Scudi Ferria hadn’t been to Coruscant before. It was something of a culture shock for her. Still, Level 1313 was more like New Raxulon than most of what she’d heard about the planet so it would make a good enough base. Scudi had been sent here by her new boss, a Kaminoan by the name of Archenksov. He had asked Scudi to scrub some data from a few databases. It was a simple enough job, though why she needed to come to Coruscant was a bit of a mystery. There was certainly more modern technology than she was used to dealing with, but as a travelling mechanic she could fix or adapt pretty much any piece of technology she came across. Droids bustled around the level, carrying out various tasks for their owners. Those would make valuable tools if Bastion ever went down. Scudi was a little paranoid at the best of times, so her boss sending her into the Core Worlds reeked of an ambush. But who would be caught in the trap?
Scudi wasn’t exactly known for her physical prowess. She was more of a brain than a brawn type of person. Maybe that was it. Perhaps she was being set up to learn how to deal with situations she couldn’t avoid. It was no doubt a fruitless endeavour, and Scudi had a very particular set of skills, skills she had acquired throughout her life. It would be interesting to see if the person being used to teach her a lesson even knew what they were doing. Scudi continued to keep her eyes focused on her datapad, looking for any vulnerable systems she could take control of. It would at least add some mental stimulation into an otherwise dull mission.
Something, or rather someone, caught Scudi’s attention. They were undoubtedly brave, to have two lightsabers so visible down on this level. The manly figure appeared to be no taller than six foot tall, and his hair could’ve been more neatly presented. But it was the lightsabers Scudi focused on. These weren’t some standard issue like she’d seen in the Combat Center, whoever this man was, he had funds to throw around. That was something Scudi could use. Setting down her datapad, the Chiss motioned for the lightsaber wielding Human to join her. He didn’t seem to take notice, so Scudi motioned again, a little more urgency in her movements. That managed to grab the attention of the man, who proceeded to walk across the duracrete surface to Scudi.
“I know why you’re here, do you?” Scudi probed, hoping she could resolve this without violence. Archenksov would either be mad or proud that she managed to avoid having to waste a potential resource. She picked up her datapad in her right hand as she stood to face the man.
“Someone has been tampering with databases, removing me from them more specifically. I was told the culprit was on this planet. So I’m here to make them regret getting involved in my business.” Baelor responded, unsure if this much taller woman was who he was looking for or if she at least had information.
“I can give you the answers you seek and a whole lot more, will you walk with me?” Scudi slid a hand over Baelor’s right shoulder as she spoke, the Human looked at her with a look of surprise on his face.
“I will come with you, but don’t try anything, or you’ll regret it.” Baelor took Scudi’s hand off the back of his shoulder and awaited her next move, already knowing what his would be.
“Very well then, follow me.” Scudi had hoped Baelor would have gone along with it a little more, even if she figured he wasn’t at all interested. But this was life, not like shows on the Holonet, of which Scudi was an avid watcher. The black-haired Chiss turned away from the lightsaber user and made sure to walk with a little bit of a swagger, she may have failed to calm Baelor completely, but as long as his mind wasn’t focused on harming her, she’d be alright. Scudi pulled her datapad in front of her and brought up a map. There was a nice little spot she could use to form a gap between them if things went south.
Scudi suddenly saw a lightsaber fly past her. Baelor was close enough he could have surely hit her, perhaps he had anticipated her attempt to escape and sought to throw her off her gameplan. The lightsaber’s hilt struck the access panel, bringing the door down and leaving Scudi with a need to improvise. But improvising required time and that was something Scudi didn’t have. She tried to run, but the Jedi leapt over her, blocking the way she had wanted to go. Scudi took out her saberstaff and ignited it. By now, the lightsaber Baelor had thrown had returned itself to his hand. The mercenary stayed on the defensive, allowing Baelor to come at her, it would save her some energy, for all the good that would do her. Baelor had the upper hand, a vastly more experienced combatant, he aimed his blade at carefully considered angles. Scudi had no choice but to back away, she was up against a wall as her feet shuffled backwards as quickly as they could. Scudi was trapped, and with lightsabers ignited she wasn’t going to make it out of Level 1313 without significant wounds if she made it out at all. Knowing this, she deactivated the saberstaff, prompting a look of confusion from the Jedi.
“If you must harm me, which I get the feeling your primal urges are saying you do, how about we set weapons aside? After all, surely you’re smart enough to realise I’m more valuable to you alive than dead. Sure, you can get added back into those databases I erased you from, but that’s just the start of where we could go. What do you say, no weapons?”
Positive Takeaways
This begrudgingly brought a chuckle in the same manner as a dad joke. However, the humor was well-placed to break up a block of exposition.
The overall strong point of this post was getting the reader to understand and get invested in Scudi as a character.
Can Be Improved
Story-wise this post jerked the reader around a bit. The premise of Scudi possibly being set up by Archensov is introduced and then the “database” conflict between Scudi and Baelor has a strange set of stops and starts for the rest of the post. The sequence of events could have been streamlined better to form a smoother ramp up in conflict/action rather than the up and down flow of the post as written.