The air was cold and sterile on his burning skin, as cold and sterile as everything that lied beneath it, down to his very core. Like the heat that had gathered in his muscles and flushed his skin as he worked, there was passion and anger, a fury unfathomable, built and stoked and stored; but directing it was not wrath, but cruelty. He was a sword, steel tempered by forge flames, hard and cold and sharp as it rose from the ashes and embers.
James Malum, as few knew him by, pulled himself up slowly yet again in another deliberate heave, muscles bunching, abdomen taut, breath a short, sharp hiss. He lifted his chin over the bar he grasped and then lowered himself back down slowly, feeling the pull and sting of life in every fiber of tissue cording his triceps and deltoids. The thrum of his heart, the force of his breathing, all reminded him of being alive, with his blood hot and sweat dripping into his eyes. Not like battle, not even close. Not like having a world shatter at his fingertips. Nothing like the completeness, the satisfaction, of obliterating thousands of lives or snuffing just one, just because he could, just because if he couldn't have it his way, then nobody would.
But it was something.
James came to the training centers on Arx for something. For time to replenish himself, to build up his dark desires and furies, stoking coals in his stomach to smolder. He'd use all that rage, later. He'd leap from shuttles or buildings, he'd tear through legions, he'd do anything, everything, alone or with a squad under his command. He'd use it, deliberate and brilliant, a cold smile on his face all the while, and he'd be victorious; and then he'd do it again.
But that meant training, and there were few better places. Arx was a cold world, where nothing could be trusted. He found it suited him, he who trusted nothing, not even himself, who kept enemies close and friends distant. His Clanmates didn't bother him here, with pesky musings of camaraderie, and he didn't have to be concerned with logging reports with his sergeants or any other unit assigned to him. He could simply be, saber or blade in hand, a Master of his form, a true Knight.
He had no desire for peace, but he enjoyed the simplicity at times like these, the quiet—
"HEY, ASSHOLE. Quit holdin' onto the bar like it's the dick you don't know what to do with and move already. Some of us are here to work."
The young Knight's head turned suddenly to see an older woman standing across from him, arms crossed in impatience, hip cocked. Her visible skin was covered in scars, her dark hair pulled back in a short tail, narrow eyes slitted at him. She wore full combat apparel, weapons hanging off of her. Despite the abundance of other hand-bars just like the one he used in the nearly unpopulated training center, she was obviously waiting for him.
James arched one cool brow, firing back, "You don't seem ready to train. You're supposed to have proper equipment for a gym." His tone was indulgent despite his stern expression, like speaking to a child or idiot.
"First round's full-kitted, second is stripped down," replied the other Human, not backing away or removing her glare. "If you can't run under the weight of your own kark, you can't run at all, and you're frakking useless. Now move, before I make you."
The Sith outright barked a laugh at that, a coughing sound with only strangled mirth, so often was it unused. But he couldn't help it. He sensed no strength in the Force from the woman, meaning she was one of those mundanes in the Brotherhood ranks kept around for chattel. What a disrespectful Clan she must have been from, and how mistaken to challenge him. Mundanes were such strange creatures, unconcerned with the darkness that slithered and wove among them, unable to smell it or feel it in their bones like he could.
He decided then, as he dropped from the workout machinery, that this one would learn, in a minute or two.
Not deigning to look at her or reply, James strode over to the locker area and wiped himself down, feeling eyes still on him, prickling down his spine. He ignored it, dressing in his SpecForce armor again and donning his arms with the efficiency that had been carved into him. All but the knife he'd already had on him, anyway; he was never without a weapon.
When he turned back, the woman had not taken up the equipment, despite her nattering about it. Instead she was watching him, predatory. If only she knew who the real predator in the room was.
"You think you can make me do anything?" the feared Knight called, raising his voice to echo across the space, the way his will echoed across the ether of the Force as he reached out into it and gripped the rack of training equipment and weaponry near where she stood. "You're not even worth this."
Snapping his arm across his body, he flung the entire rack and all its accoutrements in a God's grasp, the invisible kinetic force slamming the items into the woman. James' smooth-planed, spry features curled in a remorseless, feral little smirk.
But, wait—
The Palatineian stared, blinking his cerulean eyes. She'd— dodged? No, not entirely, she was on the ground, a large bruise already blooming across most of her face and nose and lips split, but she was regaining her footing and—
She howled. With laughter. She rolled her head back and guffawed, rising from her crouch with grace and swaying, stretching. Like a waking nexu. With an air of ease she shucked off her gloves and dropped her gunbelt, the items falling into the mess around her along with the broken shelf and wooden weapons. Next went more of her armor, pads falling so she was down to a skintight bodysuit. When she was finished, she stepped out of the mess and prowled towards him, stopping a few meters away. She rolled her shoulders and cracked her neck and her knuckles, flexed her arms and sank into a fighting stance. James watched it all in disbelief, noting the number of scars appearing with each movement.
She twitched a finger at him. Obscenely.
"C'mon, baby boy. My husband-honey just decided to go off awhile and I could use a reeeal good time. I saw you ain't got a scar on ya. Lemme pop that Alderaanian cherry."
His face was only hot from his earlier workout, surely. James reeled only a moment before quickly recalibrating, a necessity as she suddenly charged at him. His heart fluttered with a warning from the Force, dark whispers heralding pain, and then a kick was cracking into his side with explosive strength.
The Sith hit the mats with a soundless scream, all the air knocked out of him while the ache radiated up through his chest and down his groin. Had he not put on his armor, he could tell, she might have just broken his ribs.
"Son of a banshee," the Knight gasped as he struggled to his knees only to flatten himself again, cheek pressed to sweat-steeped plastic, to flee the crescent kick that followed the first. The woman swept over him, and he shoved up as her leg trailed away, throwing his hands out to shove her off-balance.
She grunted but toppled with the attack, rolling over her shoulders even as she hit the ground hard to spring back up. Her face had purpled now, but the swelling almost made her look happy.
Two fists raised in front of her. She taunted again, "Aww, baby boy, don't be like that. You were talking so big earlier. Why don'tcha show me what you can do with that saber? I promise I can show you a few new tricks too."
Well, if she wanted to die so badly, he'd oblige. All humor gone and impatience rising in its place, James grasped his lightsaber and activated the blade. The crimson light erupted, straight and deadly, primed for her throat. He cared little for the center's rules.
"That's better. Oh, and you can call me Mrs. Tameike, by the way. What do I call you, huh? A snack?" She cackled again. He couldn't tell whether she was flirting or mocking, trying to needle him into confusion, but he wouldn't let it work any further. He'd annihilate her.
"I'm more than you could ever be," James replied coldly, and then shot forward with the Force thrumming in his bones, a bullet from a gun.
Positive Takeaways
Story
You do a good job of establishing motives for the characters being in the location for the conflict to occur. This is transitioned into providing motives for combat to happen and is something you should take care with, though done well in this instance. Something you’ll want to make sure you aren’t doing is making sure a character is fighting when they wouldn’t.
Can Be Improved
Syntax
I’ve highlighted the above passage because accoutrements is a non-American English spelling while the rest of the post uses American English. Making sure you use the same variant throughout is crucial as it enables the reader to keep track and breaking from this can be jarring. If you aren’t sure of if a word has an alternate spelling, I would suggest looking it up to be sure.