A pronounced, noticeable RIIIIIIiiiiipppp tore through the treetop canopy.
And through Satsi's pants.
For a moment, both of the Arconans stared at the large stretch of fabric in Kordath's grip, then down at the Human's muscled, shapely legs. They weren't entirely bare, clad skin-tight in silken black garters and stockings, a mix of lace and elegant seams clasped with bowed straps. It was an...incongruous look, not working aesthetically with her combat boots, the wayward belt, or the combat-fitted top with holsters. The shredded bits left of her pants riding up high around her curves, though...that wasn't a bad match.
"You...these were new!" the woman growled, startling the Ryn out of his slack-jawed, half-lidded staring. He shook himself, held up his hands, then realized he was waving about her trousers and quickly dropped them. Figured she'd be mad about her clothes and completely uncaring of her state of dress.
"Now, now, luv...is only fair...now we're both half-nekkid."
"THOSE WERE BESPIAN LEATHER!"
"Bepsin is a gas cloud, luv, I think ya got scammed. Look how shoddy they was."
Satsi shrieked in rage.
"Well it nae is me fault ya came dressed like tha' to see the Wooks! I know ya like me fur, Sats, and theirs just fine, but I dunno if they have a taste for, erm, that getup. Might just try some leaves—"
Knuckles smacked, as anticipated, into his skull. The Ryn cried out. His head was cracked enough as was and he wasn't going to walk out of here without a concussion if she kept slamming it. Actually, maybe he was already concussed. His tongue did taste a little too white in his mouth, and when colors had flavors and his ears were ringing dully, it was usually a bad sign of a fight or a good review of a drink.
"It's not for them," snarled the woman, and Kordath shied away again. Uji hadn't come with them to his knowledge, and the Ryn hadn't sensed him, so...
"For...uh...not for me? Right?"
"NO!" She hit him again, much harder this time. Starbursts of white danced behind his eyelids and his teeth felt numb. "What did I just say about not messing with you and Spots?"
"...Kelviin? Show the lad, uh, a whole new world?"
Smack, smack, smack. Ow, ow, ow.
"I'm runnin' outta folks here, lass, ya lookin' ta ride the wildlife? 'Cause even I got me limits but I swear I won't judge...much."
That time, she didn't hit him. That time, she quick-drew her pistol and shot him in the tail.
Agony exploded up his spine while the tip of his second most precious appendage exploded into the air. He screamed, watching through streaming tears as a bit of gray flesh and all the beautiful white hair connected to it went skittering off to the side in a bright but small splash of blood.
"I'm going to teach you two things, now," menaced the woman as she stood over him as he curled into a fetal position, jabbing her gun in his face. "One is yeah, making sure you can fight, and not just like you normally do. And the other is that, sometimes, people just wanna feel GODDAMN PRETTY FOR THEIR OWN DAMN SELVES."
"Me tail!" yelped Kordath in pain and outrage, clasping the raggedy end and its now-patchy fluff to his bare chest, the rest curling tight around his waist. Satsi only scoffed at his state.
"Focus, Bleu. Someone could rip it off entirely and you'd still need to get up and frakking fight and mean it. Not tricks, not gabbing, not being sly, no— just a readiness to kill."
"I'm plenty ready for that," spat the Ryn, truly upset now. He clung to the Force with a weak grip and tottered to his knees. "I can defend me damn self, Satsi, I killed before when I did nae 'ave a choice, so quit with this kark 'fore I do somethin' we'll both regret."
"You're still talking," she hissed, then swung her gun at him, aiming to knock off his head. The metal caught his temple even as Kordath dove to the side and rolled upright and to his feet, only a little wobbly, tense and loose-limbed all at once. His brain felt as though it was swimming, and he with it, arms and legs bobbing and flowing like he was suspended in water. He flowed right around her next swing, then back, then left, rolling his spine to duck under a jab. Knocked as senseless as if he were drunk and in plenty of pain, the Ryn found it easier to let go, to move how the Force urged him to. Satsi cursed at him.
The Ryn stumbled smoothly away, but the woman didn't chase him. Instead, she lifted a pistol in each hand and squeezed the triggers, her arms kicking back from the force of the chambered bullets' bursts. Fire lanced through Kordath's abdomen even as he managed to avoid one of the shots, senses absolutely screeching. It was like one long, high-pitched note of noise, going: runrunrunrunrunruuuuuun—
She had real intent to harm him.
The man gulped and clutched the graze in his side with the hand that wasn't fitted with knucklers, feeling the too-hot seep of blood. It was enough to drag him out of his comfortably half-comatose trance, bringing sharp clarity and sharper pain. Even with everything between them — because of it and despite it — he'd always known she'd never really hurt him. Not cold. Not to kill.
Her eyes were as flat and frozen as Uji's got when he was about to execute someone, now.
It was that Force-fueled realization that chilled the Ryn's bones but steadied his trembling hands. He inhaled the thick currents of power with a quick breath and leapt backwards, calves and thighs surging with supernatural strength to send him arcing off the platform and down to the next he'd sensed below it. Up above, he heard Satsi's pounding steps race for the edge, and he quickly jumped again, fingers catching awkwardly around support beams grown right from tree branches. With a heave that made his wound spurt fresh blood uncomfortably all the way down his trousers and the crack of his rear, the Ryn just managed to pull himself up, wedging his lithe body in the space between the bough and the underside of the platform. He felt each vibration of booted feet vibrating in his marrow and inside his teeth, stomping directly above him.
He breathed out slowly, holding himself still and sinking deep into the Force, letting the life of it surround him, drown him, have him. It was so thick here, amidst the trees, in the air and water. He could sense every leaf and insect nearby, sense Satsi above him, sense her shock of confusion and cold anger and determination when she peered down at the other platform but couldn't spot him. He felt her breathing. He felt the trees breathing. He breathed in.
The precious energy soaking his mind and body was a relief, bolstering his aching muscles, calming his aching head and his tired wounds. He channeled it gratefully, whispering thanks into the air for once.
His harmony wasn't long-lived, though. Only a few moments had passed before Satsi was throwing herself down to the platform across from him, slamming almost face-first into the lip of the ledge. She scrabbled to catch herself, arms glistening with sweat and chest heaving, legs swinging. The wood gave a terrible groan and then started to splinter with a shriek. The Human's efforts redoubled, frantic, as she lost one handhold and a chunk of rotted wood and moss went plummeting to the ground far, far below. For a heartbeat, she hung there, pinwheeling, one-handed grip digging into timber hard enough to leave bloody trails where her fingernails peeled back.
Then, with a mighty heave that stirred heat in the Ryn's belly even at such a dangerous moment, Satsi swung herself up and overhead like a dancer doing a tumble and landed hard on the platform. It held under her body, and she gasped and gagged as she laid there a moment before crawling away from the ledge and climbing to her feet. She pulled one gun back out of its holster.
Kordath's lips pressed into a grim line from where he sat in his hiding place. As soon as she turned around, she would spot him, and she would shoot. He couldn't possibly dodge here.
Mean it, she'd said. Kill, she'd said.
Bloody fine, he thought, both grim and resigned. Yet part of him felt free. It was the part of him that flickered in his eyes, sometimes, burnt gold with the Dark Side, the part that knew people a little too well and didn't feel so bad pulling them apart.
The Ryn focused, narrowed gaze fixing across the distance on his target. He lifted two fingers and gestured, to help guide himself, to help guide the shadowy tendrils he wrapped around her mind.
"You're afraid," he whispered to himself, not even really a sound, just a motion of lips. Across the way, Satsi went rigid. "You're scared, so scared. Yer hurt. You just want it ta stop."
The scarred Human was shaking, now. Her gun rattled in her bruised grip. She shook her head, dug nails into her scalp and tugged at her hair. Just like he knew she would. Trying so hard to keep herself grounded, in the present, in reality. She was more stubborn, more brave, more able to stand pain and hell and torment of all kinds than anybody else he'd ever met. She was a broken thing and proud for it, all her broken parts leaning defiantly against each other. But he knew the cracks, the gaps.
His concentration shifted, this much easier, as he conjured simple tricks of the senses, careful but precise illusions. Satsi whipped around at the sound of footsteps, measured and noble, stalking behind her. She turned again at a throaty, deep baritone laugh from the branches. She startled and grabbed her arms as phantom fingers danced over them, not inflicting pain but brushing with delicate pleasure far more sinister. Red and white flashed in the treetops, on the platform, in the shadows cast by vines and ferns and flowers. Nothing solid, just little glimpses. But each one caught the woman's attention, made her gasp or growl or groan until she dropped to her knees, weapon discarded, clutching at her head and whimpering.
"You just want it to stop," Kordath repeated, calling out this time, waving his hand. His mind strained, gray matter peeling slowly apart, concentration stretched and will crumbling. But still, he managed, and Satsi flinched hard at the sound of his voice despite it being unaltered.
"Please, stop," sobbed the Human. She rocked in place. Whimpered. "Just kill me, please."
It wasn't the first time he'd heard her beg like that since they got her back from her Master. The Dark Side almost vibrated at the statement, dancing up and down the Ryn's spine the more he strained for control; of it, of her, of this blasted fight. It was patient and generous and very excited by what he was doing, pushing, pushing.
"Why don't you do it?" the Ryn called, feeling oddly detached from his own mouth. There wasn't any suggestion laced in the words, no extra pressure on her mind; he was too mentally tired for that now. But words were powerful even without the Force.
Satsi convulsed violently, as if shocked, or in the midst of vomiting. Her torn-up fingertips curled around her dropped pistol. One of the nails on her finger peeled all the way back when she jammed it into the trigger space.
She put the barrel between her teeth.
NO!
All at once, the Force screamed again, and this time Kordath screamed too, reaching out so fast he nearly toppled right out of his perch. Panic and adrenaline flooded him so fast it was like his chest was being crushed and he just yanked. The telekinetic tether jerked the pistol sideways even as the shot went off and a crack tore through the air, startling birds into flight. Scarlet sprayed from Satsi's face and she dropped to the deck. The Ryn shouted, pushing off his spot and landing hard in a tumble across the floorboards of the lower platform.
No no no no no no no no no.
His body moved, somehow. He scrambled on bare hands and knees over to his friend, ignoring the splinters digging into his flesh and his wounds and scratches and bruises. He tossed his knucklers away and frantically reached for her body, only hesitating a moment once he was close, wide-eyed and hyperventilating and terrified by the spread of blood, so much blood, too much blood spreading across the lumber. His heart was grinding against his ribs with how hard it pounded.
And then he saw her chest move. It was shallow, but it rose and fell.
Oh.
Oh.
Okay, they were sideways now, that was a thing. The Ryn let himself become a puddle there next to her for just a few seconds before he marshalled enough to reach out again and gently roll his friend over. She flopped bonelessly onto her back, still rasping breaths, and then he saw the source of the wet sound that had been tickling his ears, too unimportant for him to register before: there was a gaping, bloody hole in the side of her face, burned and splattered and downright awful, sharp, ruined bits of enamel poking out from gums and skin bleeding profusely. She'd blown out her cheek.
But she was alive.
Kordath let himself sag again, clumsily curling his body around hers as much as he could with all his limbs sort of numb and his nerves vibrating at speeds to do a hyperdrive shame. The crash was hard and immediate. Blackness swamped his vision, hot and heavy, and he went down with it, just barely conscious with his mind too far gone and his body too ready to fight or flee.
If there was anything to learn here, he was bloody dealing with it later. They'd fix his tail later. She'd probably cut off a chunk of hair just to replace the bits she'd removed; was just like her a thing to do. And there was the negotiations. Kelviin might come find them and panic. Or the Wooks.
But all of that was faraway and fuzzy. For the next few minutes, he could pass out, and this would be good enough. They'd not murdered each other in some stupid attempt at rescue.
His last thought was, Yep. Good 'nough.
Positive Takeaways
I do so enjoy the colour you give the characters, through use of dialogue or even the body language they each use throughout the post. This aspect of your writing shines through brilliantly. Admittedly, took me a moment to understand their way of speaking, especially when it comes to Kordath, but it adds a fantastic feel to the writing.
Needs Improvement
In a few instances I find myself having some difficulty following in the case of some run on sentences that affect the readability of the post. One such example is in the final paragraph of this post when two run on sentences follow directly after each other. There is a lot going on in that singular paragraph. It could be broken up a little more cleanly by splitting the action up into a couple additional sentences.