A gentle breeze blew through the ravine, causing one of the platforms to sway as it felt the embrace of the wind. Kah smiled as he felt the motion, reminded of the lily pads in the Lianorm swamp he spent much of his childhood in. He moved from the center of the platform to the outer edge, staring down the ravine and spitting. He shifted an ear flap to listen better, and when he could not hear it land he whistled in surprise. The Gungan could feel a tickle in the back of his head, as though he were being watched or someone was coming. He pretended to still be distracted by the loogie he had spat over the side, nonchalantly scanning the area around him a little better.
“Hello,” said a voice Kah did not recognize, but those syllables sent a shiver down the Gungan’s spine. The Odanite slowly turned to face the voice, and he clicked in frustration when he saw who it belonged to. The first thing he noticed was the Inquisitor armor; the second thing he noticed was the hand placed on a lightsaber. In response, Kah nodded politely while never taking his eyes off the man’s hand.
“Mesa tinkin’ mesa all alone out here,” said Kah. “That bein’ dah hope at least.”
“Perhaps you should have covered your tracks better. My time is precious, and how much of your time I take up is entirely up to you.”
The Gungan clicked again, the frustration practically smacking the air as it came from him. He motioned his hand for the man to continue, tapping his foot as he did so.
“What would you say if I could provide you with what you want, the names of the people who hired the slavers that killed your family, if you provided me with something I want?” said the man, his blue lips curling into a small smile as he saw the expression of the Gungan go from frustrated to intrigued.
“And whatsa be dis ting you want?” asked Kah.
“You to follow your heart. I can feel the struggle inside you, the anger you hold onto and the vengeance you wish to taste. Start by ridding yourself of those that chain you.”
Kah nodded his head, his fingers rubbing his bill as he looked at the person in front of him. Kah knew what the Chiss was; the Gungan knew that his own criminal record was public knowledge across the galaxy, and it wasn’t hard to guess what Kah burned for most of all. Those weren’t the answers that the Odanite wanted. What perceived chains did this stranger see?
“Mesa tinkin’ mesa gon’ pass hard on ya offa. And metinks yousa won’t be leavin’ dat answah alone, hm?” said Kah, his muscles tensing as his prepared to defend himself.
“I’ll give you one chance to reconsider. You aren’t prepared for this battle, and I don’t care how strong you think you are, preparation always trumps brute strength. You won’t survive this. Plain and simple.”
“As long as yousa die, mesa no bothered.”
Sabers hissed into life and the soft glow of cyan and red covered the two opponents. Kah clicked aggressively, and readied himself for an attack. Wasting no time, the Sith burst forth with a flurry of strikes and slashes but the Jedi dodged his attacks as they came at him. Kah lunged to the side to give himself some distance, and then used his powerful frog legs to propel himself to other side of the platform. The Chiss charged at him, attempting to land a strike on the Gungan’s shoulder or bicep, only to be blocked by the azure blade of his enemy. Kah pushed hard against his opponent, forcing the Chiss onto his back foot, and making him give ground.
Capitalizing on this, Kah struck back with a fury unbecoming of a so-called Jedi. Again, and again, the Gungan struck against the red blade of his foe, each attempt parried by the Plagueian. The Odanite started to smile; perhaps he had finally found the person who would end his suffering. Perhaps, in a way, the Chiss would help him remove his chains after all.
Positive Takeaways
Thank you for not taking the accent too far. I can definitely feel Kah is a gungan. There is enough display in the dialogue that can let the reader engage with Kah as the story goes on. Often times people will right the accents too far to the point you can't comprehend what their actually saying. Kah's words are not confusing one bit, and it's fun to read him here.
Can be Improved
The relationship to the story and the loadout are actually an important factor. It gives us a visual on what the character is wearing, and where they draw their weapons from. At best I can imagine a gungan in a loin cloth or something. Doesn't Kah also have a really nice and expensive combat droid, one that can be used in ACC battles, why not include it?