enjoyed his discomfort for a few moments before resting a hand on his glistening, bald scalp.
“I am not badly injured, Strong, but do be careful. I am much more fragile than you are.”
”Of course, Madame. It is unlike me to lose my temper in such a manner, but that droid!” The big man growled, sending a shiver down her spine from the proximity. His head lifted, red eyes staring into her green ones. ”I beg your forgiveness, Mistress. If you wish to remain here until I can send back a member of the medical staff, I will pursue and neutralize the Skitters unit!”
“No!” she snapped, blushing before she could stop herself. She took a gentler tone, her hand moving to lightly brush his own cheek instead. “No, darling, I would not miss your victory for the world! But, perhaps,” she glanced away coyly, acting embarrassed, “it would not be inappropriate for you to carry me in your pursuit? I do know how the little monster thinks, after all.”
Strong didn’t respond with words; his cheeks already burned with enough shame for accidentally hurting her. Instead, he scooped her up with both arms, cradling her in a manner akin to an invalid or newlywed. She did her best to ignore the spectacle they were displaying to those who’d come to the hall outside, investigating the noise. Instead, she put her arm up to hook his thick neck and laid her head against his shoulder. Playing the injured damsel was exhausting, she thought with a sigh, before flicking her vision around the corridor. The protocol droid who’d locked them into the janitor’s closet in the first place was sprawled on the floor nearby.
“What a rude ID9!” it exclaimed, attempting to roll itself over so it could push off the floor.
“I believe our quarry went that way, darling,” she spoke languidly, gesturing in the droid’s direction.
Strong took off at a trot, holding her close so as not to jostle or bounce her too much. It was like being cradled by a firm, warm wall, not unappealing, but she was wondering if she’d laid on the injured act too thick. “You...can...slow...down…” she tried to say through gritted teeth. She let out a sigh when the Chiss came to an abrupt halt. “What?” she began to protest, before clamping her jaw shut as he moved to set her down. He did it with all the care one would expect from a man handling an infant, even going so far as to place a hand reassuringly on her head. Her cheeks burned at the treatment, and they grew all the hotter with anger at herself when she felt disappointed at the withdrawal of his hand.
I’m in control of this situation, not him!
”I shall capture him forthwith, my Lady Lucine,” he rumbled, taking the hand from her head to place over his chest. He looked intense as he rose to his full height, glaring at the end of the hallway. There were no more turns, nowhere for the scrambling droid to scurry off to. It was hopping, pincers scrabbling at the sheer surface of the wall in an attempt to reach a vent far above. It might have had better luck if it was using all four of its arms, but one was clutched in towards the body, holding—
She reached down and pulled at her cloak, exposing the hidden pocket within and the tear it had apparently suffered.
Ingrate!
Lucine opened her mouth, about to encourage the mercenary towering above her to action, when she saw him lift his hands slowly towards his shirt. He pulled it out of his trousers and began to methodically unbutton it, shrugging out of it with one fluid movement of the shoulders. Her mouth went dry, and she decided that silently observing was the better move. Smarter, perhaps.
No need to appear...eager. With how easily flustered he became earlier, he’s already hooked. Let him catch the droid, shower him with praise, and reel him the rest of the way in.
Her green eyes seemed to flash with malice as she watched the big man whip his shirt out by the collar, the material billowing out much like a cloak. He was large enough that the long-sleeved button-down would have served as such an item on her curvaceous form. With measured, careful steps, the Chiss stalked towards the Skitters unit. His feet landed gently, yet his entire body seemed coiled, ready to act. The ID9 turned away from its struggles and focused its one red eye on him, chirping a challenge. The small droid gathered its unoccupied arms underneath its dome-like body and wiggled as if it were ready to pounce.
It dashed forward, aiming between the mercenary’s legs in an attempt to flee once more. This time, the big man was ready, dropping to a crouch and sweeping his removed shirt in a swift arc. The droid let out a squeal of surprise as it was scooped up, the shirt acting like a sack. The momentum of the movement brought the bagged ID9 up into the air, and though she could see Strong’s muscular arms tightening to control the arc, she had a moment of maliciousness; Lucine twitched her hand, sending the shirt, and droid, careening into the nearest wall, jerking Strong around as it happened. There was a metallic crunch, and the screeching of the Skitters died.
”Oh my, I fear I’ve caused the poor thing some damage!” spoke Strong, opening the shirt enough to glance down inside of it, wincing.
“No less than it deserved,” muttered Lucine, taking one of the mercenary’s hands to stand. He pulled her up with contemptuous ease but was again surprisingly gentle. I do wonder what he’s like when he decides not to be, she mused, cheeks coloring again.
“Pardon?”
“Nothing, Strong, dear,” she slid her arm through his, leaning against him with a tired sigh. “I believe I was going to treat you to a drink?”
”I should return this unit to Master Bleu before I partake in any refreshment, Mistress Vasano. Though,” he paused, and she looked up to see a purple blush across his face. Even his ears seemed to darken as she pressed against his side, I would be delighted to share a drink and perhaps dinner with you? At my expense, of course. Allow me to show you how a son of the Garmis line recompenses a lady for the indignities he’s placed upon her this day!”
She glanced at the shirt-sack hanging from his other hand, thoughts churning.
“My dear, perhaps you should allow me to take the droid, for now? I know an excellent mechanic who can fix the poor little thing up before I have it delivered to Kordath.”
And getting into the blasted things programming might lead to whatever archives that sleemo Ryn has!
”Perhaps,” drawled out Strong, uncertainty heavy in his voice. He was about to protest when she released his arm, sweeping her cloak off and stepping around him.
“Here, darling, you’ll catch your death without a shirt...though I can think of few who’d dissuade you from your display,” she purred, holding the cloak up to take the broken droid. “On the other hand, you know how Mick gets.”
Strong slowly nodded, dumping the droid into her cloak. He began to pull his shirt back on, not catching the way the Sith bit her lower lip at the action.
”Perhaps this is best dealt with after a meal, Mistress Vasano. Let us return to the cantina so that I may treat you?”
Oh yes, yes, you will.
She wrapped her arm around his once more, allowing him to lead the way down the halls.
“Oh, and, Strong? I believe after our...closeness, in the closet, you’re allowed to simply call me Lucine, yes?” she teased.
The way his back straightened and ears darkened anew told her the Chiss wasn’t forgetting that encounter for some time.
Positive Takeaways
Honestly, I loved this entire first post. It set up the main objective of the cooperative, introduced some romantic intrigue, and featured the main villain/pervert robot. I think it was an awesome dynamic. In addition, it started the chase and included some fighting. A very good first post.
Can Be Improved
Syntax/Grammar stuff: Double ‘and’ in the former and an unneeded comma in the latter.