“Is he ready?” Kelly Mendes asked as she watched with skepticism from a shaded window of a control tower. Overhead the ship known as the Idiot’s Array, home to the Wildcards Battleteam, had launched pods just outside the mustafar facility. Below she saw Fenrir exit the tower doors and make his way to a suitable spot to prowl.
“I’ve seen him kill,” Tu’Quan Varrick replied, “And he’s been wanting to take a stab at the Jedi to prove himself ever since he first held a training saber.”
“That doesn’t mean he’s ready,” She retorted.
“No, but he will buy us enough time to get the cargo loaded for transport."
The candidate was taken from his pack upon discovery of potential Force sensitivity. Not only would he receive training in the ways of Sith, but Kelly was unsure or not if he should be considered for the Inquisition. He used the Force like a predator, but unfortunately also fought like an animal. If he succeeded, however, maybe she’ll take him to serve under Marick rather than be another pet under the Dread Lord. Fenrir knew this, and understood how important it was now that he show her he was worthy. He will bring back a Jedi’s lightsaber, no matter what.
“Sound off, everyone,” Jael called into his comlink. He counted all five pods making a successful landing within the mining facility. The mission was to intercept rare metals that were being stolen from one of the mining facilities. The owner of the business reached out when the Collective refused to be of assistance, which gave Odan-Urr the opportunity to make an alliance with the industry. It was also learned that wanted individual Kelly Mendes, who was a high ranking inquisitor, was also on the scene. She was to be killed or captured in addition to stopping the transport of goods.
“In position,” Luna said on the roof of a mining building. Her purpose was to scout for any third party intrusions as well as remain nearby as a field medic.
“Standing by,” Tarvitz said from above the atmosphere of Mustafar. He was concealed within his N-1 starfighter to intercept any reinforcements in space or to engage if the high priority targets were to manage an escape.
“I’m here, so is Droveth,” Creon called in with a nod to Droveth. The two were interceptors, clearing a path for Jael Chi’ra and Eris Okami to try and shut down the delivery process technologically. Droid labor was the primary force behind the Plaguean operation, to which was Jael and Eris’ specialty. Jael was to follow the west end behind Creon, and Eris to follow Droveth across the river of lava on the east end. Both were to make their way to the loading bay and then meet at the center tower in hopes to kill or capture Inquisitor Mendes.
“Mia, are you there?” Creon called in his helmet.
“Yes boss, i’ve landed,” a woman’s voice came back through the link. Mia, short for Military Intelligence Analyzer, landed Creon’s vessel dubbed the ‘War Table’ just 30 kilometers outside of the mission site. She linked Creon’s HUD in his helmet with the Electronic Warfare Suite in order to feed him information relevant to the mission as the need would arise.
Creon and Jael made their way through the seemingly abandoned mining facility. Everyone practiced radio silence, even when encountering conflict. There were some few security droids placed by the Plagueans, but nothing Creon wasn’t able to dispatch quickly and efficiently. It wasn’t until they reached a railed bridge connecting two platforms did Creon raise his arms for Jael to halt and stay back. Something was off in the back of Creon’s mind. He felt a presence, but couldn’t see or hear anything.
“Do you feel that?” Creon asked Jael through his comlink.
“Yeah.”
“Hold back for a moment, let me check it out,” He replied. The soldier took slow steps along the bridge and held up his WESTAR-M5 to aim while scanning for any signs of movement or life. There was something here, something dark…
“Show yourself,” Creon called out. He wasn’t entirely sure if there really was anything out there. But he knew not to ignore warnings from the Force before. His suspicions were confirmed when Fenrir appeared from seemingly nowhere before him on the bridge. It looked more beast than man to Creon, but he couldn’t catch a read on it. His senses seemed off.
Creon reached out with the Force to simply throw the creature aside, but he felt his connection dampered, as if under some massive weight that wouldn’t allow him to produce the desired effect. His ability to utilize the Force was being tampered with. Creon didn’t like it, but knew it wasn’t the only tact at his disposal. He aimed the blaster rifle, but stopped before firing when a energy bubble formed itself around the beast. It then drew vibroclaws along it’s arms and grinned with a bloodthirsty hiss.
“Yeah no,” Creon said and launched from his grenade launcher a round that caused a massive explosion on the bridge just where his opponent had stood. He let three more rounds go off just for safe measure.
“Everything okay?” Jael’s voice called in his helmet.
“Take the scenic route,” Creon replied. He clicked his heels together to activate his thruster boots to guide him on the other side of the bridge. This was another Force sensitive, so he needed to check for a confirmed kill before giving the all clear.
Positive Takeaways
I absolutely adore the set-up here. Very rarely in the ACC will you find such a natural and perfectly free-flowing scenario to set-up a fight. The inclusion of other characters, each with their own goals and motivations, really makes the setting feel alive. This really did a lot to draw me in to the story.
Can be Improved
A number of small syntax mistakes, but nothing that particularly ruined the story.
A small realism mistake was noticed when Creon was able to sense Fenrir approaching through the Force. Fenrir's Concealment skill should have easily allowed him to hide his Force signature and approach undetected in that way.
As much as I love the story, I did feel much more could have been done with the actual, physical setting. Mustafar is a very dramatic, dangerous, and dynamic place. It's covered in complex factories filled with roaring machinery, boiling rivers of lava, and constant geothermal activity. Having the battle take place on a relatively bland, metal bridge connecting two of the facilities feels like a waste, and the combat never really moves away from this bland location.