Cimozjen Kurios trudged through the field of ancient bones, ignoring the dust that swirled around his armored boots. His nightly visions had drawn him to this place, this graveyard. He was to meet someone here or find something. Or take something from someone, he wasn’t certain, the dreams had been vague. He shifted the rifle slung over his shoulder, feeling uneasy as he made his way deeper into the shadowy boneyard. Where the jungle met the graveyard he could feel teeming life, but nearby there was next to none. Not much deeper within he sensed a spark, someone strong in the Force. Their intentions were…
He paused midstep, eyes closed as he focused his mental attention on the being. They were uncaring. Cimozjen would go so far as to call the man jubilant as a voice drifted through the dusty bones to reach his ears. Curious, the Dark Jedi walked forward, feeling as if he’d traversed this path before a dozen times, but unable to recall what he witnessed when he would wake. Today, today he would sort out the meaning of his dream, and no doubt gain something from it.
Power, a new strength, perhaps a new ally? They sound as if they’re not a threat, he mused as he turned sideways to move between a pair of ribs. Here, he realized, was where the vision usually ended. He licked his lips and stepped through into an area that was clearer, and stopped, jaw-dropping and silvered eyes gaping.
It was, he thought, a Ryn. They weren’t a widespread people, but he’d heard about them. The tales were all the same; thieves, dancers, tricksters. Others called them honest, hardworking, persecuted. He was favoring the former right now as he watched the short, nearly naked man wandering in what may have been a dance. Cimozjen’s eyes locked onto the bottle the man was waving around and unconsciously licked his lips. He watched the man stumble and sing for a few moments, perplexed.
“Let’s not have a sniffle,
Let’s have a bloody good cry
And always remember the longer you live,
The sooner you’ll bloody well die”
“What the hell is this?” asked Kurios. This caused the Ryn to pivot on his heel and turn to face the Human, lowering one hand to his stomach and the other outwards, holding the bottle upright. He bowed at the waist, nearly touching his toes with his tail twitching upwards to counterbalance him. Even so, the white-haired man almost tumbled over, laughing and taking a few unsteady steps towards Cimozjen when he righted himself.
“‘Ello there, mate! Did ya come ta get away from it all, too? Welcome! Ta, uh…” the Ryn looked around, gray eyes squinting before coming back to the Dark Jedi. “Where is we again?”
“This is Felucia,” started the man, eyes tracking the waving bottle. He could smell the whiskey, now that he was this close. “Can I—”
“Right! Fe-fe-feluuuucia, aye. Oh, where’s me manners mate?” The Ryn attempted another bow, this time falling sideways into the dust, laughing at himself.
“Look at the coffin with golden handles
Isn’t it grand boys to be bloody well dead?”
The man on the ground took another swig as he finished singing once more, wiping at his lips and looking up at nothing. Kurios felt an underlying sadness beneath the Ryn’s celebratory nature and wondered if he wasn’t interrupting a wake being held by the strange little man. He reached down to help the man to his feet, uncertain as to why. His vision had led him here, there was something to be gained.
“Right, uh, yeah, me name is Kobleu. Bleu. Kordath Bleuuuu,” managed the Ryn, finally, reaching for the hand coming down to him. It was Bleu’s turn to be confused when the Human’s eyes twitched towards the bottle, and the Dark Jedi’s hand twitched. The bottle was jerked from Kordath’s hand, and into Cimozjen’s, who took a long pull from it, sighing in contentment.
Kordath struggled to his feet, staring in disbelief at the man, who blinked his way out of a state of euphoria and seemed to focus first on the bottle, and then the Ryn.
“I, huh, sorry, friend, I didn’t really mean—” Kurios was still so stunned by his own action that he wasn’t able to move himself out of the Arconan’s way. Kordath bowled into him with a shout, taking them both into the dirt and dust. Cimozjen lost hold of the bottle, and watched it with a sense of sorrow as it to traveled towards the ground, only for a gray, white tuft-ended appendage snag it out of the air. “How did you just—” he tried to ask, when Bleu punched him in the face.
The two struggled, and the Dark Jedi found himself at a very odd disadvantage. Hand to hand combat wasn’t his forte and the drunken Ryn seemed to have more limbs then he should, throwing elbows and kneeing him wherever a blow could be landed. At one point he was certain the smaller man tried to use his nose to peck an eye out. Out of the corner of one eye he saw the tail gently set the bottle on the ground, out of reach of both men.
“Ya do nae just take another man’s drink without askin’!” ranted the near-naked Ryn as he flailed at the Human. “Man can nae even mourn properly,” grumbled Kordath. He felt the Force surge through and around his wrestling partner, Bleu went loose, relaxing his body for what was to come, though he didn’t know what it would be. It felt as if a pair of hands dug into his coat of hair from the back and pulled him backward, hard. He tumbled with it, ending up face down in the dirt and spitting.
“Bit o’ peace was all I wanted,” he sighed, “did nae want no trouble.”
Positive Takeaways
This particular line gave me a chuckle but it also represents the strongest part of this post, which was how well you integrated both character's aspects into the story. You even used one of your opponent's aspects as the basis for him being at the venue.
Can Be Improved
This comma should be a semicolon.
Also I struggled with this post and the whole "vision" thing. I know you were using your opponent's aspects but he only has Farsight +1 which says it grant vague feelings but not concrete details. I'm not counting this as a realism error because the scenario is vague enough that it doesn't have to involve Force power usage. He could have just had a random dream about Felucia that he's misinterpreting and Kordath being there could have been coincidence. It was a necessary plot device to get the characters to the venue so it ended up working out for you. Just be wary in the future that some character aspects don't always line up with the skills/Force powers a character has.