TuQ'uan felt, with a sudden flush of dread, that he was going to die on Felucia.
His hat had been knocked off and there was an angry Force-user coming at him and it was so not okay.
He resisted the urge to cover his poor, bare, vulnerable head and instead palmed around for his blaster, feeling cool metal under his fingertips nearby and scrabbling for it. The Kel Dor froze on his knees and elbows, however, when the hum of a lightsaber drew so close to his neck that he couldn't hear his own heartbeat pounding over it.
A low growl issued behind him, "Don't kriffing move."
TuQ'uan swallowed, wheezing painfully behind his antiox mask. The agony in his back was all too real, his goodluck charm was somewhere in the dirt, and the plasma blade was pressing nearer still. The collar of his suit smoked, not burning him but more than a little unnerving.
"Piece of hutt slime," the Mirialan behind him hissed. "Attacking people, skulking around the resting place for the dead--"
"You're here!" the Kel Dor hissed, and regretted it as a booted foot kicked him over.
"Not to rob the graves! Like I bet you are!"
"You're assuming a lot there—"
The blue saber swung around to hover at his throat and he babbled, "Look, it's a lot of money for these bone bits."
The younger man glared again, his gaze gold, the red rings around his irises creeping farther. "I should drag your greedy ass to the cliffside and--" he cut off with an inarticulate string of his own language. The mercenary noted that the hand holding the lightsaber was shaking badly.
"Hey now, no need for that," TuQ'uan attempted in his most soothing tone, slowly reaching out again and hoping he wasn't noticed. Just a little farther... "How about we just quit this, I get my haul, you take some for your own chest, we never have to see each other again!"
"Shut up, shut up!" the Mirialan snapped, shaking his head. "I don't care about credits, this isn't about...grr." Squeezing his eyes shut, the Sith shook his head again, deactivating his weapon. "This isn't you. This isn't you. Breathe, c'mon. This isn't you. Think about Cora."
TuQ'uan's palm curled around the comforting weight of his pistol and he didn't wait for the crazy kid to finish muttering to himself. Kicking away, he dove to his side and leveled the blaster right at his attacker's head.
The green-skinned man opened his eyes and stilled at the barrel in his face. Purple now — what was it with Force-users and changing colors? Eesh — those eyes widened. He paled.
"Don't."
"Sorry, kid, just business."
Carefully, the Mirialan gestured at him with his empty, speaking firmly words of power, "You don't want to kill me. You want to talk."
"I want to talk," the Kel Dor repeated.
Then, he pulled the trigger.
"GAH!" the Knight yowled in agony, hands hands flying to his knee as he dropped to the ground and curled the limb tight to his body, rolling back and forth. "WHAT THE HELL?!"
"It's not lethal."
"You sleemo!"
"Well it's not if you take care of it," the mercenary added, feeling defensive. He was a damned good shot, he knew where to aim.
"You shot me!"
"Well...yeah."
"You shot me!"
"That was kind of the point. And you tried to cut me to pieces!"
"Yeah, because you shot at me. Where were you ten minutes ago?! 'Cause it wasn't blasting at people minding their own kriffing business!"
"I thought you were a rancor! Or worse, competition."
"You are so franging paranoid and trigger-happy, Bogan!"
"Uh-huh. Don't make me stun you." TuQ'uan walked painfully over and grabbed the Sith's saber, then went to find his hat. His precious, precious hat.
"My name is Ruka, by the way," sighed the Mirialan. He seemed to be either in pain or constipated, considering how hard he was scowling at his leg. His hands glowed slightly.
"TuQ'uan," responded the gunman. "What are you doing out here, anyway? Raiding for tusks?"
"Of course not. That's just wrong." The emphasis wasn't lost on TuQ'uan.
"Wrong makes bank. So...?" As he came back, the Kel Dor noticed Ruka actually seemed to darken and change color slightly, but TuQ'uan couldn't tell if that was normal for a humanoid like him or not, nevermind a green one. "I, uh, don't laugh."
"No promises."
"My boyfr— husband is mad at me and I thought he might like a...baby rancor. He really loves animals. So. Er. I was trying to find one. As a gift."
"Wow, man." TuQ'uan fitted his hat snuggled back into place, instantly feeling a thousand times better despite the peristant wound in his back. "Goodluck with that. Not a bet even I'd take."
"You're scrounging for tusks on this dirtball, I'm guessing you take plenty of bad bets," Ruka sneered. He started to climb to his feet, and the mercenary cursed Force-users.
The Kel Dor raised his blaster again, and the Mirialan stilled. "Nope, you stay put until I'm gone, unless you don't want to get back to the husband."
The Sith snarled, but eased back down, hands over his head. TuQ'uan nodded, starting to walk backwards. They watched each other carefully, and the Kel Dor made it several paces before Ruka suddenly moved, fingers twitching as electricity surged through the air.
The mercenary's world went white and rigid at the edges. He was aware of his hand clenching on his blaster, of it going off, of his body collapsing and rocking, slamming against the hard-packed earth. All his muscles locked up, and he couldn't breathe for those terrible moments, not that that mattered to his resilient lungs. The sensations of numbness and mingled agony and strain receded slowly, giving the Kel Dor back his parts and pieces bit by bit, chest then abdomen, fingers then toes. He gasped, aching all over, and pried his eyes open. He head lolled aside, and he squinted around, but he couldn't see the Mirialan anywhere.
He was, however, alive, and he had his hat. He would take it, and as many tusks as his battered body could carry. In ten minutes. Or thirty. Or an hour.
Eventually, TuQ'uan resolved. Just a nap first...
The rancors were probably being pet-napped by that Sith anyway.
There was a lot of scene setting here and a bit of action, a bit more would have been better but not a bad start.
Positive Takeaways
Linguistic Liar is not a feat I get to see used often, well done. Great job setting the atmosphere of the boneyard.
Can Be Improved
Proofing! Be sure to get your posts proofed, you had some minor spelling errors that hurt your syntax score here. Also, it’s Plagueian. Also-also, you had at least one demonstration of internal thought without any kind of italics or the like, which was a bit weird to read.