Most sane people avoided places like this, but then again, Rasilvenaira StormRaven had never claimed to be entirely sane. As she made her way further into the rancor graveyard, the Sith smirked as the bones around her reminded her of a trip with a wookiee who wanted to use her as bait for a rancor hunt. She marveled at the sheer number and evident age of some of the remains. However, she reminded herself that she was not there for sightseeing. Dust and the scent of death and decay permeated the air but she hardly noticed. The assassin had long since grown numb to the scent of death, and whether it was new or old made even less difference.
Carefully weaving and sneaking between the hulking remnants of once terrifying predators, the Warlord presented a lithe, slender form. She became a darker shadow slipping through the almost perpetual gloom and shadow of the rancor graveyard. Rasilvenaira was dressed entirely in black with nothing to reflect light or catch the eye of an enemy unless they happened to spot the exposed skin of her face. The Sith had chosen to leave her cloak behind since it would be more of a hindrance in such a place.
StormRaven moved silently, her senses alert as her dark eyes searched for the one she’d been sent to eliminate. A mirthless grin tugged at the corner of her lips when she remembered her mission.
“I have a job for you,” her Quaestor had said.
She had started to refuse, to remind the younger Sith that she was retired now, or so she liked to tell people.
“It’s Taldryan’s Proconsul.”
Rasilvenaira’s extreme dislike for all things Taldryan was hardly a secret, and that knowledge had been used well. With those three words, the crafty young Quaestor of Imperium had succeeded in luring the typically reclusive Warlord back into action.
The Sith rolled her shoulders and dropped lower behind a large rib cage. Though she would never admit it to anyone, Rasilvenaira did enjoy the thrill of the hunt and had truly missed it. Maybe she would actually give up her self-proclaimed retirement after all.
Her right hand tightened on the leather wrapped grip of the dark double-bladed dagger, the Arashi-Kumori. Like Rasilvenaira’s clothes, her weapon offered no hint of reflection to betray her presence and it was also far more silent than the iconic weapon of the Sith that rested at her hip. She stalked forward, moving with a feline, predatory grace as she sought out her target.
A brief flash of light drew her attention and the Warlord altered her path to move toward it. As she got closer, Rasilvenaira was able to make out the diminutive form of the Aleena. Justinios was just putting away what looked like a datapad which would have accounted for the bit of light she’d seen. He bent down to continue working on something, but Rasilvenaira was unable to make out exactly what since there were some large bones blocking part of her view. She shrugged, it didn’t really matter to her what the Taldryanite was researching here.
Slowly, the assassin crept closer, carefully concealing her presence as she sought to get within range to make a quick strike. Suddenly, Rasilvenaira sprang into motion as she lunged forward, the wicked blade of the Arashi-Kumori aimed for the Aleena’s back.
At the last moment, the small Proconsul dove to one side, evading the strike and leaving the deadly blade to slice nothing but empty air. Surprised at not feeling her blade hit its mark, the Sith mentally cursed and adjusted her plans as she straightened up again.
Well damn, the intel did say the little bugger was quick, she thought to herself.
The sound of a saber igniting behind her caught the Warlord’s attention and she spun around to face Justinios. A cold grin appeared on her face as dark eyes studied her opponent. She switched the Arashi-Kumori to her left hand and drew her saber with her right. The molten silver blade snapped to life and Rasilvenaira’s obsidian hued eyes met the Proconsul’s gaze.
“Seems this might be fun after all, since you don’t want to stand still and make this easy. Fine with me.”
Rasilvenaira spun the saber with a graceful motion of her wrist before settling her grip on the hilt. She grinned as the Aleena started to move. Justinios leapt into motion, aiming an energetic strike at the Warlord’s head as he flipped in mid-air. StormRaven twisted and brought her own saber up to block, and as the Aleena landed, she slashed out with the poisoned blade of her Arashi-Kumori. The Taldryan Proconsul quickly sidestepped just narrowly evading the cruel blade’s bite.
He recovered and spun, dark blue saber taking a swipe at the Warlord’s legs. The attempt was met with a low chuckle as Rasilvenaira flipped backwards, and turned to keep her eyes on him. She was far too familiar with that strategy. After all, an opponent’s height became irrelevant if they were on the ground. It did amuse her that, for once, she was actually the taller one in a fight.
The Sith reached out to the ebbing pulse of the Dark Side that flowed through the graveyard around them and gestured with the hand still holding the double-bladed dagger. An invisible fist slammed into the small form of the Savant, knocking him into a pile of dry bones and debris.
Rasilvenaira’s eyes glittered with pure malice as she spun her saber again, the low thrumming hum seeming to echo the malicious nature of its wielder.
Positive Takeaways
Not only was your use of descriptive language to paint the scene exceptional but the post as a whole was well-paced and balanced. Opening posts present a challenge of how to balance exposition (the why of the conflict) with scene setting and action. You managed to blend all those necessary elements near seamlessly and all within a word cap, no small feat. The flashback of Ras talking to her Quaestor was especially well done.
Can Be Improved
While I appreciate you kept the narrative focus on Rasilvenaira’s perspective and what she actually knew, I would have liked to see a little more of Justinios in this post. Something like a line of dialogue or a tidbit about why he was on the planet would have been sufficient. This is a very minor quibble.