Lucine’s emerald eyes were wide, and her thoughts raced as she tried to figure out what in the world had just happened. At last his words registered, and she slowly reached down to pull her lightsaber from her belt.
“You wish for me to face you?” she asked quietly, igniting her lightsaber as she spoke. The glow of the green plasma blade reflected in her eyes. “Very well, darling, though I suspect you will regret that request in a very short period of time.”
She fell into a familiar stance, holding the plasma blade above her head and parallel to the filthy ground while her right hand was stretched in front of her. Magik’s expression filled with disbelief as he recognized what was clearly defensive posture. I already cut her armor. Does she really think she has any hope of fighting me?
“You can’t be serious,” he said as he adopted a more casual stance, his weapon held loosely in his hand.
“I assure you that I am in deadly earnest,” Lucine murmured in reply.
“If you insist. One way or another, I’ll have my answers even if it means removing a limb or two!” As the words left his lips, Magik darted forward in what appeared to be a reckless charge. He swung his lightsaber toward her in a wide arc, but the redhead deflected with a quick flick of her own weapon.
“Oh, I will be happy to talk, darling!” Lucine replied as she responded with a quick thrust of her blade.
Magik deftly deflected it. “Then tell me why! Why did you collude with Rhylance? What did you two possibly hope to gain?” He punctuated his words with a series of quick, almost haphazard attacks. Each one was parried, though the Sith made no move to counterattack.
“Is it not obvious, darling? We had similar goals. It made for a natural alliance,” Lucine said with a smirk.
The Warrior did not bother to reply. Instead, he launched into a complex series of attacks as he tried to penetrate the redhead’s defense. Lucine stood firm, deflecting his blows but refusing to be drawn into making an attack of her own.
“Say what you will, but Rhylance’s genius cannot be denied,” the Sith continued. “We had it all planned out, the perfect scheme that would have neatly placed Arcona under our control. It was a thing of beauty, and you destroyed it.”
Magik fell back, panting from his exertions. It was obvious that the two of them were evenly matched when it came to lightsaber combat. As he studied his opponent, it dawned on him that a change had come over the redhead. The charming, personable facade that she typically used was falling away to reveal her true nature. Her face was cold, emotionless, but her eyes held hatred and the promise of death.
She seems to be getting slower in deflecting against my attacks, Magik thought desperately as he considered the situation. But he was also getting tired from his exertions. He had to end this quickly. How could he get past her defense?
“So what was it? What was the plan?” he asked as he reached out with the Force, concentrating on three of the wicked-looking torture implements that rested on a nearby shelf.
“I suppose it does not matter now, does it? And even if I did tell you—” Lucine’s words were abruptly cut off with a gasp as the blood-crusted tools were suddenly hurled toward her. She cut one neatly in two. The second grazed past her face, leaving a jagged cut on her cheek. The third bounced ineffectually off of her damaged armor.
Magik took advantage of her distraction by darting forward with a shout, slashing at her with his lightsaber. Surprised, Lucine stumbled backward. Instead of cutting off her hand, as he’d intended, the plasma blade cut through the hilt of her weapon.
“It’s over!” the Warrior snarled as he leveled his lightsaber at his fallen foe.
But Lucine only glared up at him. She took a deep breath as she drew upon her rage and her hatred, throwing all of her will against him. Tendrils of darkness tore into his mind. He gritted his teeth as he fought against the intruding presence that sought to dominate him entirely. His body gave an involuntary shudder as he fought the psychic battle.
“You are quite correct. It is over,” the Sith hissed.
The plasma blade that was leveled at her throat trembled, then was slowly lowered as the Warrior’s mental defenses fell away beneath the redhead’s onslaught. He could only stare in horror as a wicked smile spread slowly across Lucine’s face.
He shuddered as a series of rapid-fire images accosted his mind: horrifying, agonizing acts that only the most sadistic mind could have conceived. “He was my friend,” the redhead said softly. “Given time, he might have become more than that. You took something very precious from me, Magik. You made me hurt. So now, I am going to take my time and repay the favor.”
Positive Takeaways
Illusion
I like how the post dealt with the use of Illusion, the reader, as well as Magik, are kept in the dark as to what’s Lucine and what’s the Illusion. It ties in neatly to Lucine’s Unconventional Combatant aspect and linking combat aspects into how someone conducts themselves in combat is a good thing. Maybe writing down the aspects of the characters can help you do this more.
Can Be Improved
Word Count
Clocking in at just under half the available word count the post felt like more could have been done with it. Either planning out the post beforehand or setting aside more time to write it could help fulfil more of the potential this post had.