Noting her stance Tisto shook his head and let out a low chuckle. He fell into a simple boxing stance, his right foot back, angled slightly to the side so that his left shoulder stood between Ozosi's best line of attack and the former biker. His knees bent slightly, spreading his weight out evenly.
"Well," Tisto said darkly, lacing his words with false hatred. "Attack! Let's see if Celevon taught you right, or if he failed you as a master. It's a shame you got stuck with someone that bad, truthfully."
Ozosi stiffed at that, her eyes betraying her anger. She attacked, launching a punch towards Tisto, turning her body into it. She went with a non direct line of attack, passing his left arm, aiming for his stomach. Tisto reacted quickly, using a quick left jab at her face. His blow connected first and the following shock from his gloves threw her off the attack. The Knight moved back, her hand touching the new bruise, and she more carefully inspected her opponent.
"Shockboxing gloves?!" she asked incredulously. "I thought this was sparing?"
"I didn't say spar there Vym," the criminal said. "I said fight. Think of it this way little one. You are getting what so many dead men thought they would get. You are getting a fight instead of a beating. Do not make me regret this by insulting me with something that isn't your best."
The Tagruta was taken aback at that statement. It seemed to fit him perfectly in away, though that way was far darker than she had expected a fellow COU member to be. She took the little one comment in stride, pulling out her lightsaber. She ignited it without little hesitation, not wanting to hurt anyone, but ready to fight regardless. She flipped the blade to a familiar reverse hand grip, ready to attack.
"Happy now?" she asked, holding the blade. "I'll fight you with everything."
Tisto smiled as she did, lunging forward with a right hook. He saw Ozosi begin a swing as he came in and instinctively formed a barrier to protect his side, stopping his strike to be safe. The blue blade crashed into the barrier, but lacked the power to cut through, merely stopping where it was, allowing for Ozosi to strike again as Tisto leaped to the side. The barrier dissolved as he did, allowing Ozosi's strike to pass, though it hit nothing.
"Much better," the Savant said calmly, reaching for a pouch on his belt. With a quick movement he removed it and tossed it into the air, credits spilling out and into the air. He called on the Force, and reached out with both of his hands, taking hold of the falling credits.
Ozosi watched as Tisto held the credits in the air, staring at the mass of money with a mixture of confusion and awe. She stared at the Kiffar, and saw his hands push towards her. The Knight jumped back as the credits sailed towards her, the lowest level of them pelting the ground where she had just stood while others hit home, smacking into her.
Tisto glared at Ozozi once more. "I thought you were going to fight me with everything, not just a lightsaber."
Positive Takeaways
You made good use of the venue and describing Ozosi’s connection to it. I particularly enjoyed your description of Channel while describing her connection to the planet.
Can Be Improved
In the ACC, every match should have at least some combat. While you set up the conflict between Ozosi and Tisto, there was no actual combat between them.
This is a nice use of Telepathy, but I would have liked to see more description. What thoughts was he having? What specifically made Ozosi think something was off?
Also, be careful of verb tenses. There were a couple times when you used the wrong tense in a sentence: