The ship’s computer let out a series of beeps notifying TuQ’uan of the imminent drop from hyperspace. Tearing his attention away from the betting pools he ran, the Kel Dor made his way to the controls of the Krayt Dragon’s Breath. The stars all around the ship began solidifying back into tiny specks of light in all directions as the ship returned to real space.
TuQ’uan took over control of the ship and guided it towards the brown wasteland of a planet known as Nancora. He had come out of hyperspace a little further away from the planet than he had liked but debris and destruction still littered the space around the planet from the recent war. Plus, he loved being in control of a ship.
Taking a deep breath, he bagan weaving his way through the battlefield towards the planet he had wished to never visit again. But when the Dread Lord gives you a mission, you don’t refuse.
It wasn’t a particularly long or challenging flight but it gave the mercenary time to collect his thoughts before touching down in Faron City. All he had to do was get some information on the Collective and get out, this was his specialty, what could possibly go wrong? TuQ’uan took one last breath of oxygen free air before putting on his antiox mask and disembarking from his ship.
Making his way through the streets of Faron City’s outer district brought back many memories of the war for the Kel Dor. The streets were crowded with as many people moving to and fro as there were just sitting in corners and against walls. The people here had only started to rebuild after the Brotherhood’s attack on the Collective. The destruction in the outer district was random, some buildings stood in taters while their neighbour was untouched. Despite this, they all seemed to blend together.
As TuQ’uan made his way through the street a vendor with a makeshift stall caught his eye. A lone Human stood glancing at the vendor’s wares, his snow white hair stood out in this drab city. The Kel Dor approached, curious as to what this stall had to offer.
An old analogue device for telling time sat tucked off to the side in a pile of trinkets, the seal of the Grand Master was stamped onto the back of it. It looked to TuQ’uan like the Human hadn’t made it this far yet. Well this is interesting, the Kel Dor thought to himself as he grabbed it by the chain it was attached to, leaving the circular device to dangle in front of his eyes.
“How much?” he asked the vendor, drawing the Human’s attention.
“I wouldn’t part with that for less than… seventy-five credits!”
After a moment of consideration the Kel Dor accepted the offer, pocketing his new trinket he continued on down the street.
The mercenary’s intel indicated that there was an underground cantina around here that used to be a hotspot for Collective forces looking to blow off some steam. Rounding a corner into an alley, the Kel Dor approached the first possible location. As he walked down the alley, TuQ’uan got the feeling that he was being watched. He slowed his pace listening for footsteps behind him but heard nothing.
Eventually he came to a stop and turned around. The white haired Human from before stood in the middle of the alley, staring him down, his incredible violet eyes bore holes in the Kel Dor.
“Are you lost? Can I help you?” TuQ’uan shouted at the man.
“Yeah, I think you have something of mine.”
“I’m sorry, I think you have the wrong Kel Dor.” TuQ’uan began to turn away.
“That trinket you purchased back there, I dropped it while looking at what was for sale!”
TuQ’uan thought for a moment.
“Well, I’ll tell you what. I’ll let it go for… four hundred credits.”
“That’s insane, you only payed seventy-five for it!” He was beginning to lose his cool. “Fine!” He stomped his way towards the Kel Dor. “I was kind of hoping it would go this way anyway.”
As he closed the distance between them, the pale man reached under his cloak and drew his lightsaber. With a snap-hiss the crimson lightsaber was ignited and raised high in the air. Swiftly the blade swung down in an arc aimed directly at the Kel Dor’s head.
Jumping to the side, TuQ’uan narrowly avoided being bisected by the Dark Jedi. As he hit the ground in a somersault, the mercenary could still feel the heat of the blade on his arm. He quickly popped back up and drew his Sith Sword just in time to block the next ferocious swing of the lightsaber.
“Why the frak are you trying to kill me?” the Kel Dor screamed as he took a step back to get out of the Human’s range.
“Why not? Nobody told me not to.” He swung again.
“Well… then, don’t kill me?”
This gave the man pause, contemplation clear in his eyes.
“Alright, I won’t kill you.” The hint of a smile touched his face. “But you didn’t say anything about maiming. And yes, before you ask it is too late.”
The Dark Jedi advanced on TuQ’uan bringing on a much more determined barrage of attacks.
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Story
This part of the post excellently sets up Kylex, using one of his distinctive features rather than anything TuQ’uan wouldn’t know about him. The post also then builds on this introduction to adequately explain the following conflict.
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This is post has multiple instances where commas have been misapplied or not applied when they should have been.