The first grenade passed the halfway point between the two men, the second mere moments behind it. Terran couldn't see the smirk beneath the Jedi's helmet, but he could sense the smug satisfaction radiating off him. Tarvitz gestured perfunctorily with his saber and the grenades reversed course. The Kiffar acted instinctively, dropping his rifle and raising both hands towards the incoming explosives.
The grenades stopped in mid air, their flight arrested between the two combatants. To an onlooker, the two men might have been one more pair of statues decorating the hall, but the air roiled with the Force. As the contest took an ever larger chunk of his concentration, Terran could feel his bodily control slipping. Red tendrils of pain snaked their way along his nerves and ate at his awareness. He grit his teeth and pushed back. And still the Jedi dripped arrogance and satisfaction.
"You want to die. You deserve it." The words were confident, the gesture from the Jedi's offhand no less so. And they were enough to break the Arconan's concentration.
Terran dove to the right, using the Force to push the grenades to the left. They sailed just past him, and he scrambled behind a fallen pillar as they exploded. A cloud of debris spread through the hall, obscuring his vision, and his ears rang with the blast. When the air cleared, Tarvitz was gone.
Sithspit!
Growling with effort, the Kiffar staggered to his feet against the pillar. He willed his blaster rifle back to his hands, then reached behind him and clipped it to the straps beneath his cloak. He opened up to the Force and felt it refreshing him, then he soothed the tendrils of pain that had begun to creep slowly back into his conscious mind.
As he walked back to where Tarvitz had last stood, his eyes picked out subtle signs of dislocation. They told a tale if one knew how to listen. The bounty hunter had been listening for years, and he followed in the Jedi's wake.
He could feel him ahead, and above, crouched on the mezzanine. Though his presence was dimmed, Terran's Force senses had been honed by decades of long practice and few could conceal themselves from the erstwhile Jensaarai. The Kiffar's eyes were drawn to the statue in front of the mezzanine, its head obscuring the balcony railing, and he smiled.
He strode toward the fallen pillar that bridged the balcony and the ground. It was on the opposite side of the balcony from the Kiffar, the statue in between, and when the stone behemoth fell, pushed by a combination of physical might and telekinetic power, only the birds circling above felt any surprise.
Terran leaped into the air, flicking his wrist to bring his saber to one hand as he unholstered a blaster pistol with the other. His feet hit the falling statue's head and he springboarded off of it, flipping in the air before landing on the mezzanine, his amber saber snap-hissing to life. He moved with preternatural speed, and a yellow blade flared to life, batting it away.
The pair swung in near-unison, Tarvitz battering at Terran's defenses as the Kiffar slid away, his blade twirling the Jedi's to the side before slipping past Tarvitz's. The Odanite lunged forward, beneath the amber blade, and planted a shoulder in the Arconan's midsection. Terran tumbled back against the railing, gasping for air, and squeezed off a volley from his WESTAR-35. Tarvitz struck away the bolts and they deflected wildly, but they bought Terran the time he needed to catch his breath.
The Arconan raised his blade in a high guard and lunged at his opponent, beating a staccato rhythm against the yellow saber. The Odanite tried to push him back, pressing for advantage with overwhelming force, but each time the Kiffar loosed another volley from his blaster, keeping Tarvitz off-balance. The pair were evenly matched in skill, but the Human outmassed the Kiffar and both of them knew it. Even with his blaster keeping the Odanite off-balance, even drawing on the Force to match Tarvitz blow for blow, Terran could feel himself tiring.
Without warning, a cylinder detached from the Arconan's waist and sailed towards the Human. Tarvitz acted on instinct, throwing himself away from the projectile, even as he realized his own mistake. Terran aimed without thought, his blast hitting Tarvitz in the wrist as the ion grenade popped off uselessly. Static electricity filled the air, causing the hair along the Kiffar's forearms to stand on end, but he ignored it as he strode forward. The Jedi's blade fell from his fingers, going dark and clattering uselessly to the floor, even as Tarvitz landed in a heap. Terran kicked the lightsaber dismissively, knocking it to the floor below. Tarvitz clumsily drew a battered armory saber with his uninjured hand, but a surge from the Force let Terran batter it away, sending it to join the other saber on the floor.
Terran pointed his amber blade at the Odanite's throat, then crouched in front of him and pulled off the helmet. When Terran spoke, his voice was barely a whisper.
"We've done this dance before, you and I. More than once. I know what you think of me. You think I betrayed our teachings. You think I failed the Jensaarai." The Kiffar sighed and shook his head. "You're wrong. They failed. They failed both of us. If they hadn't, we wouldn't be here. And if you weren't so self-righteous, you'd see that for yourself."
Terran glanced from the fallen Jedi's face to his saber and back again. The Arconan stood, the amber blade retracting, and Terran nodded to his foe. "It's time you and I stop fighting."
The Odanite drew a sigh of relief. Then Terran shot him through the throat.
Pulling the holocron from a satchel at Tarvitz's waist, he turned back towards the hall's entrance.
If you're gonna shoot a man, do it to his face.
Positive Takeaways
I’ve talked about “sense of place” before, and this post was vivid in this respect. You effectively conveyed the atmosphere of Dromund Kaas for me. Moving into the encounter between Tarvitz and Terran, you did great work showing their history and contrasting personalities and values through dialogue and exposition
Your Syntax was excellent.
This is exactly the sort of passage that makes an ACC judge go running to your loadout, and I was pleased and impressed to see the Glare Reduction helmet modification waiting for me. It’s a neat trick and shows some forethought.
Can Be Improved
The main issue here is that Terran appears to only exist for Tarvitz to bash his face in. I’m a little torn on this because that maneuver is the sort of thing a professional warrior would use to quickly subdue an opponent, but the nature of the story necessitates more give and take. This is the opening post: the majority of the match’s action is yet to come, and we’ve barely gotten into it before Terran has multiple broken bones and, as he mentions in the next post, is lucky to even still be conscious. This would have been an excellent finishing combination in your final post, but an opening this one-sided puts too much of a constraint on your opponent, and for that matter yourself.
There was also a minor typo: