Rrogon’s hand was slowly closing in on itself, crushing the windpipe of the Kiffar throw the force in front of him at a sluggish pace. This was intentional; he wanted the man to suffer as much as he could before dying. It gave the Kaleesh pleasure to see the Jedi struggle like this in a effort to save his own life. The Seer’s hands were clasped on his own neck, trying to pull at the invisible force crushing it.
A slight tingle in the back of the Arconan’s mind made him square his feet, the force rippling over his skin before the hand of the enemy Juggernaut lashed out and sent a wave of force slamming into the Siths body. This made him skid back on the bone’s and dirt, but he managed to hold his stance and glare at the Kiffar.
Skar let his grip of Tisto’s throat go, letting the Alien’s body crash to the ground in a coughing, wheezing heap. The former Gladiator began to pace back and forth, the roar of the crowd filling the battle haze of his mind like the days of old. He remembered the calls for blood and bone— the hell he lived in for so long.
Tisito slowly got to his feet, rubbing at his neck as he looked over at the predatory animal he was fighting. The beast’s metallic hands were twitching in anticipation for the second round of fighting that was to come. The air grew still between them, the only sound being the crunch of bone underfoot and the heavy breathing coming from both men.
Skar was the first to make a move as he roared, his old Gladiator challenging the deafening sound filling the maksfit arena. Charging forward, the Sith’s fists slammed into the Jedi’s face just as the Seer’s returned the favor in kind. For a lengthy second, they just stood there, waiting to see who would break first.
In the end, it was Rrogon’s strike that made the Jedi stagger back a step, the overwhelming strength of the punch forcing him to reel back. Not wanting his foe to recover, the Kaleesh pressed his advantage and charged forward leaping off the ground, briging both of his clawed metallic feet up and kicking them into the waiting arms the Kiffar,who took the impact with a grunt.
Spining mid leap, the Sith landed on the ground and pressed his attack, the Gladiator falling back on pure instinct and training as he bobbed and weaved, using his whole body as a weapon. His fists and legs crushed into the Jedi’s waiting defences, the Kaleesh swiftly realizing he was faster than his foe.
At this rate, neither side would give in and buckle anytime soon. The Aedile needed to end this soon. Ducking under a well-timed stroke, the Kaleesh grabbed the Seer’s arm and effortlessly lifted his whole body over his , slamming it onto the ground. Seizing this brief window of time, the Kaleesh leapt on top of the jedi and began to bring his fists down like hammer blows to an anvil.
The Jedi tried to throw the Juggernaut off of him several times but each time the Sith just made him pay for the attempt by hitting his exposed chest and face. Each crack of metal on flesh made the Sith smile in glee, but this needed to end now. Reaching into himself for the last time, he drew on the cold dark reservoir of energy called the darkside and let in fuel him making his limbs move faster and hit harder.
The fight ended with resounding crack as the Sith’s fist slammed into the Jedi’s temple. His opponent’s form had crumpled into the ground, limp. Skar rolled off the Seer’s body and began to breathe heavily. The tax of using that much power was evident on his body. Looking over, the Sith saw something in the Jedi’s robes that made him pause. Reaching into the Kiffar’s robes, the Kaleesh pulled out a device he roughly recognized as a plasma cutter.
A sinister smile overcame the Juggernaut as he flipped the cutter on, the blinding blue light filling the space.
“Time to make you pay for fighting me fool,” snarled Rogon as he brought the blue blade of plasma cutter down onto the legs of the man next to him, beginning to cut him apart little by little, taking his time with the effort. At some point, Tisto woke up from the pain and bean to scream but it was to late for him... the damage was done.
Standing back up, the Sith looked over his work— at the now crippled man before him.
“Remember this; next time you try to fight someone always go for the kill” he spat, throwing the plasma cutter to the ground and walking away. The Sith left the Jedi to die on the planet alone and scared.
Positive Takeaways
You did a good job in this post of using the venue to further the story and including a healthy amount of action. The Inquisition profile was used effectively to introduce knowledge of Skar's character that Tisto normally wouldn't have and allowed you as a writer to describe some of Skar's characteristics. A good example is this line:
Needs Improvement
Not quite sure if stalked is the right word for this sentence.
I would have liked to see more of Skar in this post, specifically showcasing more of Skar's character. He had no dialogue and just seemed to react to what Tisto was doing. You did use the profile plot device to highlight some things from Skar's CS but you had some free wordspace in this post to give the reader some insight into what Skar was thinking and doing, even writing solely from Tisto's perspective.