Aiden Dru ran across the roof and gracefully hopped over the opposite ledge onto the fire escape. The young dark Jedi knight swiftly slide down the fire escape to the street below. He raced around to the front entrance of the building and pushed his way through the patrons into the front entryway. He squinted as he scanned the lobby for signs of his padawan quarry. The first three floors of the building was a marketplace with various shops. However, from the looks of things it was nearly closing time as shops were locking up and the patrons were trickling out. Turel couldn't hide here for long.
Suddenly Dru spotted his prey, racing down the stairs from the third floor to the second floor. He raced up the stairs to the second floor just in time to see Turel slip into an empty clothing store. "I've got you now!" Dru thought to himself as he approached the store. Turel had apparently broken the door mechanism in his haste to break into the closed store. The store lights were off and the room was filled with shadows from the streetlight coming in through the windows. The numerous mannequins and clothing racks provided amble places to hide. Dru didn't have the ability to sense Turel through the Force but he knew the Jedi was hiding in this store.
Dru shut the door behind him and ignited his lightsaber, casting an eerie green glow through the store. "Have you no shame? You can't hide from me, you might as well try to put up a respectable fight before you die." The Sith taunted as he slashed the first mannequin he came to. Dru continued his slow march from the front to the back of the store, pausing to shine his lightsaber into a dark corner or needlessly mutilate a mannequin for dramatic effect.
After the the Taldryan murdered a third mannequin he heard a rustling noise in the back of the store. "Got ya!" He moved with deliberate speed toward that part of the room. Dru caught a glimpse of Turel standing up behind a mannequin before the padawan threw the mannequin at him with an imprecise use of the Force. Dru effortlessly slashed the mannequin in two before starting to sprint toward his prey who had taken off toward the back window.
In the split second after Turel's failed mannequin attack Dru sensed impending danger, which was odd because the padawan was fleeing. Then he heard it, the unmistakable 'beep beep beep' of a thermal detonator about to go off. Dru was struck with the horrifying realization that Turel had placed a thermal detonator in the mannequin before launching it at him. That sly dog. The dark Jedi was too far from the window to get out in time so he reversed his course and dove out the door of the store into the hallway. He heard the sound of shattering glass caused by Turel leaping out the second story window before the explosive mannequin detonated.
"I'm getting too old for this." Turel pontificated to no one in particular as he stood up and brushed himself off. Even with the Force to help guide and arrest his movement, leaping out of a second story window was painful. It didn't help matters that this was the second time today Turel had been launched out of a building. Pain shot up his right leg as he took his first step. The padawan was no doctor but he was fairly certain he had a stress fracture from his last fall or a combination of both falls. He definitely wasn't going to win any fist fights or lightsaber duels with an injured leg and non-functioning hand. Turel found he was able to walk, albeit slowly, if he shifted his weight a certain way. The pain was bearable if he walked in this manner but was probably an indication that he shouldn't be walking at all.
Turel didn't have the luxury of stopping to treat his leg as he felt the white hot beacon of rage through the Force that was his Sith opponent. Dru had apparently survived the mannequin kamikaze attack and was not too happy about it. Turel hobbled away from the building as fast as he could under the circumstances. He frantically scanned the street for an idea, anything that would help him get away. He was the injured gazelle and the lion was hot on his trail. He had no illusion of surviving if Dru caught up to him.
Suddenly, Turel got an idea. He spotted the "Hunter's Den" cantina a block down the street. The "Hunter's Den" was a known bounty hunter watering hole. It was a risky maneuver given the large bounty Turel had on his own head, but he wagered that bounty was too old and too far down the bounty board for anyone to spot him right away. The standing bounty on any Jedi from Giradda the Hutt was fresh on everyone's mind though. Turel quickly tossed the armory saber he had hidden in his coat into a dumpster before heading to the bar. His masters wouldn't be happy but under the circumstances it was replaceable. Turel didn't look like a Jedi, but Dru did. The gazelle was about to lead the lion into the hyenas' den.
Dru burst out of the front entrance of the building in a rage, his face covered with tiny cuts from flying glass. He caught a glimpse of Turel ducking into a cantina down the street. The coward was probably trying to hide there. At this point the Taldryan knight was almost blind with rage. He'd slaughter the whole blasted bar if he had to. That cocky padawan was going to die and he was going to die right now!
Turel calmly sat at the bar and ordered a drink, knowing that Dru was moments behind him. He had to act like he belonged there for this charade to work. Right on cue, Dru forced his way past the bouncers, searching for Turel with his eyes full of rage. Turel stood up, pointed at Dru and began to yell in Huttese: "This man is a Jedi! His excellency Giradda the Hutt will pay ten thousand credits for his corpse and lightsaber and twenty thousand credits if you capture him alive!" The ruse worked because there was an actual posting on the bounty board for any and all Jedi. Dru was Sith, but the niceties of Force philosophy didn't matter to the bounty hunters, all they saw was a man with a lightsaber and chance to cash in.
The Taldryan knight had no idea what Turel had just said but from the way the bar's patrons were standing up and training their weapons on him it couldn't have been good. He instinctively ignited his lightsaber to defend himself. Turel's smile grew even wider when Dru pulled out his lightsaber. Why was that fool smiling? It didn't matter. The Sith knight would cut down the entire bar to get to the padawan. Finally a challenge!
Turel ducked behind the bar as the fighting inevitably broke out. He debated whether he should try to slip out the back or watch his little ruse play out. He opted to tip the balance in the bounty hunters' favor. He peeked over the edge of the bar to watch Dru cut down two Weequay bounty hunters in an elegant series of fluid motions. He had to admire the Sith, he was quite the artist of death. Turel had no intention of becoming Dru's next canvas for murder. He reached out with the Force using his full concentration. He just needed to stop Dru's movement for a second, just long enough to disrupt a deflection maneuver or a dodge. Success! Dru's forward momentum stopped just long enough for the Sith to catch a blaster bolt to the shoulder from a bounty hunter.
Two Weequay bounty hunters seized the moment and rushed Dru with stun batons before he could recover from taking the blaster bolt. Dru writhed in agony for few seconds before blacking out from repeated stun baton blows. Turel got up from behind the bar and congratulated the victorious bounty hunters. To his surprise the two Weequay paid the other bounty hunters involved in the scuffle and drug Dru's unconscious body back to their ship. They had no intention of turning in the bounty, at least not the bounty on a live Jedi anyway. He had killed two of their comrades, they would extract their bounty from the young Sith's flesh when he came to.
Turel paid his bar tab plus a little extra to cover the damage. He started to hobble toward his own ship when he felt a nagging sensation in the back of his mind. Turel the Hutt enforcer wouldn't have given a second thought to a would be assassin getting what he deserved but Turel the Jedi was trying to walk a different path. "This is stupid, I have a mission to complete." He thought to himself as he continued on. He couldn't escape a strong sensation from the Force that he had to save the young Sith from the horrific fate that awaited him at the hands of angry Weequay. "I can't believe I'm doing this."
Dru came to in a dark alley with his arms and legs still cuffed. He looked over and saw the two Weequay bounty hunters lying on the ground beside him. Turel was stripping the aliens of their weapons. The Jedi had noticed his Sith adversary had come to and knelt beside him.
"Ah, you're awake."
"Come to kill me yourself lighty?"
"Not exactly. These two are stunned and will wake up in about twenty minutes. The cuff keys are over there and your saber is in the dumpster. Don't bother coming after me, I'll be off world by the time you free yourself."
Dru was throughly confused. "Why are you doing this? This changes nothing lighty! I'm still going to find you and kill you!"
Turel shrugged. "And if I see you on a battlefield, I will kill you first. But consider us even for you not killing me earlier. See you on Begeren." The padawan walked away feeling surprisingly good about liberating Dru. Everyone needed a rival. Maybe this Jedi thing wasn't so bad after all.
The Padawan gripped a G-20 grenade in his metallic right hand and he planned to throw it at the floor of the rooftop behind the unaware Dru.
The sentence does not flow very well because of the "and he planned to".
The Sith had already heard the distinctive sound of metal rolling and felt the pulse of an explosion before Turell even threw the grenade.
Who's Turell? :P This is confusing, still. How can you hear the explosion before it was even thrown? If you're trying to describe precognition, it's not very clear in describing the pacing of the action. The progression should be -> Sith heard the distinctive sound of metal rolling and sensed the pulse of an incoming detonation. -> Dru quickly dove...ect.
You're also muddling perspective mid-paragraph.
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Awkward syntax.
The razor had just bounced off Turel’s metallic hand, as he let another blaster shot fire.
Awkward syntax.
The baton had done the job and nailed the Padawan in the face, leaving him holding his hand to his forehead and stunned with pain long enough for Dru to get close and have his lightsaber drawn.
Turel has a +3 in Athletics, and +3 Precog. I think he'd be able to dodge a thrown projectile pretty easily. It would have had the same effect of creating space/time for Dru to draw his saber, just not very realistic.