“Eh?” shouted the Ryn from across the maze of catwalks, unable to make out what had been said from so far. “What’d ya say? Why ya tryin’ ta shoot me!?”
The armored figure shook their head and began moving methodically towards him, taking turns without hesitation. Bleu threw the hovering ID9 a glare, understanding how his enemy was managing. They were drawing closer, and Kordath could sense a clear intent to do him great and grievous harm.
“Who tha frack are ya!?” he shouted again, eyeing the nearby stairs. The hostile droid was watching him. Closing his eyes, he sank into the currents of the Force, feeling it wash over his mental fatigue, re-energizing him. Sensing the ethereal strength flowing through his body, he focused and redirected it, trying to soothe his tired muscles and slow his breathing. He rolled his head on his shoulders, stretching the tendons and letting out a long breath. The Consul’s talents with manipulating his own person were limited at best, but he felt more capable than he had a few minutes prior.
His killer was closer, of course, and with a snap-hiss came a blade from the saber hilt. Violet was too strong a word, and he wondered if it wasn’t the stark scenery around them that made it look neon pink. Despite a cautioning voice in his head, the Ryn knew what he was going to do next.
“Oi, mate, yer wife know ya took her saber ta work today?”
“Excuse me?” came the muffled voice from behind the helmet. “I was already going to take your tail for a trophy for my beloved, but I guess I can make you suffer too.”
“Do we know each other, mate? Feels personal.” Voice ain’t familiar, hard ta tell with all tha armor but it sounds like a woman.
“Stop calling me ‘mate!’” she shouted. Bleu licked his lips and watched her close in. “My dear Andrelious was right, you are so annoying.”
Kord’s lips quirked into a grin. If this was who he thought it was, he might still talk his way out of this.
“Alright, yeah, not his favorite person, I know. But come on, Kooki, we never had no real iss—” he yelped as the Force screamed in warning. He threw himself backward ahead of the saber that lashed out at him, sensing nothing but murder from the figure before him.
Somethin’ I said?
Whoever this woman was, she was pissed. The saber strikes were powerful and deliberate, yet fueled with rage. Her movements sped, Kordath sensing the Force rising in the Juggernaut. The vibrant blade made sweeping attacks, narrowly missing the retreating Ryn. Kordath wasn't even bothering trying to fight back against the towering, armored schutta that was trying to bisect him. He heard a muffled command come from her helmet and was forced to dodge on two fronts when her droid responded to it and charged.
Blast it, this is gonna end bad, he thought, mind racing. He hopped over another horizontal slash and smashed the bottle — and what remained of its contents — over the droid’s dome-like body. In the corner of his eye, he saw the woman pulling back for a thrust, yet felt no impending danger. Uh oh. He shivered, blood running cold when he realized his connection to the Force was being cut off.
Even as the droid fell sparking to the catwalk, the Ryn landed and tried his best to dodge the incoming stab. He heard the woman grunt in annoyance as his own Skitters unit leaped up to cling to her right arm, throwing her thrust off target and narrowly saving its master from being skewered. Kordath didn’t hesitate to scramble away from the armored woman, moving towards the next platform. A shriek filled his ears, drawing him to turn and watch his ID9 get ripped from the Juggernaut’s arm and thrown into the air. With an almost casual flick of the wrist, a burst of lightning arced from Granta’s hand to the droid, causing Skitters to wail and spark. The droid’s red eye went dark, and he plummeted into the ash and darkness below.
“Ah hell, ya did yer best, lad,” sighed Kord, wincing. “Stay ahead of her and I’ll be fine. She’ll tire herself out, yeah. She’s slower than me, covered in that bleedin’ armor, just gotta outrun her!” he muttered to himself, clambering atop some cargo crates in hopes of finding a catwalk within jumping distance.
“Gotta get...tha high ground..,” he grunted, cresting the top box and looking back.
He got the impression that there was a glare behind that helmet as she deactivated her saber and clipped it to her waist.
“Do nae suppose this means we’re talkin’, eh?”
She didn’t respond, instead moving to the other side of her belt and pulling her WESTAR up to her shoulder. Bleu reached out with the Force and was relieved when a field of energy formed before him this time. He set himself in preparation for the barrage. Something felt off though when the blaster rose higher than it needed and he saw the under barrel tube.
Oh, no, he had time to think before the first ‘thoomp’ filled his ears. The grenade impacted with the pile of cargo he was standing atop, blasting apart crates and sending him sprawling. Everything below Bleu shifted as he tried to regain his footing, another grenade smashing apart more containers. One final explosion sent the Ryn flying off what was left and down, screaming as he plummeted into the lava below.
Granta stomped up to the edge, leveling her blaster and peering down into the flowing river of molten rock. She could no longer feel him through the Force and smiled under her helmet before it froze into a rictus.
“No! No trophy to take home to him. Sithspit! What a waste of time!”
She turned from the edge and screamed in annoyance, lacking any proof of her kill to show her beloved Andrelious.
Positive Takeaways
I guess with an alcoholic character, the “Hangover” opening mystery on how Kord gets into the situations he ends up is a good story plot to use. Your loadout and their aspects also supports these kind of moments, which only makes it feel more authentic. Also helpful in very random venues like this one. Clever.
Can Be Improved
The rule of thumb is to use only 3 periods with elipses.
Not worth a sin here or anything, but I’m not very familiar with Kord enough to know his ‘usual method’ is. Nor was it listed, be nice to know.
Although I enjoyed the perspective of Kord’s experience and how get got onto Mustafar. Why was it that Granta was already set up to take him out as Kord was passed out? I hope this gets addressed later on in the story.