Neither of them was supposed to be here. He for how antithetical to his being this place was, and she for how very much it defined her.
For him, the Zeltron perfume and clattering chance dice were misama and cacophony. In them was the adultery and avarice that had long abused him, all he opposed. He was ice, and quiet, and sharpness. He was order, and precision, and abnegation. He was the Gray, and the guilty, and he was such a creature of utter selflessness that to him even his breath was borrowed.
For her, the moans, curses and blood under glittering nails was an old skin. This was her birthing soil. Her roots ran deep into this hollow, and it would eat her alive and very soon kill her — kill the "me" she had worked so hard to make when she'd ripped herself free from the snarl of black briars and rubicund roses.
But both of them had been forged by pain and punishment, and both of them knew how to pretend. They knew what it was to be whatever tool they needed to be, and so they could exist even where it should have been impossible.
Marick Tyris met Satsi Tameike's eyes across the club dance floor the moment she walked in.
Marick wore gray robes and some other face, different in subtle ways that were probably easy to maintain, but she knew him when she saw him by the way he carried himself and the timeless age of his gaze. He was speaking to — frak her life — a small cadre of Black Sun bangers in a side booth. As if coming near her homeworld wasn't fatal enough. But the risk had to be taken. She had been trying to reach the Hapan since they'd missed one another on Nancora. She owed this. To him, and to Atyiru.
The woman swallowed her terror and approached leisurely, blending in amongst the party-goers even in her skin-tight armor. When she was near enough to the booth to overhear some of the chatter, she hooked her legs around the nearest available body, grinding back against them as if she was just any other spice-high streetwalker.
"...looking for new funds...new avenues...recommended by Capital Enterprises."
"One of our best…can provide…"
It was hard to keep track of a discrete criminal business conversation with a man panting in her ear, but she managed. That's what Tyris was doing? Tracking the Collective's funding?
Satsi disentangled herself and moved for a quieter alcove where she could wait the meeting out, but then one of the group looked up and at her and called in disbelief, "Doll?!"
Frakkity frakking—
"Doll, that is you! Isn't it my lucky day?"
Frak!
Well, there went any chance of subtlety or getting out of here alive, even with PB waiting up on the roofs with a rocket. She smiled, letting the Demon's Doll come over her like a second skin and stepping out in front of the booth.
"Hey, Oinotna. It's been awhile."
He stood up, and the rest stood with him.
"Three years since you ran out on us, and, what, coming up on the anniversary of your murdering the boss?"
"Time flies." His hand dropped to his gun in his coat. Hers did the same. She couldn't afford to look away long enough to gauge what Marick was doing.
"It does."
Satsi quick-drew her pistol and shot him in the face.
Everything else exploded into motion while her old subordinate's face exploded into moist pink mist. The bouncers shouted. Patrons screamed and scattered. The music scratched and died as the DJ ran. The Suns all drew their own pieces, pointing them at her even as she aimed at them.
And then there was Marick, smooth and silken as shadow, gliding in between the two parties with a raised hand warding.
"Please," he spoke in clear, accentless Basic, raising his voice and lowering his cloak's hood. He looked to the Suns, then nodded at Satsi. "Allow me, as your guest. A demonstration of our new solidarity."
There was a pause, and then the gangleader laughed.
"You want to fight her? Go ahead. But when you die, I expect my credit to come through anyway. Your people and mine, we're in business now."
"Of course," the Hapan lied smoothly, not fluttering a perfect lash. Satsi paled.
A Sith dagger appeared in his hand.
Her gaze followed its descent for just a second, and in that heartbeat, he moved.
In a blink he was in front of her. She lashed out at him, and he easily stepped past the punch, yanking her forward by the arm instead. He threw her past him to the sticky ground and a kick plowed swiftly into her abdomen.
Breath burst from her chest as agony did the same. She resisted the urge to buckle and instead rolled upright, shooting in the direction she thought he was. There were more screams from the fleeing crowd but no Marick. Her gaze whirled—
He was there again in a blur. He slashed at her and she jerked back, feeling the edge slice up her cheek and over her eye. It wasn't deep enough to blind but blood spurted nonetheless and she swore as she shot again, blindly. Again he seemed faster even than the bullets, or able to know before she even pulled the trigger. Snarling, the Human drew her own blade, breathing fast and struggling to keep up.
Marick's movements were graceful and fluid, the hand that wasn't clutching a dagger open-palmed and striking at her between stabs. Twice he jabbed at the crook of her elbow, another at the juncture of her collarbone. Each strike was powerful, more so than his momentum could possibly afford him, numbing her arm as pain and shock radiated through her shoulder.
Her pistol clattered out of her grip and she was left barely bringing her dagger up quick enough to prevent a new hole in her chest.
Positive Takeaways
Jesus. That’s poetry. You can’t be hitting me hard right in the beginning. I wasn’t ready!
For real though, this tells a lot about both characters’ reaction to the venue in a very beautiful way. I knew walking into a match with you two was going to be impactful, but I didn’t expect to have to walk away for 10 minutes after reading the first few lines.
Aight. Damn.
Can Be Improved
Misama? Miasma? I needed a dictionary to be sure. I think you meant Miasma.
This isn’t detraction worthy, but it’s a little unclear as to the actual volume the “cacophony” of music in the club is playing, and how close “near enough” actually is. I’ve been in a club before, and it was so loud I couldn’t even hear my own voice. I had to have my buddy scream in my ear 3 times when he was telling me he was going to use the bathroom. Now my perception isn’t +2 like Satsi’s; it’s likely +0 if anything. But Perception doesn’t gives you better hearing. Rather, it means the character has more focus on the peripheral awareness of their various senses. That being said, it’s a bit hard to believe she can hear a relatively closed-off conversation. She would need to be somewhat as close as her mouth-breather of a dance partner or be apart of the conversation circle. Now if she was reading lips, that would have been a whole other story. I’d go with that next time, if you can.