The Consul blinked, trying to make out his opponent in the hangar through watery eyes but she was nowhere to be seen.
Blinking the last tears from his eyes he reactivated his lightsaber while looking for a hint of where the Battlemaster had vanished to in the dim light of the wrecked hangar. She could be everywhere he mused. Knowing that it was hers to make the next move in this game, he expanded his mind to find her.
There she was.
Rian turned on his heel to find her just as she passed around a piece of what once was part of the hangar’s ceiling to face him, her lightsaber replaced with a blaster trained at him.
No there. A movement to his right caught his attention, revealing the same Lucine Vasano her armor torn up squarely over the chest stepping from behind a cover with her blaster’s business end pointed at the Consul at the same time as a third appeared on his left hand side.
Turning his gaze from one to another, Rian’s free hand moved onto his back, taking a hold of his second lightsaber. A brilliant amethyst joined the tangerine, if she wanted to step up the game, he would gladly prove her that he too hadn’t shown her all he got.
“Now that wasn’t very lady-like from you.” He mocked, still uncertain which of the three women was the real Lucine Vasano.
“And you’d call cutting my armor chivalry my dear.” The women spoke at once with a fourth Lucine Vasano joining the fray from behind him, catching the Taldrya off-guard.
“You are an amazing person Miss Vasano, there is no point in denying that your superior’s hold you in a high esteem.” Rian said to none of the women in particular as he tried to figure which one was illusion and which one was real. “You are beautiful and cunning, and I really need to apologize for having ruined your armor.”
“Are you trying to stale time, my dear?” The Lucine’s said chuckling. “Because that won’t work.”
“Well, the same could be said about you. So far you haven’t shot me either.”
“Something that can be easily corrected.” Lucine replied, the fingers on each blaster closing around the trigger.
It all played out in Lucine’s mind as she had planned, the Taldrya had no idea which of the four Vasanos was the real ones as he turned from one to another, trying to break free from the illusion. At her mental command the three copies of her pressed the trigger each unleashing a single bolt of super-heated plasma while she followed suit just the fraction of an instant later.
But it was exactly that fraction of an instant between her minds order and her body to respond that allowed the Consul to perceive which one was the real Lucine. His left hand shot forward, palm outstretched with an invisible power manifesting between himself and the discharge from her blaster, freezing the red bolt in midair like a solid wall as three of four Lucine Vasanos disappeared.
“I thought we already agreed that this sort of trick won’t work on me darling.” Rian said, over the frozen bolt.
“Touche.” she replied, smiling.
“But what if there was more than one.” With that she pressed the trigger, unleashing a fury of blaster-fire in rapid succession.
It was a gamble, normally she would leave her distracted opponent behind to fight him another day with a new carefully laid out plan but the rules for the tournament left her no choice, if only one of the bolts would penetrate his defense. Yet the Consul kept coming at her, batting away every single bolt.
Lucine tried to back away from the nearing Consul while she emptied the entire gas cartridge from her blaster, eventually she ended with her back against a large bulkhead that once had been part of the ceiling barring her way. Seeking a way out of the situation she searched her surrounding furiously as Rian kept coming at her blades, dancing in wild patterns.
The ceiling. Picking her Grappling Hook, she launched its dart shaped head blindly into the air, hoping for the best. Pushing the receiver as soon as she felt the cable hitting its mark. Holding tight to it she was lifted into the air when metal began to creak and groan above her.
It happened when she had ascended about three meters in height. A portion of the rotten ceiling gave way, sending Lucine back down. She hit the ground hard in front of Rian with her left ankle bent at an unhealthy angle. Losing her footing she stumbled into him squeaking.
“Easy.” He said, trying to support her, but Lucine shoved him aside.
“Don’t think I will give you this.” Lucine’s anger on her slippery filled her voice with sarcasm as she limped away from the Taldrya. Rian may not deserve to be treated like that though they met as opponents, he had been there catching her when she lost her ground after falling without hesitation.
“Come on, do you really want to fight your way out of this?” The Consul questioned. “You can barely stand, let alone move.”
Lucine ground her teeth as she examined her ankle. At least it wasn’t broken. He was right, she was extremely short on options, though there was one chance that part of her would regret she would take. Fueling her anger with the pain throbbing through her body her lightsaber found its way into her hand.
Turning to charge him he was already behind her, batting her blade away before lashing out with the pommel of his second blade, hitting her hard on the temple.
"I am sorry Lucine." Rian said after she went down. "It's a shame we had to meet under this circumstances."
"Maybe next time." He added, placing his comlink next to her before leaving the hangar.
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Positive Takeaways
I was initially confused by Lucine's gambit with the Old Man, and thought it seemed rather out of character for her. If she was planning an ambush, why wouldn't she strike as soon as the ruse was discovered instead of stopping to talk with Rian? But the reveal of a rare double-bluff illusion drew it all together for me brilliantly. That was a very clever piece of action writing that deserves praise.
Can Be Improved
Syntax is a problem here. There's a wide-number of systemic problems in this post that definitely impact the reading and detract from the story, and i'd recommend a more thorough proof-reading in the future. In particular the problem were mainly with punctuation, especially the dialogue punctuation, and commas throughout the post. Furthermore there were a number of run-on sentences near the end of the post that could have been cleaned up significantly.
Story-wise I felt the set-up was rather weak and really hamstrung the story. The narrative of the two of you being being set-up to fight by the Combat Master is perfectly serviceable, but rather bland. There's no overall meta-narrative to the tournament, so I felt an opportunity was lost for something more interesting. Furthermore the idea of each of you being given an "intel package" on each other robs the fight of a lot of it's surprise and tension. A good deal of excitement from a fight comes from the two combatants learning about each-other and being surprised by each other's capabilities. Just removing that possibility of that right off the bat is a disappointment, and I felt it made the fight less interesting overall.