“What is wrong with you?!” Ryan said as he shook his own hand, “Where is your sense of honor? Of pride?”
Creon dropped the barrier, there was no sense in doing an exchange of throwing things with the Force. He was going to give Ryan what he wanted. Ryan could sense it too, he could feel Creon’s intent to be genuine. Finally! Ryan thought to himself as he removed his own helmet to meet Creon’s gaze, the real fight begins.
Ryan approached with a few feinting jabs with his hurt hand and looked for an opening to cross with the other. Creon was somewhat of an agile enough dodger, even in the armor he was wearing. Ryan actually had trouble getting a good hit in. Any attempts of a side hook, uppercut to the head, or hit with the knee wasn’t going to do him much good. The distance those attacks had to cover would take too long, especially in his armor that was starting to weigh a toll. Ryan stayed on the offensive with feinting hooks followed by uppercuts. He managed to get an uppercut blow to the torso after Creon opened up his elbows to block a crossing jab. The hit caused his opponent to grunt, but it didn’t seem to affect him as much as it should. Creon then tucked and turned to his side with some jabs of his own followed by a kick to create distance.
Ryan needed to change styles. Creon was too focused on protecting his exposed head, and hitting the armor did little to nothing. Using the impact from the weight of his armor might do the trick. Ryan lowered his upper torso and ran in to tackle Creon. Creon sank into his stance and began punching down at Ryan’s head as Ryan wrapped his arms around Creon’s waist. He then slid behind the soldier, squatted, and lifted with his legs with a roar to try and perform a suplex. When Creon felt himself being lifted, he clicked his heels together and activated his boot thrusters. Both combatants were sent into the air and landed hard against the cavern wall of the base just slightly above the ground. Creon then deactived the thrusters and the two landed. The impact was fine for Creon, but Ryan looked to be out of breath. Creon then quickly turned and delivered a cross to Ryan’s jaw that sent him to his knees.
“Pride,” Creon said as he took deep breaths to lower his heart rate, “isn’t something to be proud of.” He took a few steps away from Ryan to allow him to catch his breath. He found a seat on one of the crates and then just stared into space towards the opening to the outside, “Sure, keep your dignity, but pride itself elevates the ego. You’ll constantly compare yourself to others, rationalizing some sense of superiority or inferiority. This always happens, especially for men and combat. We get arrogant or conceited. It’s not us we need to focus on, but everyone else.”
Creon takes a small pause and lets out a sigh, “I get it. We put in the time, we work hard, and we fight odds that are always stacked against us. We’re Jedi Knights, and everyone knows that it’s the harder road to take. It would be nice to get recognition for it. But we can’t go seeking it, or always having something to prove. It distracts us from what we do, which is helping others.”
Ryan took a moment on his knees to try and catch his breath and register Creon’s words. Creon didn't seem like the bookworm sort, but there was wisdom in his words. Ryan remembered that he elected to defend the innocent and keep the peace by becoming a Jedi. It wasn’t about how he did it, or what measures it took to attain it, only that peace would be achieved. If he spent too much time focusing on himself, he would lose grasp with the reality that there are those in need of him and depend on him. He wouldn’t be able to do it alone with his fists, either, or a blade. He needed to expand his horizons, instead of focusing on just one or two forms of fighting.
Creon glanced when he saw Ryan pick himself back up. The soldier came back to his feet and once again resumed his fighting stance.
“No, I’m done,” Ryan responds.
“Oh?” Creon says in surprise, lowering his fists.
Ryan approached Creon and met his gaze, reached out with his hand to shake, and said in a respective tone, “I agreed to come out here to better myself as a fighter. To learn something from a new opponent. I believe i’ve done just that. Thank you.”
Creon smiled and took his hand, “We all have lessons we can teach each other. Maybe next time you can invite me to the dojo.”
Positive Takeaways
Story
You do a good job of keeping the combat balanced with the setup which can be difficult in the opening post. A good rule to try and stick to is roughly half should be setup and the other half combat, though as long as one doesn’t massively outweigh the other, you should be fine.
Can Be Improved
Realism
You struggle with accounting for Ryan’s armour in your writing. As per the Armour section, Heavy Armour adds an encumbrance of 2, which is equivalent to -2 athletics and Endurance from what you have on your character sheet. This makes the actions Ryan performs unrealistic. To avoid repeating this mistake, I would take note of the armour both characters have equipped and factor any encumbrance into your writing.