Reiden studied Ras for a moment before nodding. “Yes, I suppose you’re right about that. You know, I actually lived here on Nar Shaddaa for a time, years ago. I saw my fair share of…accidents happen.” He got up and strode over to the bar in a casual gait to get a new glass before returning to the table and sat down, pouring a drink from the bottle Ras had procured. He took a slow pull of the amber colored liquid.
Ras eyed him, almost like a Loth-cat watching its prey. “So I trust you won’t make a scene, about this,” she said, waving vaguely at the prone form of the Twi’lek’s corpse.
The Corellian gave her a small smile, “Of course. I’ve left my share of bodies on this moon anyway, and I’d rather not add to that count — at least not at the moment. So, if you’re not here to meet with me, what are you doing here?”
The woman across from him laughed, “Oh, Reiden, do you really expect me to answer that question?”
“No, I suppose not. But you can’t blame a guy for trying.” He took another drink from his glass. “I won’t get in your way, though, whatever your job here may be.”
“Mmhm, that’s good,” Ras began as she looked at him over the rim of her glass. “Because I’d hate to have to kill you after we’ve known each other for so long.”
Reiden simply nodded in agreement. It was then that he caught movement out of the corner of his eye, and the little hairs on the back of his neck stood on end. Something wasn’t right. He gave a cautious glance to the side, moving only his eyes. A scowling green-skinned Twi’lek and an equally angry-looking Weequay were making their way over to where he and Ras were seated.
The Corellian cast his glance back to Ras, who inclined her head a fraction of an inch in acknowledgement. She had noticed them as well. The encroaching pair made stopped beside their table. He gave Ras a small nod before turning to face them, a polite smile turning up the corners of his lips.
“Is there something I can help you boys with? As you can see, my friend and I are in the middle of something,” Reiden said.
“Yeah, you better believe there is,” the Weequay started. “See that guy next to you?”
Reiden tilted his head to the side slightly and glanced over with his eyes. “Yes. It’s sad, but I’m afraid he was already like this when we arrived.” Out of sight and under the cover of the table, he slowly moved his hand to his side, where his weapons lay in wait, just in case.
“That’s our friend who’s lying there, dead,” the Twi’lek added. “And we hear that you might have something to do with it.”
Reiden smiled. “I have no idea what you’re talking about, but I can assure you it has nothing to do with us.”
“Cut the act!” the Twi’lek spat. “We know it was one of you two, if not both.”
Ras sipped at her rum, an amused smile on her face before her eyes turned cold. “I think it would be best if you and your little friend here moved on. Now.”
“Yeah, right. Like we’re just going to forget about our dead friend and the fact that you two just happen to be sitting here,” the Weequay shot back at her. He then turned his head and whistled. A trio of humans got up from their seats and began to make their way across the club.
“Guys, please. You really should listen to my friend,” Reiden said. “Leave, now, while you’re still able.”
The Twi’lek slammed his hand down on the table. “I don’t think so! You’re going to tell us what we want to know. Our other friends can help convince if needed once they get over here.”
Reiden sat back in his seat and cast a glance across the smoke-filled club, seeing that the pair’s three friends were indeed still getting closer. Not wanting to waste time reasoning when such a tactic clearly wouldn’t work, he instead sprang into action. With one smooth, practiced motion, he grasped the hilt of his knife and drew it from its sheath and brought it above the table, then planted it deep in the Twi’lek’s splayed hand. The alien threw his head back in a howl of pain and rage.
Taking advantage of the momentary confusion, Reiden quickly released his grip on the hilt of the knife, drew his blaster, and squeezed the trigger. A yellow bolt erupted from the blaster pistol’s muzzle and seared into the Twi’lek’s chest, smoke wafting from both the fresh wound and the end of the blaster. The Twi’lek’s form grew limp and crumpled to the floor. Screams rang out throughout the club at the sound of blasterfire, and patrons got up, scrambling for the exit as fast as their feet could carry them. Others that were located farther from the exit decided to take what cover they could find, or else simply ducked down.
Reiden looked to the Weequay as he pulled his knife from the dead Twi’lek’s hand, expecting he would be the next target. However, Ras had already begun her own offensive. The woman took her Arashi-Kumori from the table’s surface and drew it in a savage slice across the Weequay’s neck. He tried to scream, but it only came out as a muted gurgle. He clasped a hand to the wound and stumbled back, tripping over an empty chair and falling to the floor.
“I see your skills are as sharp as ever,” Reiden noted.
“Of course they are. I can’t afford to let my targets slip away, now can I?” Ras offered.
Reiden stole another glance at the now deceased pair’s friends. The three humans had managed to push through the throng of patrons trying to escape, and were now within view of the table where Reiden and Ras had been sitting. They stopped in their tracks when they saw the carnage on display. Their faces filled with uncertainty.
“Well, should we make our exit now?” Reiden questioned. “No sense sticking around if we can’t accomplish our objective.”
“Aye, that sounds like a fair point, Reiden,” Ras said in agreement.
Having carefully scouted the area beforehand, Reiden knew that there back door to the establishment, reserved for receiving shipments of goods and the transport of money to and from the club. Reiden spun on his heel and led Rasilvenaira out into the brisk night air that awaited them. He may not have been able to accomplish his objective, but he knew that if Ras had killed Braecen’s contact, there must have been a good reason for it. He would inform his superiors of the development and make another attempt at garnering information about the recent transfers to his clan and house some other time.
Positive Takeaways
Story
The story sets up a clear reason for both participants to be in the venue, this is an important part of any first post and it was done well here, particularly for Reiden. The story also makes the environment feel alive
Can Be Improved
Story
The post’s greatest strength also turns out to be where it falls down a bit. The only actions I could consider as combative were the stealing of Reiden’s drink and the question asked, both coming at the very end.