With his prey having slipped away, Andrelious was seething. He was already angry enough that he had been brought to such a backwater for no apparent reason, and the fact that Luna didn’t seem to be behind the ruse angered him further. Someone was toying with him, and they would pay, but he had to deal with the irritation posed by the Mandalorian fist.
Luna was a weapon down, but she was far more comfortable in the jungle environment than Andrelious, who didn’t appear to be suited for a longer, more drawn out conflict. She’d be able to last for days, whilst the Sith would probably either get hungry, or simply become tired of the chase.
Just wait it out. Let him leave. the female reasoned with herself, observing Andrelious from a safe distance.
Andrelious could still feel Luna nearby, but he couldn’t physically see her. He pondered continuing deeper into the jungle in an attempt to locate her.
No. That’s playing into her hands. Let’s see if she left anything on that ship of hers!
The Sith turned back towards the crash site and surveyed the scene. The T-3c’s fuselage was still largely intact, whilst smoke plumed from the destroyed engines. The ship would probably never fly again, but as Andrelious approached, he was sure he could sense life from within.
As the Taldryanite disappeared from view, Luna started to wonder exactly what Andrelious was doing.
“Find him, Sirius,” the female said to her droid.
The DDP-13 beeped in compliance and flew away, its photoreceptor blinking furiously at it scanned the area for lifeforms. Meanwhile, Luna switched her helmet to thermal view, knowing that Andrelious’ body heat would give away in the chilly jungle. To her horror, she spotted a red and orange blob moving straight towards a rather familiar looking large white object.
Eris. He’s going after Eris. The evil little hut’uun
Andrelious clambered the ramp of the crashed Valkyrie. He examined the cockpit instruments, which confirmed that the engines were destroyed, whilst also indicating that the ship was connected to something a little way out in the jungle.
Luna sprinted as fast as she could, genuinely terrified at what she was going to find aboard her ship. She was long past the shock that anyone would ignore a fully armed combatant in favour of a wounded companion, but the idea of anyone hurting Eris still made her sick to the stomach. Puffing and panting as she ran, she almost fell over as she reached Andrelious, who was examining the medical capsule as if to ascertain exactly how he was to get inside.
“Stop! You have no quarrel with Eris!” Luna cried out.
“So this person is with you? That makes her guilty by association!” Andrelious snapped in response.
Luna fired two shots towards the Sith, who once again deflected them away with simple swats of his lightsaber. The attack hadn’t been intended to hit Andrelious, but to simply keep him occupied whilst the Mandalorian moved into range and converted her weapon into electro-staff mode.
“Guilty by association? Typical Inquisitor. Always lightsabers first, questions later,” the Odanite declared.
Andrelious raised an eyebrow. “I’m not with the Inquisition. Not anymore. Not since Karufr,” he explained, not lowering his lightsaber.
“You sound like one and you act like one. Same difference to me,” Luna sneered. As she studied Andrelious, looking for a potential weakness, she spotted an empty child carrier on the Sith’s back. “And yet you have children?”
“Four. Three daughters, one son. They’re who I fight for. Not the Brotherhood, or the Lotus, or even Taldryan. My family,” the Seeker explained.
Luna nodded. “And Eris is part of my family. Aliit ori'shya tal'din,”
“I don’t speak your dialect. Something to do with family?” Andrelious guessed, remembering something Nadrin Erinos had once told him.
“Family is more than blood. Perhaps not for you; you’re lucky. Your blood family’s survived a warzone,” the female replied.
The two combatants still pointed their respective weapons at each other, but the dialogue seemed to have given Andrelious a pause for thought. His whole pose started to relax.
“That still doesn’t explain why you’re here. I came here to find one of the zealots that stayed with Pravus. And from what you said earlier, you thought I was a Collective defector?” the Taldryanite questioned.
“Yes. Only realised you weren’t when you came at me with that lightsaber,” Luna explained.
“You still shot at me,” Mimosa-Inahj stated, tensing up again.
“And you shot me down. I have to protect my family. As you thought you were protecting yours,”
“Simply acting on the information I had at the time. But you don’t even know me, or my family. I very much doubt we’ll even meet again. I think I can just about walk away from this. For once, nobody has to die,” Andrelious commented,.
Without bothering to wait for Luna to answer, Andrelious walked away, keeping his lightsaber active in case the Odanite tried anything. He wasn’t too surprised when she didn’t.
Getting way too old to play war... he thought as he climbed back into Tseb’si’tsaerb III.
Luna Okami pushed Eris’ medical capsule back towards her ship, still not quite sure as to what had happened or why Andrelious had seemed to back down so quickly.
*Even to a Sith, family is everything. Never too old to learn...” the female mused.
Positive Takeaways
Introduction
I like the creative direction you went with for the set up of the match, even if it’s not exactly explained why someone would shoot down Luna’s ship. I’d suggest including the reason for shooting down the ship in the post to not leave the reader confused. Also, finding creative ways for characters to enter the venue can, within reason, be a positive in the future.
Can Be Improved
Realism
There’s a part of the post where Andrelious rolls on his side, then later on in the post he’s described as moving himself from a prone position with no mention of where he ends up after rolling on his side. I’d suggest using more specific language to define what you meant the result of the roll to be to avoid portraying an inaccurate image later on.