Seer Aiden Lee Deshra vs. Peacekeeper Creon Saldean

Seer Aiden Lee Deshra

Equite 3, Equite tier, Unaffiliated
Male Human, Force Disciple, Seeker
vs.

Peacekeeper Creon Saldean

Equite 1, Equite tier, Clan Odan-Urr
Male Human, Jedi, Defender, Guardian
Hall Spring 2019 ACC Championship
Messages 2 out of 4
Time Limit 3 Days
Battle Style Alternative Ending
Battle Status Closed
Combatants Seer Aiden Lee Deshra, Peacekeeper Creon Saldean
Force Setting Standard
Weapon Setting Standard
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Venue Naboo: Jan-gwa City
Last Post 17 March, 2019 1:34 PM UTC
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Naboo Jan-gwa City

Unlike the Gungan’s submerged capital below Naboo, Jan-gwa rests partially underwater; the majority of the city remaining above the water’s surface. A waterfall runs along the cliffs behind Jan-gwa, creating a veil of mist around the base of the city’s rounded platforms. Nocturnally illuminated, domed structures encompass the center of each platform and are home to Jan-gwa’s Gungan inhabitants. Some of the these structures extend below the water’s surface, creating an anchor that keeps Jan-gwa from floating with the currents and provides shelter to hundreds of Gungans.

Etched into the cliff walls are several faces of unknown origin. Resembling a humanoid with unembellished features, these carvings are not reminiscent of the city’s Gungan inhabitants—perhaps an indication that some other civilization might have resided near the floating city.

The dark waters gave no inkling of the bounty within. Reflecting the night sky above, the slight shimmer of the moon and the glistening of stars, the surface rippled with the remnant force of a nearby waterfall. Aiden Lee Deshra sat at the water's edge, his scanner passing over the glittering pools. The intelligence his trusted friend gave him led him to this location, next to a Gungan city. The floppy-eared species lacked some basic intellect, and that made them dangerous. It was better if they were avoided.

Aiden finally located the signal he had been searching for. It was deep beneath the lively waters, waiting patiently for a worthy hand to take hold of it. The Balance Adherent stripped off his robes until he wore only a pair of shorts. Closing his eyes, Aiden focused on his body. He inhaled as he felt the Force filling him. As he exhaled he felt his internal temperature rise slightly in preparation for the cold water. Opening his eyes, Aiden gathered his aqua breather from his robes and placed it in his mouth. The Arconan dove into the pool of water.

The water beneath the surface was chilling to the bone. Once again, Aiden felt truly blessed to have the Force’s aid, his core temperature regulated by his concentration on the connective energy. Looking around under the water, the Arconan was intrigued by the illuminated city. While only partially submerged, the bioluminescence of the Gungan City was powerful enough the brighten even these dark waters. The many species of aquatic life he was seeing was astounding. Under the water's surface was a whole new world.

After a few more minutes of concentrated swimming, Aiden found the small alcove he’d been looking for. The records his associate found spoke of the hidden treasure he’d find there. It wasn’t going to be missed for much longer. The Gray Jedi could see a small light hidden among the rocks. He swam over and began clearing the debris. A Holocron, held in place by the surrounding rock, was freed from its underwater prison. Excitedly, he collected his prize and quickly made his way back to the surface.

Aiden soon broke free of the cold below, climbed out and onto the land. He quickly dried off and put on his robes, the Force leaving him as his internal temperature readjusted. Ready to head out, the Arconan sensed an approaching figure. Turning to face the newcomer, Aiden assessed the potential threat.

“Hello there,” the armored figure announced himself from behind his helmet.

“Sorry to be rude, sir, but I must be on my way.” The Gray Jedi responded while maintaining his distance.

Aiden turned away from the armored man and started towards his ship. The Arconan kept his prize hidden. Feeling the man's presence it became clear he was being followed.

“I don’t know what you want with me, but you’ll need to stop. If you don’t, I can’t promise you’ll walk away from this,” the Balance Adherent's face hardened as he spoke. His gaze allowed for no joking around. As much fun as a fight would be, Aiden promised Zuji he’d get the prize to her as soon as possible.

“I want nothing to do with you, Arconan. What I want is that artifact in your possession,” as the man spoke, Aiden’s eyes narrowed. “I was sent here to recover the source of the signal we picked up. I guess I wasn't the only one. That being said, I’ll take that Holocron.”

“You’ll take nothing. I found it, and it stays with me.”

The armored man let out a loud sigh before removing his mask, revealing himself to be Creon, Jedi of Odan-Urr. Aiden was quite familiar with this Jedi’s dealings. His name and renown had grown since the last war.

“That Holocron is a Jedi Holocron, created and hidden by the great Qui-Gon Jinn. It means much more to us, followers of the path of the Light Side. The Force guides us to what we need. So please, hand over that artifact.”

“I was asked to recover this, and I will,” Aiden answered, his annoyance with the Jedi increasing.

“I shall ask only one more time. That artifact belongs in the hands of a Jedi, not you or your employer. Give me the Holocron.”

Aiden had had enough. He began to concentrate as he prepared to end this quickly. Turning swiftly to meet Creon’s gaze, Aiden made eye contact and waved his fingers.

“You will walk the other way now.” Aiden’s voice dripped of the Force as he attempted to usurp command of the Jedi’s mind, causing him to disturb him no more.

As Aiden turned and ran towards his ship, Creon’s head shook. His training took over as he fought off the trickster's corruption.

Do your duty to Odan-Urr…

You will walk the other way…

Gather the artifact

You will walk away

Accomplish your goals!

Snapping to attention, Creon could feel the ache in his head, a side effect of breaking Aiden’s hold on him. He’d let this go on long enough. The Jedi took hold of his lightsaber before activating the emerald blade and rushing to close the gap between him and his enemy.

Stopping for a brief moment, Aiden accessed his comm unit.

“Viz, start the engines, I’m on my way.”

”As you command my liege.” the droids dripped with sarcasm in its response.

Feeling the rush of the Force calling out its warning, Aiden grabbed the hilt on his belt. Spinning on his heel and activating his own lightsaber, the Arconan caught Creon’s blade against his own. The two Force users saw silver and green meet, illuminating their faces.

“You will pay for screwing with my head.”

“At least your heads still there.”

The Odanite pushed Aiden backward and swung his saber in a clockwork fashion. Each blow met with the perfectly timed parry of a skilled master. The screams of plasma clashing filled the silent night air.

Do your duty to Odan-Urr… You will walk the other way… Gather the artifact You will walk away Accomplish your goals!

<Interesting> Areticus’ voice spoke into Creon’s head. <Would you like assistance?>

Creon shook his head. He wanted to see if Aiden would look into reason. Creon kept on the defensive, waiting for his opponent, watching to redirect attacks through a winding motion that was art of Soresu. He limited his focus on just the pure defensive basics of blocking and redirecting rather than looking for opportunities to retaliate.

<There are quite a few easy opportunities to end him that you’re missing, Creon.> Areticus voiced again.

“It’s not about that,” Creon hissed under his teeth. Aiden was actually taking control of the saber duel. Creon considered heeding Areticus' advice if he couldn't find a way for Aiden to listen. “Aiden, that artifact can’t leave here for a reason!” He cried out during a prolonged clash of blades and sparks.

Creon and Areticus were both sensing a sliver of who Aiden was as the dance continued. He fought as a refined duelist. It reminded Areticus in a time when he too used a lightsaber; back when he once could see the glow of his old crimson blade:

It was a curved hilt, after the Sith Makashi adherent Count Dooku; a Sith Lord that Areticus admired as well as a teacher to Qui-Gon Jinn. After hearing of this artifact, Areticus gave Creon the time of day and heard his words. Creon even claimed to know the actual ghost of Qui-Gon Jinn. Of course Areticus couldn’t resist the opportunity.

In truth, Creon had only met the maker of Qui-Gon’s holocron, not the Jedi himself. He knew him simply as "Mr. George", and he told Creon of the necessity of the Light Side of the Force. It needed to rise as equals for there to be a balance with the Dark. He wasn’t the smartest scientifically, sure, but he had a genuine empathy that Areticus would recognize. The mind of a Jedi was unrealistically pure, like a child that believed in hope for the galaxy they dwelled in.

<Twin children born under the same star in a sea of wars.>

Creon took a large jump back and activated his boots thrusters to give him a larger distance from his opponent in the direction between Aiden and his retreat. Aiden had considered dashing at the hothian ronin as he leaped, but was curious as to why his opponent wanted to create such a large distance. He got his answer when Creon traded his saber for the WESTAR-M5 on his back.

Oh no you don’t.

Aiden lashed out to Creon’s mind with an quick extension of his hand. Almost immediately after, Creon’s face showed anguish. He stared into space as if defeated from a prolonged logical debate that left him dumbfounded. He was mentally tired. He didn’t understand the complex psychological techniques that the Force could do. Using the Force for mental tricks in order to manipulate or prove one’s intellectual superiority? It was heartbreaking and immature in the eyes of the Jedi. Creon took a knee, but he did so as a soldier. He took a deep breath and honed his mind into the Force, focusing simply on the subconscious mechanical commands to move his body. His obliques turned slowly across his transverse plane while Aiden approached. There was with a thirst to continue the duel with the forsaken peacekeeper, Creon could sense it in Aiden’s emotions. Creon did his best to ignore the shadow steps of his "balanced" opponent. He took up arms and aim, just as he could hear the sound of a nearby ship approaching.

<Just 45 degrees more to your right, Creon. It should come into range soon.>

Creon trusted Areticus’ mind and put faith in that the Force was watching over him. He simply just had to keep giving hope in people, even those who turn their backs on him. The ship was coming in just in time, piloted by some droid Creon could barely see. He felt confident he could make the shot if timed correctly. However, that doesn’t mean he was ready to pull the trigger.

The hum of Aiden’s saber made the hairs on the back of Creon’s neck stirr with alertness. The Seeker stood behind the Guardian, ready to clean off the head off just another fool trying to play hero.

“It won’t work if you take it out of the lake…” Creon said with a soft tone. His pitch in voice revealed a respected fear for his life, but also the courage to take Aiden’s ship with the speed of a simple trigger squeeze on his grenade launcher. He would then be left with Areticus, and whatever angry “gods” of the Gungan’s that may be stirred.

“Pardon?” Aiden asked.

“The Holocron only works in that lake. It has to be submerged, under a particular moon hour. Only then will you speak with him... in a sort of mirror within the waterfall. It’s weird, I know. But please believe me when I say; stuffing it in a library shelf will bear no wisdom.”

<Hello Aiden.> Areticus’ thoughts echoed into the Arconan’s mind.

Aiden burrowed his frow at Creon for speaking into his mind, “What nerve you have!” He then drowned Creon in a wave of suppression to end his attempts.

<I respect your path and logic, yet you lack awareness of your surroundings.>

That shouldn’t have happened.

Aiden shouldn’t have heard this voice coming from Creon anymore. He decided to concentrate a step further on suppressing Creon’s connection with the Force. The Jedi should be powerless at this point. To guarantee it, Aiden pried harder into Creon’s mind for psychological dominance. Creon gritted his teeth and gave a small yelp. He still kneeled, but his head was high with eyes washed in tears. He wasn’t resisting the mental attack, but he also wasn’t giving into it. A knight may take a knee, but he will only bow to kings.

<I’ve known him to go through much worse, you know. Fasincating his resiliency, both in the body and mind.>

Creon rose to his feet and turned to stare at Aiden, simply un-afraid and more serious than he has ever looked. His weapon was dropped and both of his arms were open. A sense of tranquility and courage was intentionally projected.

<Would you kill a man unarmed? Such a sport you are.>

Aiden was now able to sense the direction of this alien voice. He turned to the direction to see a blinded man. He looked to be the same age as Aiden, and even Creon for that matter. His hair was black, and his eyes were covered in black cloth. Ironically, this blind man was staring into his reflection in the black waters of Naboo.

“Is he with you?” Aiden asked Creon.

“He’s my twin,” Creon admitted. Aiden released his grip on Creon’s mind. Creon sighed in relief and looked to Aiden with the hope that it finally clicked.

“Like a twin-twin?”

“Like a twin-twin,” Creon confirmed. “Though he is blind, and I see through him. In more ways than one.”

<A proposal, Aiden.> Areticus continued, only focused on the thrill of a creative and intellectual challenge. <Worry not about the “innocence” or “faithfulness” of an empathetic Jedi. Surely they cannot be as analytically tactful as you and I?> The blind seeker then walked slowly in a circle around them. <I am a duelist of the mind. Come! Allow me to be your opponent instead. Creon has already surrendered, as I’m sure you can see better than I.>

Aiden took a long look at Areticus and the Sith blade he held in his hand.

“He’s doing his mind thing, isn’t he?” Creon asked in response to the pause of eerie silence. Aiden turned back to Creon in response just in time to see the ex-odanite roll his eyes at his brother. Atleast now Aiden was starting to catch on, Creon had hoped. It would allow Creon to reach and attempt to empathize with Aiden, now that he’s been exposed to a taste of Areticus’ mind games.

“Focus on what matters, Aiden. The actual work for others that you have to do, especially when you take leadership. Bottom-up, not top-down.” Creon said.

<What will it be then? The Jedi or I? A duel of the mind? Or are you not done swinging your glowsticks at each other?>

“I do my best to keep his genius in check because I’m a bit more down to earth. If he challenges you, please do not fight him. He actually is as smart as he claims. And you do not have to fight me at all, either. I fight only when I have to, and I hate it. Please... let the artifact rest in its rightful place. The Gungans put it there for a reason, it wasn’t abandoned.”

Aiden saw a different side of Creon now, one similar to how Areticus envisioned him. Areticus never saw his twin before he went blind, but had a feeling they looked something alike. Though Areticus imagined Creon more like a leader of lions, or sometimes a shepherd's dog. Rather than a mirrored reflection of himself.

<What’s it going to be?! Mind or matter?!>

Creon looked over to Areticus but whispered to Aiden, “Don’t let him tempt you. He’s smarter than he looks and your conflict with the artifact is with me.”

Creon then took a step back and re-awoke his blade. “I’d rather we talked instead, but…” The unstable crystal core shined brightly along the waters of Jang-wa lake, causing a emerald glow under the starlight sky. He held the grip with both arms overhead, in the iconic stance of Soresu. Light from Naboo’s moon reflected off the waters and to the center crystal, causing a flickering beam of light seen from Aiden’s perspective.

“I will protect what I believe is the right thing to do.”

<A guardian he may be. Yet I always felt that the spirit of a Consular walked with him. Ever since he told me he had met the sage that preserved the Holocron of Qui-Gon Jinn. I didn’t believe him at first, but I’m about to get my chance very soon. I believe that Holocron taught Creon something. I'm quite curious to speak with the Jedi Master myself.>

Aiden considered his options at hand. He could accept Areticus’ challenge, trusting that Creon recognized the spirit of a duel and would not interfere. He could also simply listen to Creon and leave the Holocron where it was meant to reside. It would actually be easy to just tell his employers that someone else got to it first. Or he could finish the job he set out to do, and deal with Creon who stood firm before him.

This match has been closed due to disqualification. The second post greatly exceeds the cap of 1000 words.