The Arcanist breathed heavily. He took the woman’s distraction to focus upon the soreness in his ribs. He could not ascertain the extent of the damage and chose to heal what he could for the moment. His mind raced over what patterns he had discerned, only to toss them out as quickly as he could pick them out. He recognized the power she had tapped into, and wondered at even the small bit of control she seemed to have over it. He shifted his focus and gave himself over to the Force, knowing his dependence upon seeing the incoming attacks would be key.
Vestril did not rise from the rubble of the merchant stand so much as burst forth from it. Bits of debris, battered wares, torn cloth and cracked wood exploded outwards as she thrust the rubble free of her body with the Force. Hence freed, she made straight for her superior. The adrenaline pumped firelike through her veins, finding purchase again in the heat of battle to keep her from feeling the few bruises she had so far acquired.
The Force sung all around the Hybrid, warnings and calls of danger with him at its core. He closed off what he could of his other senses and focussed solely on the woman before him. The purple of his own lightsaber in the hand of another, flashed viciously and missed catching him in the right shoulder. On reflex his blue saber held in his right hand lashed out.
Vestril caught the blow upon the stolen saber, a slowness in her own movements noted. Though it had been for but a minute or two under the rubble of the stand, it had been enough for the rage she had called upon to subside some. It was only minor, but, her muscles had already begun to grow tired from the strain of channeling the Force in such a manner. She drove past it, filing it as irrelevant to teaching the man before her who Braecen belonged to. She stoked again the fires of her anger and aimed a punch with her free hand to take the younger man full on in the face.
The Seer jerked to the side, the punch brushing but a few strands of hair. He kicked out, his foot taking the woman in the shin. When she stumbled off balance for but a fraction of a second, Mune surged the Force through his own muscles to increase his reflexes. His saber jerked free from the woman’s stolen one. He needed to free up a hand but holding back her saber took the strength of both arms. Weapons separated, he released the grip of one hand and thrust all at once, the Force point blank into her solar plexus. The telekinetic blow caused all the air in Vestril’s lungs to explode in a violent woosh.
Stars exploded across her vision. She was more durable than that, however, and did not go down. She raised the lightsaber in time to catch Mune’s overhead stroke. She felt already what had remained of her rage ebbing, and with it the rush of adrenaline. A frown creased the features of her face and she called the Force to impede the younger’s movements, and found to her chagrin that the boy could not be slowed.
“He is mine!” she shrieked at him.
Her breath regained, Vestril called the Force to amplify her speed, finding her muscles protesting the action. She slashed and cut at the man. Mune blocked the incoming onslaught with a grunt upon each strike. Her blows remained strong, her strength near overwhelming. Mune eased into a pattern of dodging and blocking where necessary. He searched for openings but the woman offered none. He would make one, he decided. He dropped to a knee, an arcing slash of the purple lightsaber in the Sephi’s hand going wide. Mune grasped the Force tight and thrust at point blank again. The power unleashed, exploded into Vestril’s right hip.
The pain exploded through her nerves. It took more than a little concentration with the exhaustion that was beginning to take hold, to force the pain to a dull ache.
Mune rolled when Vestril stabbed the lightsaber straight into the deck where he had been. He rose. He saw clear the effort it took her to control the pain of the last blow. He relaxed, letting the tension in his own body ebb and opened his mind to the Force further. He channeled it through himself while he had the chance, letting it wash over him, encompass him and fill him as though a vessel waiting to be filled. He felt the aches of his own muscles, the heat of the numerous bruises. His mind worked to calculate in those moments how much longer he could keep up the pace, knowing well his body could withstand only so much.
“He is mine…” came the woman’s voice, as if reminding him she were there.
Mune dropped his lightsaber and instead drew his two swords. The crowd’s cheers roared all around them, a din that threatened to swallow them and never let them free again. The Hybrid reached out his senses, found an opening and swung hard his blades and let fly. Vestril was already racing at him. The swords went wide and rent the air between the people in the crowd and plunged into a wall. By Mune’s calculation, just within range of where he needed them. The woman was upon him. He kicked his saber up and ignited it in enough time to parry, two handed, the Sephi’s wild strike.
She breathed hard, screeching her frustration as she pushed as hard as she could upon Mune’s weapon. Sparks of purple and blue danced across their faces. Mune struggled to hold his footing, her brute strength making his muscles scream at the effort it took to hold her back.
“Mine! Mine, mine, mine!” she shrieked into his face.
“Would you be silent already!”
Mune dared shift his weight and thrust his knee up. The weight of the woman nearly took him backwards right then. He used the weight of her however, bearing down on him to drive his knee hard into her gut. She was tired enough that the blow caused the air to burst from her again. Her grip loosened enough for Mune to barely free up a hand from his saber and reach out. The Force answered. His swords burst from the crowd. Sweat beaded anew upon his brow with concentration. The ninjato whipped through the air, eliciting loud gasps from some of the onlookers.
The trick was understood then, by those that watched closest. Through flesh, meat and bone the blades plunged. Blood spattered across Mune’s features, painting his look of brutal determination. From the woman’s shoulders protruded the two swords, the points of the blades mere centimetres from his own face. Blood ran their length to drip upon his cheeks.
Vestril looked shocked, her stolen saber fell from her spasming fingers. Neither had been a fatal blow, but it had been more than enough to take the fight out of her in an instant. It had happened too quickly, and she had tired herself only enough that she had not seen the attack coming, so focussed was she on her own frontal assault. She stared down into Mune’s ruby eyes, the slits of his pupils looking no less feral than her appearance or tactics had been.
The moment was nearly tranquil. Mune shifted her off him slowly, removing his knee from her abdomen and sliding her to the side to rest her on her side. Both breathed heavily, exhaustion clear. Blood made them both appear a picture of violence and madness.
“In case you missed it. My name is Mune Cinteroph, Master to both your Braecen and our Empress Elincia. I am your superior. It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance.” Mune offered a bit of a grin.
Money exchanged hands around them. Mumblings of anger from the losers, laughs from the winners. Mune estimated they had little time to rest before they would have to move on in case any of the thugs got ideas. For the moment, he rested, and let Vestril rest beside him. He’d have to ensure her wounds were taken care of, he noted.
Positive Takeaways
Your descriptions of both the environment and the combat were superb. Your post was also paced well, you managed to paint a clear picture in the mind of the reader without being overly verbose or bogging the reader down with lengthy illustrations.
Areas for Improvement
Unlike most species names in Star Wars, hybrid is not a proper noun and should not be capitalized.
You should have a line break between lines of dialogue if you have a new speaker in the subsequent lines (so 'Does not matter' should be in a separate paragraph). Also, as a reader I found myself wanting to know why these two characters were at the venue and why they were fighting. This goes directly to the story aspect of the ACC rubric. It was absolutely in character for Vestril to say it doesn't matter, but you as the author could have still given the reader a nugget as to why Mune invited Vestril. You allude to their mutual connection to Braecen but still leave the why a mystery. It was the biggest area of improvement that stood out to me in an otherwise solid opening post.