Prackx was becoming very angry with her opponent. When she had seen his age she had been hoping for a quick and easy resolution, but Magik’s defence was far more stubborn than she had been expecting. The Arconan also seemed to be trying to move out of reach of the Juggernaut’s lightsaber, but Granta stayed as close as she could; she had Magik exactly where she wanted him.
Shadows grew longer and longer as the two suns started to disappear over the horizon, but neither Sith seemed interested in anything but the fight as day gave way to night. The cool evening air wasn’t enough to hide the fact that Magik was starting to feel fatigued.
She just keeps going! the Arconan thought to himself as he felt his arms starting to grow heavier.
Sensing her enemy’s discomfort, Prackx guided the Force through her body, allowing it to lighten her movements. She attacked the tiring Magik with a renewed vigour, her powerful blows now augmented with a dexterity that defied the Juggernaut’s size.
Desperation started to appear in Magik’s movements. He continued to steer his azure blade in an effort to defend against the determined Granta, but the change in speed, combined with Prackx’s seemingly unrelenting strength and sheer expertise with a lightsaber left him second guessing every single attack. The odds seemed firmly against the Arconan, but he wasn’t going to simply roll over and allow Prackx to win.
Magik took a couple of steps back, and as his opponent moved forward, he kicked out at Prackx’s rear leg, hoping to catch her off guard. The female stumbled briefly, allowing the Arcanist a few seconds to put some distance between the two of them. He only had a few moments to try something before Granta would close the gap again, but he’d already decided exactly what he was going to do.
Tapping the projectile launcher on his wrist several times, the younger Sith watched on as Prackx swatted the disks out the air with her lightsaber. The extended distraction gave him enough time to head back to the steps.
Granta spotted the fleeing Arconan and gave chase.
“You’re going nowhere!” she yelled.
Puffing and panting heavily, Magik ignored the female and started making his way downward. He could just about see his ship, but he could already hear Prackx’s boots stomping somewhere behind him.
“Oh. You want to go to your ship? Let me help you!” Granta taunted, extending her right arm outwards. Calling out to the Force once again, she nudged the Arcanist just enough to knock him off balance. Magik tumbled down the stone steps, landing in an uncoordinated heap at the bottom. His ship was only a short walk away, but as he climbed back to his feet, pain radiated from his left foot.
As the Arconan started to limp on what he hoped was only a sprained ankle, Prackx reached the bottom of the steps, still holding her lightsaber.
“No clever words for you. Just your death,” the Juggernaut hissed, putting herself between Magik and his ship. The male activated his own lightsaber again, but fatigue and pain hampered him as he tried his best to move into a defensive stance.
Granta attacked, throwing every ounce of her strength into an almighty slash. The Arcanist raised his blade ready to parry, but the sheer power of the strike knocked his lightsaber aside with apparent ease. Moments later, the crimson blade sliced through Magik’s chest, cutting through bone, tissue and organs as though they were hot butter. The younger Sith was dead even before he hit the ground.
As she headed back to Polarising Personality, Granta Prackx allowed herself a smirk, but one thing was troubling her.
Was this a Collective trap? Or is someone else behind all this? she wondered.
Positive Takeaways
Motivations
I like how the post gives both participants a reason for being at the venue, even if it is the same reason for them both. I would say that more explanation as to why Prackx was so triggered Magik insisted on something that she attacked him could improve the post as it feels like it comes because the post was coming to an end and the post needed to have something to do with combat in it.
Can Be Improved
Lack of Action
The post suffers from a lack of action, with there only being one incredibly brief and minor engagement in the entire post. I don’t want to be THAT Judge, but this is the Combat Center, and even in the first post you need to write more than that. I would suggest making sure you have more time to write the post so that you can include more action as well as assessing the character sheets of both characters so that you know what makes sense to write.