“Don’t make me do this Solas, arrg Wrathus!” Tahiri exclaimed through clenched teeth. The Battlemasters’ throat felt dry realizing she had said Wrathus’ original name. She understood the new name, new life concept in human philosophy. Names were important to her, and when Solas announced his name change to Wrathus, it seemed like a betrayal of who and where the Epicanthix had been in his life. Tahiri had felt honored when she had taken his family’s last name when he had offered it.
“Don’t make me kill you,” Tahiri‘s voice almost broke saying those words. The Togruta knew that there was only one way to survive this, deep in her heart she didn’t want to admit it. Her vision blurred slightly as her emotions began to overtake her discipline.
Somehow the tears saved her vision, as a flash of bright light erupted from where Wrathus still knelt. Kark, he can do blinding light. The Togruta squinted, and then remembered that there was a large pile of rubble to her right, from the roof, that she could jump up on, if she was quick enough. Her instincts automatically took over, even as her mind raced through the scenario. Tahiri extinguished her other blade and jumped, flipping up onto the pile of rubble, just as she felt the thrumming and heat from Wrathus’ saber blade. Landing on top of the rubble pile, she opened her eyes, which were only slightly seeing spots of light. Looking down she saw Wrathus standing, though slightly leaning to the side she hit him on, and laughing.
“You have grown soft Tahiri. You’ve always been a bit on the soft side, but never so soft as to finish the job or order,” Wrathus turned away slightly. “Though with things, like feelings for that Zabrak, clouding your vision, I can see where you have strayed from the path I set forth for you,” he continued slowly.
He’s trying to rile me up, Tahiri realized. He’s trying the same tactic that he uses to get a rise out of Blackhawk.
“I must confess, that I am displeased with this,” the Epicanthix looked up at the Togruta as he elaborated. “Now either you get back on the path that I set for you, or die.”
Those last words actually stung less than they should have. Tahiri took a deep breath, staring at her Master’s mask. Swallowing the lump in her throat, she slowly replied, “You took me in when I was lost, and had barely an understanding in the Force and the world around me. I gave you my life, my pain, my anger, and molded it into what is now me.”
Tahiri felt her rage rising again, ”I have always looked up to you like a second father. One who would teach me, help me grow, and be there for me longer than my own birth father was. He died honorably, protecting his tribe and his family. I don’t want to lose another father, especially to something as petty as a rank difference. I thought that you would be proud to have an apprentice who has excelled beyond your expectations!” She almost shouted those words at him, barely able to control the volume of her voice.
Igniting her rune saber and pointing it at him, “I have done things for you, mission for you, that I never thought I would do. I have annihilated people on your command! I have been a loyal apprentice. What more could you want from me?” Tahiri‘s eyes began to glow as the Dark side of Force clouded around her. “You say I have grown weak and soft since I met Kul. Well I feel stronger than ever, knowing that he trusts me. I have not felt your trust, since the we were at the Pyramid. Do you trust me anymore?”
The question seemed to take Wrathus off guard for a moment, as he tilted his head down, looking at the saber in his right hand.
For a long moment there was no answer. Then “I trust you,” the man replied slowly. “But I do not trust your choices or the ‘company’ you keep.”
As suddenly as he spoke, he unleashed another torrent of lightning up at Tahiri.
Tahiri dodged the lightning, jumping off the rubble pile. As Wrathus followed her, she called upon the Force, turning and squaring up against her Master, using the Force to conceal what she building up to. His attack came swift and hard again, but she was ready. Dropping her second saber, she unleashed her own torrent of lightning which he caught with his saber. He brought his left hand up to strike at her, but was too late. Augmenting her speed, she sprinted forward, ducking beneath his swing and with one swipe, cut off his prosthetic limb at the elbow. Then rolling and flipping back to where she had stood before, extended her hand and called the rubble behind Wrathus to her.
Wrathus realized it all to late, though he managed to dodge, turning around and slicing a couple pieces of rock apart. The edge of a large stone made it past his defenses and cracked him in the side of his head. His vision blurred, and turned dark.
Tahiri watched as Wrathus tottered for moment after the rock hit his head, and then slump to ground. She held the rubble for a moment before throwing it away from her and Wrathus. She was breathing heavily now, and sweat dripped down her Lekku. Slowly stepping forward, her muscles screaming in defiance of the movement, she stooped over Wrathus’ body and checked his vitals. He was stable, though he would probably never forgive her for the huge headache he would have when he awoke. Nor for cutting off his custom cybernetic arm, but she would deal with that later.
She made her way out of the temple, reminding herself tiredly to tell the brunette that she better go fetch Wrathus. Tahiri figured that she could sleep all the way back to Aliso.
Positive Takeaways
This was one of the best setups for a master-student match I've seen. You do an outstanding job setting up the dramatic tension of the master trying to retain their dominance over the student. As a reader this got me invested in the narrative very early on which is a big plus. You also integrated the venue itself into the post which paints a more complete scene in the mind of the reader.
Can Be Improved
Species names (aside from human) are typically capitalized.
Even though this is a six post match (and you write three posts yourself) you still need action in every post. This post was a bit thin in that department.