“I wouldn’t consider us close enough to dance as of yet,” Atra deadpanned, the snark as natural as breathing. He almost expected the half-Echani to charge in on the offensive, as had been a habit in their youth, sparring with discarded broomsticks as though they were swords. In his mind, however, the Umbaran knew no such attack would come.
The impetuous behavior of youth had been tempered by experience and vigilance. Naivety had been eroded away by paranoia. The Combat Master knew enough about the younger man from the Inquisitori dossier and numerous holo-recordings of past battles.
Despite almost twenty years of separation, the two of them were still remarkably similar in some aspects and complete opposites in others. Scarred from hard lives, yet became stronger from it; the cybernetics on each man was a scar in and of itself. Atra teetered on the edge of darkness, whilst Celevon barely stood in the light.
Fire and water.
The irony of their respective blade colors for this sparring session had brought a small smirk to both of their lips, no matter the fact that Celevon’s was ‘borrowed’. The half-Echani had been hot-headed in his youth, temper almost as unstable as the weapon he wielded, the tip barely a hair's breadth from the cushioned floor.
Both stood as though they were statues, waiting for the other to make the first move. Black, gold-flecked eyes took in the way his old friend gripped the saber; not all of lightsaber combat had been forgotten. High on the hilt, index finger and thumb almost touching whilst the middle and ring finger were tight on the grip itself. An eyebrow lifted in silent challenge as Celevon slid a foot back.
Really?
Quicksilver glinted back, amusement in their depths as the Odanite tapped a finger against the borrowed hilt.
The unspoken conversation that passed between the pair went unnoticed as their observers took in the two with baited breath, more credits passing between them as bets were taken.
The silence was broken as both figures blurred, lightsabers clashing overhead, one attacking whilst the other defended. A second later, the roles reversed as the blades crashed against one another much lower. Celevon and Atra separated, observing one another curiously; both men were circling one another slowly.
“Really Tristan? Not even using a traditional form?” The Umbaran mocked lightly, accent barely perceptible. He clicked his tongue twice.
The Onderonian smiled, not phased in the slightest. “I left these weapons behind long ago in favor of blades. Nowhere near as conspicuous when secrecy is your aim.”
Unbidden, Atra’s gaze flitted to the Inquisitori dagger on the half-Echani’s waist. His eyes narrowed, moving toward Celevon quickly, pale gray-blue lightsaber coming from above. The crimson rose to meet—
Nothing.
The Umbaran had flicked his thumb over the switch, his own lightsaber extinguished and reignited to bypass the unstable one. It happened so quickly, the blink of an eye would have caused someone to miss it.
Celevon grimaced at the burn on his wrist whilst the Combat Master backed away, lips curved in a small smirk.
Point to me, Tristan, The youthful voice of Atra Ventus seemed to drift across time along with a bark of laughter.
Caught up in his memories, the Onderonian rushed toward the Umbaran. He regained awareness of himself when their blades met, a slight shift in position redirecting the unstable crimson away from the Combat Master. Decades earlier, this move had never failed to send Celevon stumbling away.
Now, however, the Odanite used the momentum and spun in the opposite direction. Atra curved his body just enough to let the blade swing by him, his own blade catching the crimson as it was brought down toward his knee.
The onlookers watched, mesmerized as the pair of blades whirled around one another; attacks, feints and ripostes exchanged rapidly in crackles of energy. The half-Echani ran up a wall and flipped over the Combat Master, barely catching the silver-blue blade that lanced out toward him by his smirking opponent.
“Nice tricks, twinkle toes. Don’t forget who taught you that.” The slight taunt of the Umbaran had barely reached the crowd before the two of them were moving once again.
In one of their exchanges, Celevon was going for a controlled swing when Atra struck, the crossguard hilt flying from the younger male’s grasp. If they expected the Onderonian to surrender, they would have been disappointed as the Odanite started what looked like a dance.
Every flip, somersault and dodge around the saber of the Umbaran brought them closer. Just as suddenly, the two of them stopped when Atra deactivated his weapon, the emitter an inch from Celevon’s chest.
“I win,” the Combat Master smugly pointed out.
The Onderonian laughed. “I’d call it a draw.”
As Atra glanced down, the others realized what the Assassin meant. The tip of the Inquisitori dagger was a mere inch from the Umbaran’s ribs, pointed directly at the Combat Master’s heart.
“You cheat!”
“No honor among thieves, mate,” Celevon grinned as he stepped away and sheathed the dagger. His voice seemed to have shifted as his own lilting accent became thicker, clearly imitating someone with a higher pitched voice. “Who’s to say I cheated if you knife the other guy, eh?”
Atra’s lips gave a miniscule twitch in what would only be assumed was a smile. No one else knew, but the Onderonian had quoted him from when they first fought. Or, more correctly, when he gifted Tristan with a pilfered dirk.
“Touché.”
Dat combat, oh baby.
Positive Takeaways
Really got a sense of Atra’s mindset, relaxed, amused, focused. The amount of detail put into the hand to hand is something to aspire to.
Can Be Improved
Maybe some kind of reactions from the onlookers, you mention them being there and then just let that thread lie. Yes, I’m picking this due to lack of anything else substantial to point out.