Not giving the half-Ryn any time to recompose herself, Magik wrapped his arms about her waist and hoisted her up the ledge. She didn't fight him at first, her mind and left hand pressing upon the fresh wound, the stiletto still embedded. But that didn't last long.
Blood-soaked fingers ripped the blade free, her legs leveraging against his as her elbow drove into his cheekbone. Head reeling, Magik stumbled, nearly tipping them back down the outcrop. He tried to dodge the next blow, but it still clipped near his eye — sending a fresh wave of pain through his temple. With his grip weakened, Zujenia twisted around and pressed the stiletto against his throat. Her sandy tail lashed against his legs as her dark amber eyes burned.
“We are going up there,” the ex-Quaestor pointed with her right arm at a fairly sized, sheltered alcove a fair distance up the rocky slope. She winced at the pull on her wound, continuing. “And waiting out a rescue team — or so help me, Ashla and Bogan!”
“...If you wish.” The Sith narrowed his own brown eyes, his chin slightly slick from the blood on her hand. Zujenia certainly had skills in defensive melee, one ability checked off the list to report. Annoyance flared in him again. He really had preferred avoiding close combat. Magik quietly agreed with her plan, but he would not follow it at the point of a blade. Extending a mental probe with the Force to the white-haired woman, he caught glimpses of a small hybrid child and another Ryn whose visage looked akin to the Consul. The flooded emotion of weariness and fear led him to believe they were loved ones, a weakness…Magik tried fishing for names before a firm wall ushered him out of her mindscape.
“I am sure the Consul will quickly note your absence, Zujenia.” He nearly smiled at the tension that set in her being in response. “We’ll be back to our homes and comforts and the little one in no time.”
“Stay. Out of. My mind —”
Her growl was cut short as he stepped backwards, his torso moving parallel with her arm as his left hand wrapped about her wrist. Magik twisted the limb, pressing his free palm between her shoulders, forcing her forward. Pebbles clattered off the ledge, followed closely by the silver stiletto that slipped from her grip with a sharp gasp.
The Force lashed across his nerves to hop backwards, barely avoiding the halfling’s low kick. His heels teetered on the stone’s edge, the waves crashing a ways behind him. Magik chose to abandon his hold on her and darted further onto the ledge. Zujenia swiftly followed, throwing an aggressive series of punches and kicks, all targeting any vulnerable areas he’d left open. It was all he could manage but to redirect the blows. She was stronger than he thought.
Magik’s counters started to delay, exhaustion seeping into his muscles. Every exchange nearly resulted in Zujenia grappling him into a brutal, finishing blow. His chest rose with labored breath, the waterlogged armor not aiding in their spar.
Blasted woman!
The Sith pivoted to his left, intending to graze past his fellow Qel-Droman’s extended arm and knee her in the gut. His nerves twitched with forewarning a fraction too late, dropping a sense of regret. With unnatural speed, Zujenia spun, his blow bouncing off her hip, and struck him in the throat. Doubling over, gagging, Magik’s dark gaze briefly connecting with the partially gloved fist boring down upon his temple. And there was nothing...
Zujenia straightened up, shoulders heaving. Blood from her injury had coated her chest, thick and sticky and staining. She stumbled backwards until her heels touched a small edge of another ledge, letting her plop down haphazardly on the stone surface. Staring at her fellow comrade’s — if she could call him one still with what occured — unconscious body, the half-Ryn started ripping strips of fabric from her pants.
What was she going to do with him? There was still a distance to go up the slope in order to reach the shelter she spotted, no way she could hoist him there herself. She pressed the homemade gauze to her shoulder with a grimace and hiss. Vowing to bind his arms with her belt later, Zujenia settled down to staunch the bleeding, to prepare for his waking, and wait for a ship to come.
Positive Takeaways
Excellent use of the venue throughout the post. I also liked how you had Magik's frustration slowly boil throughout the post until he just picked the fight he was always going to pick anyway due to his mission. Having the conflict start by ramping up like that felt more natural than if you had started with him attack her to gauge her capabilities for the mission.
Areas for Improvement
I believe you meant "lobbing" in this context. You had some other stray typos in this post as well.
I get there you were being a little cheeky here with your opponent having a weapon in his loadout that he had +0 skill in but the fact that the Lanvarok discs were guided by the Force, and you depicted them as such, it seemed odd to me that they'd miss by that much. Not a realism error or anything like that, I just wanted to point out that I don't think this passage had the effect on the reader you intended.