Tahiri watched as her perfectly aimed throwing dagger whizzed right past the Chiss’ left ear. Smiling as the man ducked into a crouch, the Togruta rolled forward to get herself under him. Not exactly the place anyone would want to be, especially with a man of his stature, however for Tahiri’s plan it was perfect.
The Togruta bounced out of the roll, landing right in front of Strong just as he looked up. She gently placed the vibrosword's blackened tip on the edge of his chin.
“Tsk, tsk.” Tahiri smirked as she felt the man stiffen beneath her blade. “Oh don’t worry, I’m not going to hurt you, yet. After all, we just got started.”
Her body reacted faster than her mind, senses and reflexes taking over. Tahiri pushed off from him chest with her left hand, narrowly missing getting caught in his quick vice like grip, again.
That was a little too close for comfort, Tahiri thought as she spun a few meters away from him. Standing up to her full height, Tahiri watched the hulking man stand as well.
”Yes, we are just getting started, Madame Tahiri,” Strong’s voice boomed again, with a slight chuckle at the end. ”That was an interesting move you did there, miss.”
“Awww, well thank you. Not many people compliment me on my moves,” bowing slightly, Tahiri smiled as she replied sincerely.
Tahiri didn’t really want to hurt the Chiss too much. The fact that his job was protecting Kord was more important than anything. But she already knew Kord was safe at the moment and didn’t need Strong. However, she still wanted a good fight.
He also looks karking good without his shirt on. Kark it, Tahiri, keep yourself together! Although he is quite a gentleman. Tahiri reached for and began to gather the Force. Reaching up and over her shoulder, the Togruta unsheathed her second vibrosword.
“Better get that baton out, you might just need it.” Tahiri lunged for him again, this time taking a different tactic. She feinted a slashing horizontal strike across his midsection, only to go right past him. With augmented speed, the Togruta turned quickly on the balls of her feet as Strong tried to follow. Going low, she slapped the backside of calves with the width of her vibroblades.
She watched with amusement as the Chiss let out a grunt as his legs buckled beneath him. Watching the Chiss land hard on his knees, Tahiri walked confidently up to him.
“Well, you know what they say, big boy. The bigger they are, the har…” Tahiri stopped mid sentence as she felt the firm, strong arms of the Chiss wrap around her, with his hands grabbing her wrists and holding them securely to her side.
Strong quickly stood to his full height, lifting Tahiri in a gentle though firm hug. While the Togruta furiously struggled to wiggle free from her captor, Strong let out a soft chuckle.
”Madame Tahiri, it is fruitless for you to try and escape. Now can you please drop your weapons, or will I have to make you drop them.” Strong looked down at her struggling in his arms.
“You were faking it, weren’t you?” Tahiri gritted her teeth, as she tried twisting out of his grip. Looking up, she saw Strong softly smile.
“No, and yes. That hit stung the back of my legs, in fact they are still stinging.”
Tahiri stopped struggling, and sighed. “Well, I guess this means you won.”
Hearing the clatter of metal hitting the stone ground, Strong raised an eyebrow at the petite Togruta in his arms.
“No Strong, I promise you no more tricks. Upon my honor as a warrior, I will fight you no further.” Tahiri flashed the Chiss a sincere smile and relaxed her entire body. Strong just stared at her for a few moments.
“Umm Strong, would you mind letting me go? My hands feel a bit numb and I’m having a bit of a hard time breathing.”
”Oh, my apologies, miss!! I am so sorry.” The Chiss hurriedly put Tahiri down, and stepped back a step, still keeping one hand on her shoulder. ”Are you alright?”
“Yes, Strong, I’m just fine,” Tahiri replied with a laugh. “No worries, you didn’t hurt me, and I’m glad that I didn’t hurt you. Kord is very lucky to have a man like you around to protect him.”
Tahiri let out a small chuckle as she sat on the stone ground, pushing one vibrosword out of the way.
“I’m just going to sit here a moment.”
”I think that I will join you, Madame Tahiri.”
Positive Takeaways
Language used in dialogue, teamed with some of the more subtle body language creates a fantastic image of both characters. The Chiss’ way of speaking is well expressed, and you make great use of two of his Aspects from the start.
Needs Improvement
The great thing about introduction post is that you get to set the tone and take your brush to the image you are creating with your words before your opponent. I feel as though you could have done a lot more in your painting of the scene, perhaps throw in further splashes of your environment to truly draw in your reader. Your surroundings seem to be an afterthought.