It had taken Selika a moment, but she had mentally steadied herself after being caught off guard by the Dark Lord. It was as if she had been ready to push against something with all of her strength, only to find that there was nothing to resist her. She had mentally flailed for balance as Aeternus's wrath had enveloped her at every turn. His choice to momentarily shift his focus away from her, however, had given Selika the opening she needed, especially as the man before her had laid himself bare and done nothing to close his mind to her.
"This is the only weapon I need," she hissed, conjuring illusory sensation across her opponent's nerve endings.
As pain danced throughout his body, Aeternus screamed and staggered backwards. Most Sith saw illusion as something to fool the eye or the ear and neglected the other senses, treating them almost as an afterthought. Selika had always found that tactile illusions could be the most powerful, and were something she took special pleasure in. Now, Aeternus was momentarily at her mercy.
"Do you feel that?" Selika asked, rising to her feet as Aeternus gritted his teeth and grasped blindly for the Force. "For someone to feel what you're feeling now, they would have to be on fire."
Selika knew, however, that her advantage could not last. The Sith Lord would either throw off her illusion by establishing his mental defences, or use the Force to control the sensation of pain and shut it away. She needed to concoct a plan, and do so quickly. The few bystanders who had remained standing after Aeternus's outburst were now quickly fleeing the vicinity, not that any of them had been capable of providing assistance in any event. It would be the Adept and the Master, just as it should have remained. Her mind working at a fevered pace, Selika realized there was likely only one way that she could stop a warrior such as Aeternus.
Finally regaining his mental balance, the former Master at Arms swept the pain away as if washing the dust of a long journey from his body. His senses clearing, Aeternus saw that his Force-called lightning had arced to several of the lights in the area, leaving only a few pools of light separated by darkness. The Herald was standing in a doorway framed in one such light, saber at the ready.
"And yet your attack was but a momentary distraction, offering no permanent wound," Korras chided her grimly, "whereas mine will draw real blood."
A flick of his wrist sent one of Aeternus's blades leaping out from his belt, whistling through the air towards the Herald. Before the emerald blade could find its mark Selika retreated into the interior, moving more quickly than Aeternus had thought her capable of. He moved to follow her, his sabers at the ready as he crossed the threshold. The interior was a tangle of junk stacked throughout, looking like the home of the galaxy's messiest hoarder lit with flickering, intermittent light. Low walls and narrow vertical beams framed the space, the violet of Selika's blade visible in between them as she moved.
Aeternus stalked her through the building, lashing out with his blade whenever she was in reach. No matter what, however, his blade never seemed to find its mark, instead tugging its way through metal or even seeming to almost shimmer through her as the tip would graze her body. Growing frustration bubbled up within the Sith, his normal grim demeanor in combat beginning to crack. Then, finally, just as he was nearly ready to yell out in anger, she was before him.
"You finally decided to stop trying to run," he said evenly, seeing that she had reached a dead end.
"You could say that," Selika replied with confidence and raised her blade into a classic guard position.
Aeternus slashed his blade down at hers, but instead of meeting a block his weapon simply passed through hers and then her body as well with a blue shimmer. The momentum of the strike carried him through her, his body passing through hers as she seemed to vanish. Whirling, the Sith Lord saw his real prey standing several meters away framed in the door through which he had entered.
Selika smiled as she watched the dawning realization spread across his face. "You never did manage to push me out, just clamp down on the pain."
With her concentration now freed from maintaining her influence on Aeternus's mind, Selika was free to reach out with the Force more directly. Pulling against a beam that her opponent's blade had nearly severed, Selika was able to shift it just enough that the remaining metal buckled under the weight it could now no longer support. Aeternus saw in his mind's eye what was about to happen mere heartbeats before it did and called a barrier into being around him.
Selika had lead him through the building with a purpose, guiding him to damage most of the load bearing members that comprised the structure. The failure of the last beam brought the entire place down atop Aeternus, the stories above collapsing one after another. His barrier held against the onslaught, but several tons of durasteel was now piled atop him. Selika, having backed away with haste as the collapse started, now shielded herself behind a barrier of her own as dust billowed outward. She could sense that her opponent still lived, but it would take him several hours at least to dig his way out.
Pulling a comlink from her belt, Selika thumbed the device on. "Get security down here immediately, all of them. Bring the heavy weapons. I want Korras thrown off this ship the instant he crawls out from under where I buried him. And tell him that he's no longer welcome aboard the Matron as long as I'm her master."
Positive Takeaways
The opening and the set-up are expertly crafted, and you easily fit the story into the setting without missing beat. The narrative proceeds at a great pace and never feels slow or rushed, but just that perfect balance. Very well done.
Can be Improved
A few minor syntax mistakes but nothing that ruined the post.
As a general not the descriptions in the beginning paragraph were a bit repetitive. There were a lot of repeated words and phrases that could have been changed up to add more variety to the text. A good thing to look out for when writing in the future.