The refuse cluttered streets were jam-packed full of locals mingling shoulder to shoulder or maneuvering around tables or merchants’ stalls in the smog-filled twilight. Those destitute enough to claim the Refugee Sector of Nar Shaddaa as their home knew nothing of safety or privacy, even in one’s own bedchambers - if they were lucky enough to have those. Most lived on the streets, claiming what space they could for their own, and constantly under threat of disdainful and corrupted guardsmen or gangsters looking to club an innocent refugee for sport. Their lives were essentially forfeit, a trembling existence tortured by fear and eased by the point of a stim needle. It was clear that narcotics of every sort, stim being one of many, were commonplace and eagerly used and manufactured. The heavy-lidded eyes of numerous passers-by were scarlet in their intoxication, pupils dilated or insectoid eyes bulging. And yet, whatever life they clung to carried on, the impoverished enslaved to their masters no matter the hour. In short, it was inescapable misery. That was the way of a defeated people.
Laren Uscot, a Pantoran assassin, waded cautiously through the flowing, sentient mass of people, ignoring the repugnant stench of rarely bathed bodies and centuries of filth. He was unremarkable among the thick crowd, cerulean skin and golden eyes viewed as casually as horn and claw. Everyone on Nar Shaddaa, especially the refugees, were of varied backgrounds originating from every corner of the known galaxy. Minutes before, he had fended off a small rabble made up of Humans, Twi’leks, and of more sentient creatures he hadn’t bothered to remember. They had intended to snatch a purse they thought he hid beneath his Armorweave Cloak, before he showed them a hint of his blaster rifle and sent them running away. He now pushed aside a Bothan, of all things, not intending to lose sight of his objective some distance ahead. The Bothan was replaced by another, furry mass that had entered his field of vision, and he almost reached out to gently move it aside when he realized that the mass was nearly eight feet tall. A hulking Wookiee blocked his way, and he decided against moving the thing. He knew he was a strong man, and he knew how to fight, but he was spry rather than mighty. Best to leave the Wookiee alone, he agreed with himself, moving around and out of the Wookiee’s shadow.
Suddenly, he saw his target - a scrawny Clawdite with a dark, red felt cap - duck out of the milling throng toward a small, unremarkable food stall with a purposeful stride. Wary, Laren moved accordingly to track the man, exiting the crowded street a few stalls away. He took a seat on a small patio, leaning back casually and acting the part of a customer. He was beside two Humans playing Pazaak on the shabbiest deck he had ever seen. He paid the game and their players no mind, however, once deciding they were of no threat. A Quarren barkeep scuttled out from behind his beverage stall and queried his order. Laren gave it in a bored tone, but the barkeep backed away in a frenzied heap after meeting his hardened gaze. After a moment, though, Laren realized it wasn’t fear of him that had driven the Quarren away at all. The barkeep’s eyes were crimson from drug use. The poor man was likely hallucinating or some such.
Putting the barkeep from his thoughts, his eyes followed the path in front of him until he found the Clawdite once more, that wretched hat still on his head. The blasted thing made Laren’s task considerably easier than it should have been, but he couldn’t help but grimace slightly looking at it. His eye for fashion was functional, at best, but no sentient in their right mind should be able to don that thing without living in immeasurable shame at their choice. On the other hand, the Human man sitting nearby, the one garbed in the fancy coat and the silver belt buckle - and, Laren couldn’t help noticing a smart pair of boots he genuinely ogled briefly - that was how a man should dress. Proper like, befit of their station. The Clawdite was, after all, a skilled information broker, with credits and an entire gang at his disposal if the need should arise. Perhaps that Human man would -
He paused, frowning as he observed the finely dressed Human man carefully. For an instant it had seemed that keen gaze had met Laren’s own. That look had been probing and intense. Studying, he concluded, like that of a scholar or detective looking upon a subject or suspect. Laren almost imagined the man had looked inside of him, mucking about in his thoughts in some frantic search. But that was ridiculous, of course. Shaking his head, Laren looked again, but found the man as he had been, straight-backed and haughty as ever. Despite their surroundings, the man made his rusted durasteel chair seem a throne, and his utter disregard for his surroundings exuded a powerful arrogance that forced those nearby to give him a wide berth. The air of danger that emanated from the man was almost palpable, but Laren had seen its like before. He determined the man to be considerably threatening, but not to his mission. Not now, anyway. Yet that feeling that his mind had been violated remained, and he felt as if he were a hunted beast, his imaginary hackles rising in alarm knowing that he had been spotted.
I must remain vigilant, he told himself firmly. It had been some years since he had been another drunken lout, brawling on these very streets or in illegal fight clubs to earn his next hit. Alcohol and stims had been his only reason for existence after crash landing, and through trial and considerable error, he had proven to be a savvy fighter - especially when the blood rage of a stim or adrenal had taken him. But some mercenaries had noticed his talent and had cleaned him up a bit, refined his rough edges. If refining edges could be said to be throwing a young, enraged teenager into a dark room with nothing but a small pot for his feces, and random morsels of half rotten food tossed through a small flap in the door. And then the training had begun, in weapons and martial arts, a brutal progression that had made homelessness seem a paradise. A chill ran up his spine recalling those memories, and he extinguished them from his mind. He began an Echani breathing technique to calm his nerves, keeping his eyes open to observe his target. The Clawdite continued conversing casually with a slew of patrons at the food stall. He fed his emotions and memories into that endless maw, retaining nothing but an unshakable calm and a cold disposition. Three things remained of conscious importance. There was the mission, there was the target, and there was victory.
Laren’s eyes narrowed as the scene began to change. Plucking the red cap off his head, the Clawdite man followed two burly Devaronians who had just exited the crowd. Confidently, he strode between the two into a small alley to the left of the food stall. Laren stood to follow, leaving a small credit chip for the barkeep who, he realized, had not brought him his drink.
Walking along the table-lined side of the street was much easier than making his way through the crowd, and Laren had no need to hide any longer. If the Clawdite man had left any agents in the mob or among those working the stalls, they were too late to prevent his barging in on the exchange. Before reaching the alley, he looked to the table where the oddly familiar Human man had been sitting, only to find the seat vacated, his beverage untouched. Deep within the recesses of his focused mind he felt fear, and his hand shot instinctively toward his hand blaster. Something about that Human man frayed his nerves. Shaking his head, he documented the encounter and filed it away in his mind. The mission demanded all.
A sudden wave of thickly accented Huttese drifted toward Laren as he entered the alley. He translated in his head instinctively as the Clawdite continued, “...once they make the rendezvous. For a price, I believe that we can collectively take a few more -”
There were five figures in the dimly lit alley. The Clawdite with the red cap, originally with his back to Laren, had turned to gape at him. The two Devaronian guards, holding long vibroswords, Laren realized, had each stood guard on either side of the alley and were also facing his direction. The other two were an unexpected addition. Identical Kiffar females in every conceivable way that his sharp eyes could tell, they were lithe of build, with amber lines underlining sharp, dark eyes, angular faces expressionless and fixed on the mouth of the alley where he now stood. Huntresses, he realized, and members of the Technocratic Guild. Deadly members, from what he could recall of the dossiers the Inquisitorius had circulated on The Collective. It was an unexpected surprise to see Shikari Huntresses in the open. He saw arms of sinewy muscle begin to stretch toward stun baton and some sort of plasma bow, respectively.
It was then that everything happened at once. Flinging back his cloak in a swirl of motion, Laren found himself gripping his blaster carbine and releasing the first sapphire bolt toward his enemies, running toward the cover of a building wall at the alley mouth as he did so. The Huntress with the stun baton, his intended target, dodged the bolt that had come within a finger width of her cheek. Simultaneously, the Huntress armed with the bow had knocked and drawn what appeared to be an arrow made of the same plasma. Laren felt the arrow - if the plasma could be called an arrow - shoot past where his face had been moments earlier. Instead, the arrow had found an unsuspecting target in the packed street. Laren ignored the people beginning to disperse in a frenzy from where two bodies lay limp, an arrow somehow pierced collectively through their skulls. The other Huntress, the Clawdite, and the two Devaronian guards had turned to flee while the other distracted Laren, exiting the other side of the alley in a brisk sprint. The Clawdite and his Devaronian companions turned left, while the Huntress went the other way, her sister in close pursuit.
The sound of a lightsaber igniting on the other side of the alley was all the warning one of the Devaronian guards had. Laren peeked to watch, and he saw the fool had been taken by surprise and cut in half, that arrogant Human man he had seen earlier standing over the cleanly sheared torso, eyes fixed on Laren. If the bodies of the other two lay felled as well, Laren could not see them, though he suspected the information broker and his remaining guard had managed to flee the scene unharmed. Weeks of planning only to be ruined by some karking fool with a laser sword. Of course.
Laren studied the man’s handsome face, drawing upon his own memories in order to reveal the truth of what lay behind that intelligent gaze. The man wasted no time, though, and he began sprinting forward, lightsaber deactivated but held gracefully in his right hand.
It was on the precipice of combat that Laren remembered. Areticus Altainatus, recently returned to the Sith Clan of Plagueis, where he himself ruled as Proconsul in name and title only. The man was an enigma, his path mottled and difficult to dig into. Even his sources across Plagueis and the Inquisitorius knew little, and Laren knew even less. What he did know, however, was that the man was dangerous, a decorated Sith practitioner with both blade and their precious Force. But young, still, and perhaps a touch of that overbearing and youthful ego Laren sensed was true, rather than feigned. A weakness, perhaps? There was no way to be sure, and no time to delve deeper. All he knew was that Areticus was after his hide.
“Not today,” Laren growled, aiming his carbine at the ground in front of Areticus. He could have shot the man point blank, a normally easy kill. Yet with all of Laren’s skill, the man was likely teeming with the Force, that unseen power to deflect and dodge blaster bolts and even death’s embrace in the most unlikely of circumstances. Instead, the Pantoran opted to shoot the ground, sending chunks of dust and debris flying at the man from various angles. He shot a few more times, stopping the man’s sprint abruptly, giving Laren enough time to turn tail and run. He had not brought explosives with him, and even though the man was cornered in an alley, any foe with a plasma sword immediately put Laren at a severe disadvantage.
Not daring to look back, he hoisted the blaster carbine onto his right shoulder and bounded down the wide street. Coming to an intersection, he turned onto a wide avenue, rushing between onlookers who were staring at the bodies the Huntress had left in her wake. Violence was a regular occurrence, especially in the Refugee Sector, yet the sight of death was always something for locals to take note of. It was a clear sign to steer clear of the area. Laren ignored their stares and incredulous shouts as he pushed them out of his way. He didn’t need to look behind him to know that Areticus in all his vanity followed seconds behind, far enough that the Force was ineffective, but close enough that a few quick steps at a sprint would guarantee Laren was skewered with that red blade.
The avenue was lined by a slew of tall buildings, crumbling from lack of maintenance and yet still mostly solid. A few of the buildings were attached at various angles by footbridges, though some looked even more ragged than the structures they were connected to. His eyes searched frantically, hoping for a solid expanse of duracrete, really anything he could use to pull himself up with the grappling hook he kept on his utility belt. On flat ground, Areticus had the advantage with his lightsaber, and Laren guessed that the man had scouted his surroundings prior to joining in battle. The man was no savage, judging by his clothing and demeanor. But if Laren could manage to pull himself free of the streets and use the maze of dilapidated buildings to his advantage, he might have a chance to turn the tide and figure out why he was now a target in the first place.
Suddenly, he saw it. A footbridge perhaps ten metres across and three wide, and only two metres up, a quick climb if he was lucky. It was a lazy, arched thing connecting two tall buildings that looked slightly less worse for wear than the rest. He saw what was likely cookfires emanating from one, flickering amber light dancing out of shattered glass windows, but the other to the right seemed dark and empty, its shadowy interior undisturbed by sentient hands. The bridge itself had rusted durasteel railings, and he could latch onto those with ease using his grappling hook.
Looking behind him, he saw Areticus trailing, too close for Laren’s comfort but just far enough away that, perhaps, he might have a chance. Heart thudding in his chest, sweat beginning to bead on his brow, Laren tossed aside his carbine with one hand and reached for the grappling hook at his belt with the other, slowing his pace just slightly. With practiced precision he fired upward, the hook firing at breakneck speed toward the bridge a short distance away. Once the hook reached its target Laren yanked, the hook digging in firmly under the rusty durasteel rail, fastening in place. Time seemed to slow as the Pantoran assassin let go of the firing mechanism and clasped the metal wire, climbing upward with a strength and vigor that bellied his lithe frame. His grip on the metal wire drew blood, but his pace did not falter. Though he swung sporadically on the wire as he climbed, he reached the top in seconds with aid of his legs, twisting the metallic fibres under his weight to act almost as a springboard upward.
Gripping the railing with both hands, he swung himself over onto the bridge. Feet touching ground, he turned to see Areticus only moments behind, readying to jump, or so it seemed. He knew Force types had that power, the ability to manifest their strength beyond what normal folk could do. But he wasn’t going to wait around to find out. Ignoring the blood on his hands and a creeping weariness, he turned right and headed into the darkness of the building, using what precious seconds he had to study his surroundings and, if he was lucky, plan a trap for the arrogant fool chasing him.
Laren stepped carefully, doing his best to maintain soft footfalls in the darkness. He suspected any Force user would have heightened senses, and he wanted to minimize his presence in every way possible. His eyes slowly adjusted to the curtain of blackness that was the interior of the building, and it painted a bleak picture. Rubble was strewn about haphazardly from a collapsing ceiling, and there was little cover save for thick, durasteel enforced duracrete columns. Some scattered garbage completed the bleak picture, but save for that there was nothing. Such an escape it had turned out to be.
“It seems there’s nowhere to run, traitor.”
A lightsaber ignited behind him, coating the dark room in a field of vibrating red.
Turning, Laren frowned at his Sith companion, though nothing of mirth touched his cold stare. He was a traitor now, was he?
“Seems you’re right,” Laren replied simply. He would puzzle out the meaning of being a traitor later. His life was on the line, and there was no time for idle thought.
“Might as well surrender now, ” Areticus said confidently, blade held in front of his chest parallel to the ground, blue eyes fixed on Laren’s. “Your skills are no match for the power of the Dark Side.”
“Freeze in the icy hells, Sith.”
Laren reacted first. He reached for his holstered hand blaster, released the clasp and fired a quick succession of bolts. Areticus managed to deflect the bolts wildly, and Laren released more, slowly stepping away from the target. The man seemed to be predicting the shots, throwing plasma at ceiling or floor with but a moment to spare. Once, the Sith even managed to deflect a bolt at Laren, the plasma grazing his right shoulder. Searing pain erupted where the flesh was scorched, but he was deep in his focus and ignored it. Mission first, target first. He fired faster, the trigger mechanism working as fast as his finger would squeeze, the hand blaster beginning to emit steam from excessive heat. He had to hit that bloody Human, he just had to hit the man once and he would have the advantage.
One of the bolts found its mark, striking the electronic looking gloves and managing to break skin. Areticus roared with an amalgamation of fury and pain, and he deactivated his lightsaber. Laren kept firing wildly for another few seconds, bolts reaching the far end of the building or shooting out of broken windows. The man, it seemed, had disappeared. Yet you can’t be far.
“You managed to hit me,” Areticus said, surprised. His voice was loud, booming, and seemingly coming from everywhere at once. “I will not forget.”
Without warning, Areticus was multiple places at once and advancing on him slowly.
“It will be an honor to kill a traitorous Proconsul, even one so undeserving of the title.” Areticus’s laugh - the laughs, Laren conceded - were a deep baritone, the chortle of a hunter toying with his kill.
Laren blinked, and when he looked again, the prowling avatars of Areticus had changed position. They all grinned at him, eyes twinkling with deadly mischief, before simultaneously running behind the thick columns nearest them. Laren whirled, searching, waiting. More appeared at the corner of his eye, coming closer, dancing in his field of vision. Laren couldn’t see clearly. He knew they were not real, and yet they appeared and reappeared in a blinding fashion, four at once disorienting his senses. Closer and closer they edged, lightsaber deactivated but in hand, ready to strike.
Shaking his head, the Pantoran focused inwards.It is not real, he told himself. He ran through all the scenarios outside of his mind’s calm, reassuring himself what he saw wasn’t real. Yet it seemed real, from the detail of the buckle down to the notches on his lightsaber. It is not real. Briefly he closed his eyes, washing away all doubt in his mind like rolling waves at low tide, revealing nothing but the shore of truth. It’s not real!
Opening his eyes, there was only one Areticus, off to his right and creeping forward slowly. Hoping to trick Laren Uscot, was he? Attempting to take him off guard with some conjurable doubles of himself? He would not go down so easy as that.
Turning, Laren aimed to fire.
Positive Takeaways
Wow! This post had everything I could ask for! Your description of the setting was beautiful, and I had no trouble visualizing the scene. You established an interesting conflict that did a good job of holding my interest. You also had a healthy amount of combat. All in all, well done!
Can Be Improved
While it is possible to deflect blaster bolts using a lightsaber, the Makashi form does not allow someone to redirect bolts. As such, it is highly unlikely that Areticus would be able to injure Laren in such a way.
I found this part of the combat sequence to be a bit unrealistic. Even if Areticus was using illusion to make it look like he had vanished, he still would have been struck by the bolts that Laren had fired at the spot where he had once stood, especially considering the fact that Laren was looking and shooting directly at him when Areticus ‘vanished’.