It was quiet. The only noise that could be heard was the wind, whistling and winding through the islands. Areticus looked down upon Kylex, judging the Savant as he clawed the powder from his eyes.
“Such a sad display.” said the Knight, shattering the silence. He drew his Westar-35, aiming the weapon at Kylex’s head, finger slowly drifting towards the trigger. It was then, that the sound of laughter invaded the man’s ears.
“Hehehehehehehehehe…” giggled Kylex. His eyes, now clear of the blinding dust, pointed skyward. He continued to laugh, its volume increasing exponentially. “HeheheheheHAHAHAHA! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHA!”
“Your mind is now broken, and so you shall die, a husk of your former self.” Areticus said coldly.
“IS THAT RIGHT?” growled the Savant, his eyes ablaze with yellow and red. His right arm shot forward, grasping the relatively small blaster like a vice. Rising slowly off his knees, Kylex felt the rage flow throughout his being. With a flick, the Juggernaut tore the Westar-35 from the Seeker’s grasp. Without hesitation, he crushed the weapon like an empty drink box, tossing the remains aside.
“H...How are you able to stand? Let alone crush my blaster?” said Areticus, backing off slowly. “I demand an answer.”
Kylex laughed, showing the area of his thigh that had been shot. The wound had vanished completely.
“Did you seriously think that some MIND GAMES and a few blaster bolts would put ME DOWN? Don’t make me laugh.” The Savant looked at his left hand, studying the scars before looking back at Areticus. “You could not imagine what i’ve seen.”
With frightening speed, Kylex thrusted his fist forward, sending an invisible fist hurtling towards the Plaugian.
Areticus only saw the attack when it was too late. The strike impacted his gut, the air exploding from his lungs. The blow sent him flying backwards, landing a few meters away in the loamy soil. The Knight pushed himself up, holding one arm securely around his gut. The other arm was held high, ready to issue the engage command to that distitant HK droid. Areticus looked down at his trembling body, and then straight into the eyes of Kylex.
“I wanna hear you scream.” said the Juggernaut as he swaggered towards the fallen Areticus. He called his lightsaber to his hand, igniting the deep crimson blade. He slowly approached the Knight, dragging the plasma blade through the dirt as he walked, when the Force called out. As if out if instinct, Kylex raised his hand, narrowly avoiding the volly of blaster bolts that had appeared from nowhere. The bolts, harmlessly collided with an invisible shield, while the HK droid that fired them advanced on the two Force Users.
Something new caught Kylex’s eye. A solid projectile now hurtled towards him, fired from the underbarrel grenade launcher of the WESTAR-35 rifle of the HK unit. As the grenade sailed towards his position, it was swatted away by an invisible force, and exploded on a nearby cliff face. Quickly bringing his lightsaber around to block a blaster bolt, Kylex’s cybernetic opened up. A small, mm9 rocket appeared, and was instantly launched towards the HK droid.
BOOM!
The rocket winged the droid, taking an arm clean off. The rest of the droid crumpled like a flower to flame.
“Your droid was lousy.” said Kylex still looking towards where the HK droid now burned.
“So is your ability to focus!” yelled Articus from behind. The Mandalorian turned, only just seeing the Knight, back on his feet. Kylex also spotted a blade headed right for his nape. With a quick backwards swipe, the Juggernaut hit the Seeker with full force. The Knight reeled back, but his blade had found its mark.
“Cybernetic wrist is a pretty cool trick, but the rest of you is still human!” sneered Areticus, wiping blood from his mouth. Kylex glared at him, reaching for his right shoulder, where the blade had struck. A grin formed on his face, and he chuckled.
“You idiot. My whole arm is cybernetic, and most of my shoulder. All you did was scratch my paint.”. He grinned grimly, and raised his left hand. Purple strands of lightning escaped the fingertips, arcing, spitting, sparking. They leapt forward, towards the fallen Knight, coursing throughout his body like purple snakes. The Seeker’s muscles twisted and contracted, and he let out a deathly scream. The lightning stopped. Areticus, shaking from the pain, looked up at Kylex, who now stood over him.
“It’s a shame really, I bet you make a good cup of tea.”
With that final sentence, Kylex twirled his blade around, and plunged it into Areticus’s chest. Bone vaporized on contact with the blade, fat boiled, and muscle mass shriveled and cooked under the intense heat. With a click, the blade retreated back inside the hilt. Areticus’s lifeless body fell back, laying back on the cold soil that would be his grave. Kylex knelt down beside the fallen man, and began searching his pockets.
“Now i gotta make a necklace outta your teeth. Assassin’s rules.”
Positive Takeaways
You do a good job of establishing Areticus’s reasons for being on Ahch-To and getting the combat started quickly. This was still a great start. However, I would have liked to have seen more explanation for why Kylex was on Ahch-To in the first place.
You do an excellent job of using your opponent’s aspects to write him. Well done!
Can Be Improved
While there is a lot to like about this post, it is pretty rough from a grammatical standpoint. In the future, I would recommend that you get someone to help proofread your posts.