Everything hurt.
Such was Kordath Bleu's assessment of life, the universe, and everything as he pried open his eyes from where they'd crusted together with grime, sucked a breath through his teeth, and realized that he was not waking up in his own bed. Again.
Joy.
It felt like an entire starship construction crew was working away inside his skull, the terrible thud-thud-thudding spiking into his nerves with every beat of his heart. He groaned, tasting...eughgh, whatever fuzz that was on his tongue, and rolled onto his side, which promptly bashed his knee into something and caused a whole bunch of noise and clattering and ow ow ow ow why?
The Ryn had enough faculty about him to instinctively draw on the Force, dampening some of his agony and clearing his mind just a bit. He screwed his eyes back open and stared at fallen broom and mop handles and the wheels of buckets in front of his face. A quick if painful twist of his torso revealed a few more walls, some shelves, a glowbank on the ceiling that was dark. The space was cramped and dark, would have been almost cozy if not for the chill and the heavy smell of mop water, cleaners, and wet Ryn. Was that him? He cautiously turned to sniff under his arm and — yeah, yeah, that was him. Also, he had no shirt. Or...pants. Or shoes.
"Wha' ta bleedin' 'ell," grumbled Kordath, throat unbearably dry. He tried and failed to lick his lips, struggling to remember something, anything, that would clue him in as to why he was waking up nearly naked in some janitor's closet with a blinding hangover.
Which was about when he noticed the piece of flimsiplast stuck to the middle of his chest. He stared at it for a full minute before prying the note free, yelping when the tape did unkind things to his poor fur.
Kordath squinted, but there just wasn't enough light to read by. He would have to turn on the damn lights, which would require getting up, and that just seemed like an all around crap idea. Still, he had pants to find. And probably...someone. Zuji and Shay, or Satsi, if not his Fades...someone was usually keeping track of him, right? And given how bad he felt, like he'd been bar-hopping all night, Satsi was probably most likely. And, given she wasn't here, or naked and here, and there was a note instead...
It's a trap, the Ryn thought miserably, tail drooping, head dropping back to the floor — which he immediately regretted. He resigned himself to his new position with another sigh. There is no bloody way this turns out good, somethin's gotta be wrong, I'm gonna get blamed for something with me luck, I know it...
After a moment or two of wallowing and wishing wistfully for his comfy bed and his fiancee's much comfier, warmer chest to pillow himself on, Kordath dragged himself upright, palmed around for the nearest switch, and flinched when the lights came up. He took a second to adjust and fight off a wave of nausea before taking stock of himself and the cabinet. His clothes were not present, but he had his knuckler and a full bottle of drink. His body wanted water, and caf, and a good greasy breakfast, but at least he had something. Otherwise, it was just the maintenance essentials and his note.
He squinted to read.
Kordy, it began. While last night was fun, you should know by now that I have no frakking pity for you or anybody else feeling like kark, so I'm still expecting you to go help my little Greenie with training in the morning. I've got that crap with the next batch of Tarenti folk, and Uji can't teach him everything, so it's your turn to give a few pointers.
Oh, and just in case you decided to flake, I went ahead and stuck your fine ass in this closet at the combat center just to help you along a bit. Friends don't let friends wander off drunk, and all that jizz.
Be good or I'll hurt you. Kisses, -S.
Well. That explained everything nice and neat, now didn't it?
"Crazy karking woman..." Kordath groaned. She'd probably stolen his clothes just to be cheeky. He was going to yell at her for this later. Over the comm. Where she couldn't try to pull anything.
But for now, he apparently had a class to hold, or something, bloody karking hell.
The Ryn cracked open the door and wasn't sure whether or not to be glad it wasn't locked. The hall outside was empty save some cleaning droids but way, way too bright, all whitish-gray metal and a million glowbanks, and he hated it immediately. Arx was a horrible, horrible bloody place, and the combat center was the crown jewel of all things the Ryn hated about it. His nose ached just thinking about its overseers.
Picking a direction, he wandered down that way, hoping to find this "Greenie" person or the nearest exit, whichever came first. As he walked, he racked his brain, recalling pieces of the previous evening and also debating what his Consul had said. She had an apprentice these days, green kid, that was probably who she meant, right? From what little the Ryn could remember, the lad or lass hadn't been insane, so maybe they'd just agree to reschedule and he could be in a real bed before noon.
Surprisingly, he still didn't encounter another living soul until he reached an unfortunately familiar set of doors that lead him into the famous training area. His senses told him there was just one person inside, and while he didn't pick up anything that screamed 'darky angry smashy person ready to kill you', the aura wasn't...pleasant. In fact, Kordath mainly sensed a whole lot of pissed off.
The Ryn finally spotted the boy — and he was indeed that, shirt tied around his waist and hair pulled back, a blue lightsaber in his two-handed grip as he whaled on what remained of some poor exercise dummy — as he walked past some weapons racks. He paused to watch, scratching idly at his rear and cursing the air conditioning. The kid didn't seem to notice him at all, too wrapped up in beating on his target. Kordath frowned. They'd have to work on those senses, lad was gonna get himself killed. Just...another time.
He took pity on Greenie — and Satsi did not get any points for that nickname — and announced himself with a loud cough. The Mirialan shouted in alarm and spun around, lightning flying from his hand barely a second after it left the hilt of his weapon. The blast went wide, but Kord still dove aside on pure instinct, arms covering his head as he yelped. When he looked behind him, there was a black scorch mark high up on the wall, joining many others yet to be cleaned, probably from other training sessions.
"Oh, frang! Frang, sorry, sorry, are you okay?" There was a clatter as the kid dropped his saber and ran over, panting, dropping down beside Kordath. The Ryn waved him off.
"I'm fine, lad, m'fine. Well. Okay, no, but ya dinnae hurt me, quit fussin'," he said, standing again and grimacing when he had to crane his neck to look up at the boy, per usual.
"I'm sorry," apologized the kid again, pushing sweaty hair out of his face. He was huffing, looked like he'd been at it for ages. How early had this boy shown up? Maybe that was why no one else was around. It was some ungodly hour before dawn.
Kordath shook his head again. "Dinnae worry about it. Yer Satsi's apprentice, right?"
"Yeah, yeah. Uh." He stuck out a hand to shake, and the Ryn shrugged and returned the grip. It was a little hard. "Ruka."
"I'm Kordath."
"I know."
The apologetic expression was gone now, guilt starting to melt into something more pinched. The Ryn raised a bushy brow.
"Ooookay. Well, lad, I'm not feelin' me best, bit wrung out, is all," he waved the bottle in his hand by way of explanation, and the Mirialan's face darkened considerably, fast. Like a storm cloud just up and appearing on a clear day. The Ryn continued, "So, ah, how's about we do this another time? I'll help ya, sure, I will, this is just not a good morning for me and you know how Satsi gets, so let's just...um. Lad? Yer looking not great."
The lad looked, really, like he was barely an inch away from committing some form of violence, his teeth grit and bared, nostrils flaring, impressive eyebrows furrowed. It was that, or maybe he was constipated. Kordath couldn't really tell, and the green kid seemed to mostly attempt to communicate with his brows when he wasn't speaking, which seemed to be a lot of the time. He crossed his arms, shifted on his feet.
"I didn't come here to deal with more damned drunks," growled the boy, actually kind of growled, and huh, Kord really needed to drink more water because that couldn't be real, "I didn't leave my franging family and mhi ahimaa to come across the galaxy and babysit pujos like you. I came to train, you kriffing..."
Now, the Ryn didn't know what language the Knight started spitting in — probably Mirialan, like those other words he'd used that were probably insults, because...well, the kid was a Mirialan — but he knew a rant when he heard one. There were probably a few choice words about his character and his mum, blah blah blah. Kordath bliked slowly, stuck a pinky in his left ear and twisted, enjoying the itch as much as the way it dampened his, uh, "student's" tirade. Too bloody loud and too bloody early for this, it was.
"Eh, uh, lad, ya done yet? It's early, we just woken up, eh, let's go to the recc room an' get some caf and whatever excuse they got for food in this prison and then we'll do some, uh, exercises or somethin' if it makes ya feel better, yeah? I'll show ya how to do, uhm...illusions. Sure. Those can be quiet. Real useful like too. We'll practice the little tricks...footsteps goin' the other way, empty hands, naked ladies, stuff like that."
Kordath thought his offer was pretty generous, and was pretty proud of himself for coming up with it considering how little caffeine was currently in his system.
Ruka-whatever-his-name-was didn't seem to agree.
"...early? EARLY? IT'S SEVEN IN THE KRIFFING EVENING, YOU SLEEMO! I'VE BEEN WAITING HERE FOR TWELVE KRIFFING HOURS!"
"Ow, ow, lad, volume, please," groaned the Ryn, wincing and rubbing at his head.
Wow, could the boy's eyebrows do all sorts of things. Was he having a stroke or composing a poem to getting up early? Looked more stroke-ish.
"You're disgusting," spat the Mirialan at last, expression finally settling on one of, well, disgust. He was flushed sort of a muddy, brownish-red that didn't go well with his green skin and made all those funny scars kinda...pop. Ruka turned deliberately away, making a gesture that, while foreign, was similar enough to others that the Ryn didn't have to guess its meaning.
Kordath felt the growing irritation in the pit of his stomach and the base of his spine — annoyance at being dragged out here, frustration with his pain, discomfort from the chill of the room on his bare self, all of it — flash up and boil over as his tail lashed.
"Oi, shut it," snapped the Ryn, jabbing a finger in the Knight's direction. "I dinnae sign up fer this kark but I'm here and you're bein' a right bloody prick just cause a man's gotten up a little rough this morning—"
"It's not even morning anymore, oh my Bogan—"
"Quit interruptin' me, kiddo, I'm tryna—"
"I'm not a kid," snarled the kid again, turning back around to stare the Ryn down, gaze dangerous. "And you, you're supposed to be what, Proconsul of the clan? Satsi said you were good, said I'd learn a lot from you, but you— You make me sick, coming in here, stinking like that, all booze and no sense, and you go home to your kid like that? Kriff off, you should be ashamed of yourself, putting that on a little girl. She's sweet, I know, I've been babysittin' her half of Satsi's shifts, and you, you..." he devolved into unintelligible growls of fury again, and Kordath got the sense that it wasn't just him the Mirialan was glaring at.
That didn't stop the fierce anger from scorching up his own throat, however. His tail lashed, and before he'd even really thought it through all the way, the appendage was grabbing up the nearest small object — a little weighted ball — and tossing it at the kid. It smacked him soundly in the hip, and Ruka swore.
"I don't go around Shay wasted," growled the Ryn right back. His headache still pounded, but it was getting a bit quieter than the roaring in his ears. "And it'd do you good to be a bit less o' a jackass first thing ya meet people, lad. Let that be bloody lesson one. Ya listenin' or do I have ta turn ya over a knee like the brat you're acting like?"
"I'll teach you a franging lesson, sithspitter," shouted the Mirialan, and before Kord had a chance to logically replay everything that had just been said, Ruka was swinging. It took a few seconds too long for the Ryn's slowly-swimming brain to realize just what was coming, the Force having been prickling under his skin this whole time with unease and giving him no more alert than it already had been. Even as he shifted to duck quickly aside, the blow caught his shoulder, spun him around, slammed him into the mats like a sledgehammer. His skull rang.
He swore he saw tiny mynocks flying circles around his head and wondered dimly why he hadn't just drunken the rest of his whiskey and stayed in that broom closet.
Slowly, the Ryn breathed through his fluted nose — still perfectly intact, blessedly — and pushed himself to his hands and knees only when he was mostly sure he wouldn't vomit. Ruka was still across the gym, looking like he wanted to throw another telekinetic hammer the Proconsul's way. Kordath had no intention of giving the kid the chance.
Concentrating power in his left hand, he shied it somewhat behind his body as he mimed struggling upright, letting the flow of the Force build. Ruka shifted in response, all ready and coiled to spring, eyes glowing bright, poison gold like some of the Sith the Ryn had the misfortune of knowing. Kordath lifted his free hand, palm out, placating, and "wobbled" to his feet. Possibly with more actual wobbling than he would have liked.
"Now, now, lad...no need ta make this any worse, I'll even forgive ya that one, Red won't even have ta know, we'll just patch this whole thing up..." the Ryn lifted an eyebrow, voice aiming for syrupy and getting somewhere around...something. "Just simmer down."
Electricity sparked and ran up and down the Knight's arms, and he glared at Kordath.
"Or, well, don't," sighed the man, bringing his other hand up to join its partner in the air. "Alright, welp, ya had ta make it hard."
He saw the Knight twitch and shift like he was going to tackle the Ryn, or shoot lightning out his fingertips, but Kordath was faster. He opened his palm, scrunched his eyes shut, and released a blinding supernova of light that filled the room.
It was hard to tell which made his ungodly hangover worse; the painful brightness of the flash even behind his eyelids, or the loudness of the Mirialan boy's startled scream.
Positive Takeaways
While there is excess in much of this post, the characterization is superb. There is clear uniqueness to each individual and we get a good sense of the environment, situation, and how things are going to go down. There's a mingling of foreshadowing and hints at deeper meanings to much.
Areas For Improvement
To start, I straight up hate the word "and" as a reader after the first half of this post. As a writer I understand the style being employed here, but it really overstays its welcome for me on a personal level. That said, there is a lot of front-end set up to this post that bogs it down. It's actually difficult to push on and get to the conflict itself.
From a narrative point of view I appreciate the stylistic flair of this, but it is strangely inconsistent. Italics are used later on to denote a sort of hybridization of narrative and internal processing, but it isn't used earlier on in the sentence.
Minor syntax point here, but it should be "led". With your posts I have to point out the minor because you tend to lack the major. Surprisingly, though, there are a few more small ticks throughout the post like this next one.
These should be separate sentences, as they aren't joined. Waving the bottle is not a speaking action, but one he is performing while speaking. You'd close out the dialogue with a period and capitalize the "he".