Locke appreciated knowledge, but he considered himself a practical man. He had lured Varuk to this library because it was small, out of the way, and filled with unimportant tomes. Sang had said none of it was important.
It was as ideal a place as any for their fight to get messy.
Time seemed to slow as Locke watched Varuk react to the wave of Force energy he had unleashed. The Savant either lost his grip or decided to discard his lightsaber, letting it drop as he stepped backward, barely keeping his balance as the wave pushed against him. In place of the lightsaber, Varuk raised one of his bryar pistols.
Cursing under his breath, Locke jumped behind a nearby bookcase, a shot just missing him. He counted two more in fast succession. The Augur frowned. That seemed fast for a bryar pistol.
It was unimportant. He had to think quickly. Locke had never been good at blocking blaster bolts with his lightsaber, and he wasn't going to practice now. Shifting his lightsaber to his off hand and clipping it back to his belt, the Augur tossed a fragmentation grenade around the bookshelf.
Locke was in motion before it detonated. He ran down the length of the shelf he was hiding behind, hoping to give himself an opportunity to flank Varuk. As Locke readied his DL-44 pistol, he felt and heard the grenade go off. Concussive energy hit the other side of the shelf, causing books and datapads to fall against Locke. His hearing went from crystal clear to a muffled monotone in a split-second as the blast reverberated off the library's walls and was amplified by the small space.
He grunted and shrugged off the books, ignoring his hearing for now and turning around the far end of the bookcase. He expected to find Varuk there, looking toward where Locke had just been. Instead, there was nothing.
Cursing silently, Locke reached out with the Force. He couldn't sense anything. Had Varuk retreated? If he had, he would run into whatever contingency Sang had prepared if Locke would fail. The Augur didn't hear the sounds of battle, so he assumed this was not the case. Varuk must've still been there, somewhere.
The library was dark. There were only a few discount glowbulbs to provide illumination. They lined the ceiling at intervals, gaps in light showing where some had gone out, while others blinked faintly. Locke strained his ears, but they were still deafened from the grenade blast earlier. He only hoped Varuk suffered the same issue.
Locke took one step forward, blaster ready.
He had only the faintest stirring of the hair on his neck to warn something was wrong. Locke turned, just in time to catch a blaster bolt with his stomach. Another followed it, a distant sound followed by his own muffled grunt. Pain exploded from the wound.
Instinctively, the Augur delved into the dark side, sending surges of it toward that spot as he prepared to return fire toward where the shots had come from. It took all of his willpower to aim, targeting the dark outline of a figure who stood to his side. The outline had a shadowy arm extended, blaster in hand.
"Varuk," Locke growled through gritted teeth. He snapped off one shot, striking the other man's weapon hand. Varuk held the hand for a moment before preparing a second bryar pistol - with his other hand. "Fool," Locke muttered. He wouldn't be able to aim with his off hand unless he had trained extensively for it.
Instead of firing the blaster, though, Varuk did something else. Locke felt a surge of Force energy a split-second before a book hit him in the head, blurring his vision. Then a second hit his weapon hand, sending the blaster sliding out of reach. He snarled, frustration and pain threatening to overcome his composure.
"Two can do that," Locke said, teeth bared. His stomach hurt badly, but he forced himself to ignore it. The Augur dropped to his knees, pushing himself against one bookcase. It didn't hurt that badly, but he didn't understand why he couldn't walk.
Everyone has limits, he thought, remembering what one teacher had told him once. But I set my own limits, he reassured himself, concentrating through the pain by what seemed like sheer force of will.
Locke countered Varuk's book with one of his own, then a datapad, flicking his fingers to rapidly manipulate them, only able to aim well enough to reliably hit the other man's torso. His attacks didn't seem to do much damage there, so Locke tried aiming for the other man's head.
Another struck Locke's head as Varuk attacked again. The Augur would have laughed at the absurdity of the situation if he did not feel as if he was near death. They had both shown their strength in the Force and this was going nowhere. Locke tasted blood on his lips; seeing red on Varuk's temple where the Augur had aimed a lucky strike.
He had to end this somehow. They were both at the limit of their abilities. Locke could not go for a weapon while enduring this tempest, and his opponent apparently could not either.
Locke felt as if he had no options left.
He refused to let despair set in. Mind racing, Locke felt another pang from his side and he flooded the area with the dark side again, grunting at what felt like ice numbing his pain, barely keeping it at bay.
The dark side, Locke thought. He still had that. Like an old companion, it came as soon as called. Locke shifted his focus, roaring wordlessly as agony blossomed in his stomach. He raised both his hands, the twisted power surging into them once again. Its pointless, he thought. He was going to die. The pain was too great.
No! Fury overwhelmed his pain. He would not die like this.
Locke struck. One bolt of lightning leaped to Varuk's chest, and the telekinetic attacks slowed.
Another struck the Savant and they stopped altogether.
A final blast exhausted Locke's force energy, but Varuk was reeling, seemingly unable to retaliate.
Smiling through blood-stained lips, Locke used both of his hands to fish out the slugthrower he carried. He was so close. The battle was almost won. Locke licked blood from his lips. Then he unsteadily raised the weapon, aware of Varuk regaining his composure.
The other man was too slow. Locke aimed and fired two slugs. The first missed, shooting over Varuk's shoulder. Seconds dragged on before the second slug fired as Locke's strength gave way. It struck Varuk in the middle of his chest, penetrating the other man's armor and lodging itself somewhere inside his body.
Locke watched as Varuk collapsed paused, then slowly collapsed, clutching his chest with his one good hand. Then Locke forced himself to keep his eyes open and ensure the other man did not move again.
It took Locke several more moments of intense focus to use his comlink to inform Sang that the task was complete.
He remembered nothing after that.
Positive Takeaways
The combat description is very detailed, and clearly a lot of thought has been put into the character's choreography.
Can be Improved
A number of small punctuation and formatting mistakes, but nothing that interfered too much with the piece.
The set-up here is adequate, but suffers from some problems narrative wise. In my mind the maxim of "show, don't tell" applies here. The post spends a good deal of time telling us these little details and facts about how the two characters got where the were, and why they're there, when it might have been better served showing us this through conversation, internal monologue, or context clues.