There was a rather short list of planets the Combat Master of the Brotherhood would always prefer to avoid when possible. Like Hoth, for instance. It was the snow, mostly. Always made the light worse than it had to be.
Atra Ventus decided to add Crait to the list as well.
The Umbaran stood at the massive, armored wall that guarded entry to the former Rebel base. His back was to the breached surface as he gazed through the polarized lenses of his goggles out across the salt flats. His sensitive black-gold eyes were spared much of the harshness of the sun's rays and he took a moment to survey the mangled remains of the last stand to be made there. Red trails of soil still carved through the disturbed salt like fresh scars through skin.
The very ground itself bore the scarred tapestry that told the tale of conflict. That was something Atra could appreciate, thinking to his own flesh and reaching towards his scarred face if only for a moment. The Combat Master instead brushed his pale fingers through his messy, nearly black hair, the rest of his hand concealed within the fingerless black glove.
Out on the flats, the Umbaran stood out like a beacon. His black boots left red footprints in his wake, adding to the many that had come before. His long black jacket fluttered quietly in the shifting breeze as it opened beneath his waist, giving it room to move. He kept the hood down, leaving the tall grey collar of his under-jacket exposed.
With a sigh, Atra cracked the knuckles of his right hand one by one and turned towards the breach. He wasn't there to take in the sights after all. The Combat Master strode calmly into the darker interior, removing the goggles and placing them in a compartment on his Mandalorian Speeder. The vehicle itself, clad in a black coating, was hidden just out of sight. Atra had come to Crait with a singular objective: explore and identify any potential objects for recovery. He somehow doubted he'd be the only one with such an idea, though what he searched for required something beyond mere sight. Keeping the signs of his arrival hidden could potentially grant him the element of surprise on any newcomers rather than falling prey to it himself.
A bristling not unlike chimes reached Atra's ears. He gazed deeper into the base, catching a glimpse of several curious Vulptices.They opted not to approach him. Instead, they turned and travelled deeper into the abandoned mines. Assured of his solitude, the Combat Master made his way into what had once been the command center. He dropped slowly onto one knee and placed his hand—fingers splayed out—against the ground. At the same time, Atra pushed out against the confines of his awareness with all senses and opened himself to the Force. If he concentrated hard enough, keeping his focus to just what was in front of him, perhaps the Combat Master might find something that had been tainted by what had transpired there.
A relic, or even something previously innocuous now corrupted by the Dark Side in the First Order's wake. Those were the things he sought.
Outside, the salt flats were disturbed once more by another presence. Navigating at assuredly deadly speeds, a customized FC-20 speeder made its approach. Red dreadlocks whipped through the air as Tisto Kingang grinned from ear to ear. A green crescent clearly marked his face, betraying him to be a Kiffar to anyone with even passing knowledge of the species. His clothing hugged his lean frame even as he lowered his profile to decrease the potential for air resistance. Pressed close against the center of the white and black speeder, he took a moment for some personal enjoyment and weaved a path through what debris remained of the former battle.
After a sequence of nearly impossible turns and a few moments that could be classified as 'too close for comfort', the Kiffar slowed to a stop. He sat there with one foot on the ground and just listened to the throaty hum of the speeder's engine. His hazel eyes scanned the horizon and took it all in. If he was in the market for parts, Tisto might be able to bring in a decent haul. But he wasn't there for that.
No, it was something far simpler than that. It was vengeance.
New Tython had been destroyed. The people of Odan-Urr driven from their homes and sent running. Then they were hunted by the Grand Master's growing ranks of Inquisitors. There had been no opportunity for satisfaction, for due recourse. With the fate of Pravus unknown and even the destruction of the Iron Fleet's Super Star Destroyer robbed from them by the Collective, Tisto found the scales impossibly unbalanced.
But other targets remained.
"You better be here," the Kiffar growled beneath his breath. Tisto needed to confirm that fact before he got too involved in developing his plan of attack. His usual tactics wouldn't be of much use here, after all. The Combat Master was but one man. It would be singular combat, not guerrilla warfare. Tisto closed his eyes and let his senses connect to the Living Force around him. His brow furrowed in concentration as he tried to push further out and finally felt the spark of life within the former rebel base. "Well, someone is."
The Wildcard swept his cloak—the same kind worn by the Collective's Jedi Hunters—to the side and grabbed his shockboxing gloves. Tisto worked the powered gloves onto his hands as he made his confident approach. He may not have put a lot of thought ahead of the initial dark impulse that had brought the Kiffar chasing after the Combat Master, but at least in this Tisto was confident. He knew his skill in the arenas well. Of course, Crait wasn't the same as the arena. There was no room for honor here.
A sudden chill creeped up the young Odanite's neck. The Force granted Tisto his first and only warning.
Kingang threw up a hand and willed the Force to condense into a corona of energy before him. A triple sequence of red blaster bolts bounced off the invisible protection, dispersing into the aether. The sense of danger faded from a dull roar to just another bad feeling among many. Tisto let the barrier drop and his eyes narrowed as his eyes adjusted to the darkness of the base itself.
Atra tilted his head to the side and reached up to pinch the bridge of his nose, his WLD-5 Peacekeeper held firmly in his right hand. On the one hand, he was glad that strange thing he had sensed turned out to be a someone. In truth, it was just an annoyance.
"Murderer!" Tisto exclaimed, baring his teeth as he recognized his target.
That one caused the Combat Master's head to tilt the other way as he assumed a pensive expression. Am I supposed to know this kid? Atra thought to himself while returning his blaster to the clasp at his side.
The darkness welled within Tisto in tandem with his more violent emotions, unknown to him but there nonetheless. It fueled his connection to his own power. The Kiffar reached out with one hand in a grabbing motion as he stalked forward. "You couldn't even face them when you slaughtered them," he continued.
Atra let out a long sigh, raising an eyebrow as he brushed strands of hair back over his ear. "You're gonna have to be more specific on the 'them' part."
With a grunt, Tisto pulled his outstretched hand in towards himself. The Kiffar's will was made real through the Force, tendrils of power gripping onto a nearby cargo crate and sending it crashing towards Atra. The Umbaran's gaze shot towards it, a half-surprised expression flashing for a moment before he dived forward and out of the path. Tisto grinned in triumph, having managed to close the distance between them as a result. He brought his gloved fist down quickly to meet Atra as the other man came to his feet.
The Combat Master quickly pushed up with his right hand, aiming to redirect the strike while moving inside Tisto's guard. Sparks crackled to life as he touched the conductive plating of the shockglove, causing Atra to freeze up for an instant of pain before his opponent's blow pushed through the guard and sent him back to the ground.
This time Atra remained focused as he shook his arm, trying to push past the fading numbness as quick as possible. Rather than rising up right away, the Umbaran moved into a low crouch, waiting for Tisto to approach again before dashing aside and coming to his feet. Tisto's stance was remarkably well controlled, with his hands upright near his face and a solid weight distribution. Movement came easy to him. Atra decided his attacker was definitely more than proficient at his chosen method of combat.
Too bad he wasn't just a bit faster.
"Come on," Tisto taunted, "I thought you were the 'Combat Master'."
Tisto came at Atra again with two leading jabs before crossing over, twisting at the waist and bringing his right arm in for a heavy strike. Ventus focused on even breathing and controlled steps, dancing across the debris-covered floor of the base. He weaved to the right before juking back and across to the other side.
"Sure, and you are?" Atra responded, his voice carefully monotone yet still lilting ever so faintly.
Again, Tisto found the chance to demonstrate his confidence. "The guy who's going to bring you down!"
"And how did you find me, 'Down-bringer'?"
Tracking down the Combat Master had been surprisingly straightforward. The 'will of the Force', some religious types might say. Tisto had just padded the correct pockets, won the right arena fights, and staked out the proper locations. A combination of reputation and chance got the Kiffar's hands on the latest intel before it had been properly processed by Odan-Urr's intelligence network. That was all he had needed, and he was off to Crait.
More planning probably wouldn't have hurt.
"What does it matter? I found you. Now you're gonna pay for New Tython!" Tisto shouted.
With a pivot, Tisto brought his foot around to strike at Atra's lead leg. Instead of connecting at the shin, the Combat Master stepped over the hit. All the while, the wheels were turning in Atra's head as he put together the corners of the puzzle that was Tisto, finally seeing the picture form. Kingang wasn't ready to give up just yet, despite Atra's dodge. He carried the momentum of the turn into a full spin, aiming a backhand towards the Umbaran's jaw.
That's when the warning bells started to chime again.
Atra dipped low and his left hand moved towards his right hip. A tug of power called his lightsaber to hand. The familiar wrapped cloth of the hilt's grip met his palm and Ventus was already depressing the activation stub as he whipped his arm out. A snap-hiss filled the echoing interior of the base as crackling cerulean energy formed the blade of his lightsaber. Tisto double stepped to the side in order to avoid the counterattack, but several of his long, red dreadlocks weren't spared the searing tip. They fell to the ground in a coil with steam rising from the end.
"So," Atra began, disengaging his lightsaber. "Tython? Seems that's become a defining moment of your life." The Umbaran's eyebrows seemed to speak for him as he frowned, looking like he was trying to remember something that he couldn't quite grasp, then a small smirk pulled at the corner of his lips. "For me? It was just another day."
Emotions roiled within Tisto again. He needed to make Atra pay. Needed to make someone pay! Still, he had to keep his head as best he could. A task made all the more literal when faced with a lightsaber. Good thing he had his own.
"Going to try to kill me with a real weapon?" Atra chided.
The Combat Master seemed content to just pick at Tisto's resolve rather than outright attack him. That was fine. Kingang could work with that, he thought. The Kiffar deactivated his right shockglove and slipped out of it, clipping it to his belt before retrieving his own lightsaber. Atra found himself somewhat bemused as he watched. There was something so clearly homemade about the weapon in Tisto's hand. He could even see scorch marks from the soldering. How quaint.
When the red blade ignited, it wasn't with the trademark sound so many sabers had made before. It was closer to the rev of an engine.
Atra's head tilted to the side and he raised an eyebrow. Now that was something new.
"This is what's best," Tisto said, pointing the blade at Atra but making no real move to engage. "For justice. For vengeance. You won't take from us again."
"So sure?" The Combat Master made no move to ready or ignite his own lightsaber.
Positive Takeaways
Story
The story does a good job with its descriptions. I was quite easily able to imagine the events written taking place. The action made sense as did the character's motivations for being there.
Can Be Improved
Syntax
While creeped is a word, crept is preferred in almost all uses, except for the past tense of "to creep out."